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Roshni

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Hey sonali... Welcome... Superb os darling... Do continue writing...

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

thanks 4 this superb OS yaar..it gave me feeling of the oldi goldie days...just luvved it..pls cont. soon...

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adeelaanwar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hey sonali...
awesome OS...
gr8 work...👍🏼
conti sooon...

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

2nd 1 is also awesum dear...cont...pls..

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angel_9

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Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

hey Sonali...

second one is also awesome...

keep writing...

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purvi08

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

hi soanli

second os is also very nice

keep writing🤗

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sonalishah

@sonalishah

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Thank you guys for ur approval...now i m starting with the 3rd OS

This is the part where Shaan wants khanak to confess her love for him and he tries to do it by the best possible way...

Shaan and Khanak are alone in Khandelwal mansion and their parents are out for marriage. Khanak and Shaan are supposed to join them at marriage and hence are getting ready...

In the room
Shaan :khanak where are my clothe to wear?
Khanak(From washroom)They must be there on bed...check it..
Shaan: k ..i found them... thanx

Door bell rang
Khanak(from washroom):can u please check who it?
Shaan:ya dont worry i l go
He goes downstairs and opens the door to see a manager from a random company to have a word about the pending sunils work..
Meanwhile khanak came outta washroom and was getting ready..

Khanak wore a red colored lehenga with lots of work on it..
And its blouse had a dori to be tied form back...
She was trying to tie it a since den but was unsuccessful ..n was thinkin wat to do...
Also she heard footsteps climbing up their rooms stair and she knew it would be shaantanu...she was a bit confused wat to do.lyk how she l tie it and wat shud she say shaan why is she not ready yet..she just lifted up the dupatta and put it on her open dori to cover it from him...
Shaan entering the room:u ready lets go
Shaan put the file in the cupboard ...
Khanak :ummm hmm..just a minute...
Shaan :ok...
Shaan started lookin into the drawer finding some thing...
2 minutes past and again shaan said so u ready now...
now Khanak was really worried of wat to tell him so she just came near him and told him with breaks that her dori was open and she was not able to fix it...
Shaan looked at her back from the mirror and noticed dat she was very nervous while saying dat...
Shaan went closer where she was standing and brought his hands near her shoulder and removed the dupatta ...she could feel his hands on hands on her n started moving ahead away from him he stopped her and moved his hands to her dori and when he touched she closed her eyes to save herself from losing to him...
This reaction of hers made it evident dat she felt the same thing for him the way he felt for her...and he thot that this was the right tym to make the confess her love...
He moved her hair from one side to other confidently i.e. without ne doubt that wat her reaction would be...and slide his fingers down on her spine...this made shivers run down in her body...
Khanak (arching her bck and breathing heavily):wat u doin? this is not right...
Shaan(coming closer and almost his lips brushing her shoulder):why? den is it ryt dat u r hiding ur feelings?isnt dat wrong?
Khanak(still breathing heavily):i dont kno wat u r talking about...
Shaan (coming closer puting his hands on her waist):really?den tell me is it not wrong when u r worried about me when u dont see me?
Shaan still moving closer and her back touching his chest...
Khanak(eyes closed ):please shaan i cant do it..
Shaan: dat means u love me but cant say it?
Khanak(lost):yes...i mean 'no'...
Shaan(sliding his hands to dori and tying it):khanak i dint hear u..can u b a bit louder...
Khanak: i dont like u...
Shaan(tying dori tightly)-u dont like me.is that the reason dat when i come closer ur heartbeats start racing the race...when i touch u get nervous (his hands travel up to her hair behind the ear)...is that the reason when i look at u ,u blush...
Khanak(tear in a eye bcz she was lying to herself)
Shaan running down his index finger from ear to the shoulder till blouse line then her back...
Khanak realizes its no point in lying to him and turns around to face him and says those three magical words
Khanak: I love u shaan
Shaan (who was busy in realising where his finger was traveling ):
Say it again
Khanak:yes i love u shaan..
Shaan :once more please
Khanak:Yes i do love u...
Shaan:u dont kno khanak by saying this u made my life...
Shaan (who saw a tear in her eye):i m sorry if i hurt u just now but i dint find anyother way to make u confess me...
Saying this he wiped her tear wid his hand and put the dupatta on her...hugging her back...
This was the best moment for both who were waiting for it...
Khanak breaking the hug blushed and smiled and moved back as it was new for her to be so close to him after the confession
Shaan ( realizing her awkwardness looked at her):Khanak i promise i l never do anything u r not ready for until u find it right
Khanak: just nodding her head in acknowledgment ...
Shaan: i l wait outside with car for u ...
And he went downstairs
Khanak was having a strange glow on her face today which she was not familiar with even when she was married to suraj...

This is the end of OS...

Edited by sonalishah - 14 years ago