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nk.mail

@nk.mail

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#471

Thanx for the update!

U have a knack to portray emotions beautifully!

Love

Neha 😊

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#472

Hi Manita 😊
Read part 38 loved it very much sorry i could not post for previous parts will post in detail little later
Enjoying Trespassers a lot. Keep writing whenever u get time 😊
I always love ur writing u are a great writer hats off to u 👏
Love u 🤗

Edited by k.krithika - 14 years ago

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#473

mani diii...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

loved the update very very very much...

shanak act decent in front of jai...😆 and dont show how much they were desperate...😆

jai understands their bekarar dil... and smiles...😉

shaan goes to help khanak in d kitchen... ahem ahem... he is such a sweethrt...

and everytym he goes he hugs khanak... awww...😳

and dey finally kiss...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

khanak feels bad dat they dont get much tym to talk and spend sum tym alone... awww... poor girl...

shaan comforts her... aww... cho chweet... *pulls shaan's cheeks*

this was a chotasa update... i want a long one sooonnn...

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#474

Wrong thread ! Posted by mistake !

Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#475

Hi Mani di,

When are u going to update the next part ... egarly waiting for the next update.😃

Plz Plz Plz update soon...🤗

Waiting...waiting...waiting.😃

Love u.

Pranjal.

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pooja bhattacharya

@butterfly7

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#476

i just love ur writting...i am addicted to ur ff...its damn good...thanx for dis wonderful ff...waitin for ur nxt update eagerly..

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#477

Mani read it this part again so my comment can give it some sort of justice but again I was lost in it and taken aback by its sheer brilliance and realism I could really imagine such a scene bechari khanak not knowing what to do go against her love or brother she really must have felt torn but f=getting earphones was an inspired solution lol

Aww love shaan no matter if its at the work at the office or handiwork around the house he will supervise and ensure the work is done right. Got to love him for that, and again poor khanak is worried about him being up there but is helpless and cannot show her concern lol

Then the cute talk in the kitchen the hug and kiss- haiii I love how resourceful shaan is coming up with genuine situations which will buy him time with her saying he will cut the salad/ fruit when it was already cut was genius lol

Awww I can understand their frustrations the poor RLB's cant spend time with each other as openly and as often as they could before when they were practically living with each other please mani for their sakes get them married soon lol

Eagerly awaiting the next part xx