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shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

brilliant update pls continue soon

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

oh god mani di waht was taht yaar its so good...ill love he was playing with her tesing her kill u kiss u and then khnaks covo with her bro and then hw hes overprotective but lve her and then khnaka irritaing shannn with kill u andkiss u ha ha ah thia is best part awsoemeee

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Aussiegal

@Aussiegal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Hi Mani, wonderfully written as always. Amazingly woven tale. Waitng for your next update..👏👏👏👏👏

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KrazEee

@KrazEee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Another wonderfully written update...

Loved Khanak-Jai's convo and the friendship Jai-Shaan share...very cute.

Liking Jai's character alot...he is an observer...knows alot more thn what he shows

Shan still remains the mystery character...curious to know what more he's hiding

I love how you can always keep your readers hooked by bringing up the most unexpected twists and turns...

Perfect balance of romance and seriousness all in line with the story...

very eager to know about this ragini suspense now

Update Sooon 😃

Edited by KrazEee - 14 years ago

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angel_9

@angel_9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Hey Mani di...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

awesome update loved it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

sorry no long comment this time...

(give it in detail tomorrow)

Edited by angel_9 - 14 years ago

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

when is the next update Maani?

I know u are busy ... but 2-3 updates weekend ke tho maro yaaron!!!

Plizzz...(Courtesy Khanak going back to her gaanv ka accent again 😆)

~Cheers,
Dish