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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: -Manita-

Ramani...do you even know that your comments are like oxygen to me...

I almost thought of wrapping it in the next update

you gave me life back !!!

kya?thought of wrapping up in next update..😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲...i'm in total shock now..dont do that..we'll miss TressPro terribly..i couldn't imagine that its going to finish this soon..No mani..dont do that to us..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Eee ...

Your Shanak are so so so so supercuteee ... Can I just Hug them and You ... ?????

One question - Are they gonnna live together for the rest of the 2 months ????????

And Jai knew ???? WOW ... I love him !!!!!!

I really do ...

Okay I am gonnna come back and update my comments .. I want to read the 2 parts again !!!!!!

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123
Mani !!!!!

A beautiful end to an amazing day !!!

Loved how Shaan And khanak were fighting to face Jai s anger first !!!!

And how the friends called eachother names ... so cute !!!

Loved Jai s convo...protective brother and a reasonable friend !!!

So he s not sure of how the parents wud react !!!!

He did not take it light even if Shaan was his best friend !!! Did not want to take any chance with Khanak s life !!!! He was real there !!!

Loved Khanak s restlessness when Jai asked her to stay away from Shaan but loved it more when she spoke her mind !!!!

Ok my cutie pies now !!!! What can i say abt them !!!! They are so mindblowingly cute !!!

It is such a relishing experience reading ur FF !!!!

Love u

Priya...loved your comments !!
I always look forward to them...Yes...Jai is a protective bro so now matter how much he knows Shaan...and knows that she is in safe hands...still he is worried about the depth of their relationshi...whether it is forever or short -lived !!!

thanks a lot !!!!!!!!

@ Ramani - Not in next one ( actually I almost thought of ending but realised that I can't ...as my FF is Story - based...and I just can't fast forward it to a rushed end...it has to flow in it's speed)
So though I was tempted to end it but realised that I can't do it logically.
But maybe a few more updates...donno how many... but I promise that it will end logically as all stories do as it started and moved ahead. It will never go on and on without making sense of the story 😊!!

love

Mani

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best
Eee ...

Your Shanak are so so so so supercuteee ... Can I just Hug them and You ... ?????

One question - Are they gonnna live together for the rest of the 2 months ????????

And Jai knew ???? WOW ... I love him !!!!!!

I really do ...

Okay I am gonnna come back and update my comments .. I want to read the 2 parts again !!!!!!

So Sorry to disappoint everybody who wanted them to live together 😛😆
😛
But Shals darling...My ShaNak will NOT live together...

That was a temporary phase where Shaan became insecure and asked her to move with him. She explained that Living together is not a solution to insecurity and won him over... all over again by her loving gestures...

My ShaNak know each other since childhood...they are like second skin to each other !!!
They are principled and strong on character...they both understand that and will never do anything that hurts the sentiments of their families.

Another thing...they were born and brought up in Delhi and now staying in Mumbai...
their upbringing was in higher middle class New Delhi - Rajender Nagar for Khanak and slightly higher South Delhi for Shaan. But their difference in Class is not much...they own cars in Mumbai...they travel by air...their parents belong to same Gymkhana Club in Delhi...they party together...and they have been given all the amenities that can be given by parents of affluent Nuclear families in Urban class of Delhi...
Basically the kind of patients I see every day in my area...

Kissing and smooching and getting physical is not a taboo for this couple...
Even sleeping before marriage is not a big issue ( Sameer and Jaspreet sleep together, I have discussed that before)...but MY FFs - ShaNak will NEVER do it because they behave responsibly as my characters always do...
they are sensible and know the pros and cons of their actions...they just thrive on love...
so living together is something that even Shaan doesn't want...he just suggested out of insecurity 😊!!!

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nk.mail

@nk.mail

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Mannu di,

After readin ur updates, there's always a goody goody feelin that lingers for a long time u know ..

Stuff that dreams r made of 😳

I get so engrossed while readin that i wish that it never ends..

I am transported into their world n wish to stay there forever..

Hell! m not as interested in my own love life which i don have as i am in theirs! 😆

Awesome update as always...

Love

Neha

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: -Manita-

Ramani...do you even know that your comments are like oxygen to me...

I almost thought of wrapping it in the next update

you gave me life back !!!

what?????????????😲😲😲😲😲😲

no ways...

i'll not let u do dat...😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Roshni_M

what?????????????😲😲😲😲😲😲

no ways...

i'll not let u do dat...😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

Sigh Rosh my sentiments exactly...

At first I gawked too.. Whaaattt? But then I read her comment again... Spot on the bold red...😃 Phew she gives me a heart attack always...😆😉

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

sorry for being late...

was tooo busy today wid friends...

okay back to the update...

Mani di...🤗

loved the update sooo much...

too good...

shanak fight of who'll talk to jai first...

they just dnt need a reason to fight i tell u...

loved shanak talk... shaan distracting her wid his kiss talks...🤣

loved the convo between jai and khanak...

too good...

jai is such a cool n caring brother... he is cool abt shanak...

loved it...

ragini is shaan's cousin???????

haila... wat is the story behind ragini nw?????????

this shaan has so many secrets... it kills me...

wat is jai and shaan hiding from khanak... y r dey gonna have a tough tym in delhi?????????

i pity the poor girl... bechaari if i have so amny quest i cn just imagine of how many quest she has...

u knw i had a feeling that jai already knw abt madzz... i knw he will come to knw b4 shanak tells him...

when jai told khanak to not talk to shaan... i was nooo... he cant say this... and khanak cant do this...

then he said he was seeing how intense the relationship is... that tym i was like omg... is this the way u check... scared the poor girl...and me too...

yeah... shanak are going to pune together... it'll be so much funnn...

ok im gettinhg excited as if im going to pune wid my bf...

but its just the same...😉😉😉😉😉😉

i loved shanak convo thru sms... hahaha... that dialogue of shaan in which he says y r dey msging when her cell is free... hahahaha... i laughed so much at that...

loved it di...

continue sooonnn...

p.s. u are NOT ending this ff soon... or rather i'll NOT LET U DO IT...😛😛😛😛😛

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Awww !! Lovely...M glad the talk with Jai went off well...!
Hmmm Ragini is Shaan's cousin...Wonder what will happen now...
As usual I guessed the aage ka track right and like I promised...I will not write my guesses here...! Hehehe !!

WOW...They are going to Pune together...Shaan is sooo cute...loved his reactions in the car...Adorable he is !!

Cant wait for the next part !!

Luv,
Vandu

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Okay, I have now descended back onto this beautiful Earth from the ever blissful Heavens...

Ishha.. Shantanu he is audacious, overbearing, irritating and the mossst adorable cutie pie here.. *me pulling your cheeks and thanking you for giving him to me* Okay okay.. focus... and no thanks Vatty, May before you all jump on me.. you can keep him lol...

Awww he is the cutest better half anyone can have...😳😍 His Kiss.. Kill.. has killed me already several times.. and I am not even half dead yet...😳 His little nuances, his judging her... he knows her inside out...

Killer lines

"Khanak, just leave it'.."

"What?"

"Your lip''.don't bite it'.."

Ooohhh.. me am gone... *thud* Lady you cannot simply commit this crime. Thou should know that I am weak hearted adn a sucker for such things...😳 Her awe more than described what I felt... Sigh he surely loves her inside out.. and that to me is love...

Yes even if I say I love you a million times, I will feel it is less... this is one way of saying I love you.. yes...

Aaahhh Jai-Khanak, this sibling relationship makes me feel an awe, a certain kind of nostalgia.. I am an only child and have never known such a realtionship.. sigh it sure must feel so good to be loved like this.. Love in every form is salutable.. saying anything will be less.. a crime.. as words will always fall short... I salute this sibling relationship..

Friendhsip is another bond which again takes me to a different plateau.. I have a sweet experience here which I can understand. That gives me a very nice and beautiful perspective to Shaan-Jai's relationship which I am sure you will exploit next and put forth as your sheer talented brilliance.. But both Jai's and Shaan's individual comments for the other more than spoke for itself... the easy camaraderie that they have, their friendship running deep...

Oh... this was a surprise.. Ragini being Shaan's cousin.. hmmm.. so now we know the depth of Madhavi aunty's penance.. yes, sometimes even a lifetime of penance is not worth anything, but many a times I firmly believe that if a person is sorry genuinely, then yes even God forgives... So yes I shall wait for that bridge to cross when I get there and see the forgiveness come forth... But till then I enjoy this shared comfort between two siblings... so beautiful...

Last but not the least.. she has to accompany him... yes no matter what.. spend these two months as close to each other as possible.. for the storms when they come, the lovers fear of losing each other.. they have weather these storms.. But I know and believe that their strong bond will weather the worst of stomrs and see their ship of love safely to the shore...Like the gentle lapping of the waves...

Thei love is eternal.. lasting... their love shall succeed... their love shall remain forever... they will leave a lovely pair of foot prints on the sand... and even if the waters erase these, the impressions will run deep... difficult to erase from the heart and mind...😳😳😳😳

Beautiful update..👏👏👏

And on a note of warning.. Stop giving me heart palpitations every time with hints of ending this FF!! Now move it and draft the next one!! Humph...😆

Edited by jparker - 14 years ago