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Posted: 14 years ago

Mani !!!!!

A beautiful end to an amazing day !!!
Loved how Shaan And khanak were fighting to face Jai s anger first !!!!
And how the friends called eachother names ... so cute !!!
Loved Jai s convo...protective brother and a reasonable friend !!!
So he s not sure of how the parents wud react !!!!
He did not take it light even if Shaan was his best friend !!! Did not want to take any chance with Khanak s life !!!! He was real there !!!
Loved Khanak s restlessness when Jai asked her to stay away from Shaan but loved it more when she spoke her mind !!!!
Ok my cutie pies now !!!! What can i say abt them !!!! They are so mindblowingly cute !!!
It is such a relishing experience reading ur FF !!!!
Love u
Edited by priya_cool_123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I read that thank yous b4

*edited*

no mani di... Dont leave it here... :( continue now...

And wat is the suspense of ragini now???? Are u promoting ekta's nw film ragini ka mms???? 🤣

Detail mein i'l comment later... Nw im very sleepy...

But i just loved the update... It was romantic a lil bit of serious talk... Perfect... Loved it...

Was this a short update????? Means Ur gonna update tomorow also... Eeehhh... Im super dupder excited...
Edited by Roshni_M - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
mani its like watching a movie completely:)
lovely lovely part im glad jai is wd them but d suspense is killing i so wanna know:)

plsss net update sooon:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍 am going to comment later... this is sheer bliss...
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Posted: 14 years ago
They are so comfortable with each other, she declares her seriousness for him to her bro ... sahi!!!

Pune trip, should be fun ...

Maddening, ab ye ragini ka kya chakkar hain re!!

but good twist, keeps us thinking about it... ab jaldi update karna pls

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kill u...
kiss u...
Very funny,some emotionl n main part... very rmntic...very awesm update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum mani...thanks 4 the update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update Manita! keep up the great work!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome mani di
loved the update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

how many seconds does ur 1 min have?

Oh my god..u updated..
*off to read*
will be back to comment..

*edited*
hei mani,
thought of commenting after i finish reading..but i couldn't resist..i dont want to miss writing wat i thought that instant..so started writing..
the way both dont want jai to vent out his feelings on either of them was so cute..i really thought they should talk together *n tada* shaan said that..both of them worrying abt how jai will take this..me too worried..

shaan called her 'cat' again..loved it..the way he asked her to just leave it..god..he knows all about her..he was studied her a lot..love shaan all over again..the way both felt hugging the other..shaan felt when she said she 'can' do it..n khanak felt when he read her well n asked her to leave it..*sigh*

there discussion over wat if jai asks to chose b/w friendship n love made me tense a little..but the way it changed i felt lil relaxed..nice observation by khanak n shaan gives points to khanak..that is new..but fake one..that was so cute of shaan to say that she earns a kiss for each 50 points..oh my gosh..naughty he is..even when the situation is tough one..

kya isse kahthe hain mauke par chauka marna?"I sure do lady..we should spend a few days together to allow 'your' manners to seep inside me and make me a gentleman.." u r so impossible shaan..he forced her to say that was otherwise with her thoughts.. khanak's thoughts i was savouring those lines..it was too yummy...she admitted that she wants him to kiss her..losing this game is a winning situation so she wud never mind losing..

i'm tensed now..seems to be an intense talk..oh wow..jai was waiting for her call..he is straight to the point..may be that is cos of his opinion abt shaan..he knows that they wont do anything wrong..loved jai's answer.. "Hmm,, couldn't expect less from you two. It had to be serious, if at all.."it was as i expected..haa..wat was this?"but what worries me is that.. is it for keeps or my sis is going to get hurt?"😲i was worried for a minute with jai's convo..but loved it when he said this "As far as I know that rogue, he would have never left you even if he didn't love you..it's good that he does" hahahaha..i wished to laugh loudly..shaan n jai r simply wonderful..calling each other rogue which khanak doesnt like from both of them..LOL!!!!!yay!!!!jai accepted their relation *jumping up n down in happiness*
yeh kya hai?*me so sad now*(happiness gone in less than a minute) y did Jai ask her to stay away and stop talking to Shaan for 2 months'khanak's revelation in these lines were just..i'm out of words yaar.. She became very irritated and upset at this and tears trickled down. Agitated she spoke strongly, "Just don't start all this with me, Jai..I care for everyone in our family and I have always done what all of you think is correct for me. But I become crazy when it comes to Shaan. I love him since we were teenagers''.Don't ask me to do what I can't."


yeh kya?another shock..Dr.Ragini is shaan's cousin..this update seems to be a shocker yaar..now jai knows n they r actually discussing abt that..oh god..jai guessed things.. then he should put another 2+2..reason for khanak's state of mind,her fever n not leaving jai when she was in delhi..

jai is also stubborn as her stubborn cat sis..he is asking her to just do wat he said now..to hide it from everyone..poor khanak..both the men she adores say the same thing but she doesnt know the reason..*me too scratching my head thinking of reasons*
laughed at these lines "Nothing..was thinking of days when you didn't talk at all.. you've come a long way." when jai said that..finally their convo ended in a somewhat better way..

yay!!!they r going together to pune..they need to talk..khanak would have too many questions in her head now..

ur description abt khanak from shaan's eyes is quite mouth-watering..(dont laugh at me for this comment..i couldnt resist..😳)wow..the fairy tale fairy equated to khanak..really a fairy tale..awww..shaan blushing out of embarrassment..
wow khanak playing his game to him..kill u turned to kiss u..oh gosh...mani love u... 🤗mmwwwaaa...




Ramani...do you even know that your comments are like oxygen to me...

I almost thought of wrapping it in the next update

you gave me life back !!!
Edited by -Manita- - 14 years ago

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