My first OS ...part 6 page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here shantanu and khanak's personalities are same as in serial...and its just dat shaan n khanak are married but not in love and are very good friends.it is the stage whr both are attracted towards each other..n he has started goin office bcz of her.

it starts lyk this

Khanak was in her room waiting for shaan to arrive from office and she was gonna have dinner with him..here it goes

Khanak in her room listening to old songs when she hears a door bell n heads to open the door..as expected it was him.
khanak-arey app?
shaan-nahi tum..

khanak with "u n ur jokes" look at him
khanak-u get freshen up i l ready ur plate for dinner..
shaan- arey khanak after such a tiring day i l need dat...thanx.. i l go n come bck in a minute..
he goes n gets ready n puts on his blue jeans n a white shirt with some water still in his hair
and comes down for hvin dinner without wiping it as he was very hungry..
When he comes down thru stairs khanak sees his half wet hair n keeps staring at him for moment till he reaches the table admiring how nice he looks in such a casual look.he notices her noticing him
shaan-ahem ahem...khanak wat hpnd?
khanak-um nothn i just thot that there is somethin on ur face so was tryin to figure it out but now aftr looking it from nearer it seems it was nothing...arey haan i hve made ur favorite gajar ka halwa...just to avoid any questions from him she said this
shaan-Awesome!!!! i need it...u kno khanak i dint hve nethng since evening aftr lunch was so busy in work
Khanak was so happy that he hs started taking work so seriously but also at the same time she was worried that how will it work if he skips his breakfasts in between everyday
and that he has to take his care
khanak-dont do this ...agreed that u have a lots of work but that doesnt mean you have to skip ur meals plz take ur care ,what will happen when i leave this place aftr our divorce who will take ur care
At that tym she was a caring wife as well as a good friend..now shaan was shocked of what she just said n how to react to it
Shaan- arey khanak chill it has happened only today i promise it wont happen again with promising eyes
Khanak got angry but just to hide it she went to her room as also shaan's dinner was almost done, she sat listening to songs.she was listening to the old famous song "Pyar hua ikraar hua hai pyar se phir kyun darta hai dil"

shaan after his dinner could sense it that she was angry and was thinkin of the way to make up with her
Shaan(to himself)-i l have to do something else she l remain angry n i cant see her lyk this
Shaan entered the room seeing khanak looking out of the window with lost eyes...
He thot of an idea, he went there with making no noise of his feet n went close to her and stood behind her...she could suddenly feel his breath on her hair .Before she turned around he held her wrist of one hand and started humming the song...and when he found sh ewas comfortable his one touch on her hand he put his other hand on her waist...now she was exactly facing him with her one hand in his hand and other on his shoulder...
he started with soft dance with her he just moved side by side then his speed increased with the music he started back and forth..
Now he was so close to her face dat she could look only in his eyes
Shaan- sorry yaar khanak i promise next time it wont happen in fact tomorrow onwards i l make it sure i have my meals on time..
Khanak-Pakka
Shaan-Pakka pakka
And now after his this comment she smiled at him...
Looking at her such an innocent smile he just melted and started to dance again..
He got so excited now that he pulled her closer and started doing some really fast dance moves and for his surprise she cud match with them...They danced for around 1 minute n they both wer tired and exhausted and started puffing..
There they did a step whr she held his one hand went away and he pulled her and she in the process bumped into him with their bodies completely touching her both hands around his neck n his hands around her waist so tight that he could feel her stomach moving in and out bcz of exhaustion ..she pleaded with her eyes to leave her but he wanted more of it...may b it was the dance,the view,the touch or god knows...he didnt stop even after dat he turned her around such that her back was touch his body and he could easily have the view of her back he first tym saw her delicate back,the curves designed on her she was so beautiful he thot,her waist was so perfectly fitting in his hands..he didnt stop at just that he felt that urged to move his fingers on the curved outline not to irritate her or scare her but to see what she reacts...
He slowly moved her hair on one side so dat he back was fully visible n with his dat touch she arched her back n moved a little ahead but shaan with his one strong hand helr her one shoulder to make her stop still..she could feel it she closed her eyes on that move of his n bit her lip in nervousness ,he cud see dat...still he wanted some more...he ran down his index finger from her neck slowly to her shoulder n den to her hand .he had completely lost in his act..she tried moving ahead but on the process of not letting her move he held her shoulder more tightly his grip on her deepened n she moaned in the process with a fist closed..
he was nuzzling in her hair whn she screamed n he den came into his senses n left her...
he den saw her eyes which had tears in them...and Khanak ran out of the room
He den felt sorry for what had just hpnd..he thot to himself how can he be so harsh with her that too when ders nothn between them...
Den he realized ders somethn happening to him...an ders somethn dragging him to her...
He punched hes hand on the wall for how can he lose his control and do that...He realized dat he hd hurt her n wanted to say sorry for it..
Where as khanak was in the terrace at that tym with eyes closed tears drops on her cheeks..n a smile spread accross her lips...
that was the first time she also was attracted towards him...




Guys this was my first os ever ..ignore if Any mistakes..and tell me if u lyk it..




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Ok guys this is not the continuation but another OS


Shaan and khanak are sent out by the parents to have fun...also by this tym they turn more than just friends.Khanak is wearing a white suit and Shaan wearing his green shirt with black vest inside...
they are going on his bike when suddenly it starts raining...And by now they are miles away from the khandelwal house and its raining heavily. As it starts raining he stops the bike as he can not ride further bcz of water droplets entering in his eyes...And khanak is busy enjoying the rain sitting behind...
Shaan:khanak i guess v l hve to wait here until it stops raining...its very heavy n i cant ride like this..
Khanak:(nodding) ok...
they get down from the bike shaan is busy moving his hand in his hair to make the view clear..and khanak enjoying the rain.. twirling in it...
shaan:khanak wat u doin lets move its raining here n wat u up to?
Khanak:cant u see i m enjoying it unlike u who r busy shouting at me...at least try to enjoy it...see whn these droplets touch ur body u feels so nice...so lost in it...
She was not saying or asking just feeling it
Shaan who never liked rains was just staring at her whose white dress made her figure so perfectly visible, her hands straight open in the air twirling and droplets on her face...all the curves so delicately designed on her...her waist line ,delicate neck...he was lost in it for next 2mins when he was disturbed by khanaks shake..
khanak:wat hpnd?where u lost?
Just to avoid the obvious scene dat he is staring at her body..he tried hiding his gaze when again he looked at her neck where the droplets moving inside her dress...khanak noticed it n understood it n turned her back at him...
Shaan to himself:shit!!!!! wat m i doin?i shouldnt b thinkin like this about her...
and went upto her...khanak who realised that she had become transparent became conscious...
Shaan removed his shirt and put it on her...without looking at her and just signaled her to follow him...they went ahead on the road where they found an old cottage...
Shaan:i can see a cottage there..lets go...v can find a shade to cover us
Khanak:hmmm
and she followed him...
They entered and shaan made a bonfire as he cud see khanak shivering...
both sat around it...
Shaan who cudent help looking at her stole a gaze at her and found her looking beautiful in that open her on one side of the shoulder rinsing off water from it...she looked so pure ,so serene ,so beautiful ...and again came into senses.now it was khanaks turn to look at him...
Khanak looked at his strong masculine body with black vest...she stared at his well built muscles and kept her eyes on it ...shaan started saying something when she immediately changed her gaze...
Shaan: u kno wat i never liked rain so much in my childhood i used sit and home and bunked my schools just to avoid rain...
Khanak first time saw shaan telling something about his childhood n took keen interest in it...
Khanak:why?
Shaan: i dont know...may be bcz it spoils ur plans.i used to hate it..but today for the first time i have stayed so long in rains thanks to u...
Khanak:see u dont like rains dat dsnt mean u l escape ur work...ryt? watever it is u hve to stay punctual...now its not in ur hands to stop the rain instead u make it ur job to overcome ur bad mood and complete ur work..
Shaan kept lookin at her whn she was sayin this...
Since now both wer so open with each other shaan went and sat besides her...it was nearly for one hour they wer talking to each other n shaan saw that khanak was asleep with her legs folded near her chest and head on it sideways..she was looking so beautiful in dat ...he thought..
Shaan thot of making her sleep properly so went near her and lifted her up...
He was so perfect for her...she was so light in weight ..he easily lifted her and her normal reaction was to put her hands around his neck..he felt butterflies in his stomach on her movement...he put her on the hay near by making her comfortable n realized dat his shirt had fallen so he got it to put on her when she in her sleep turned on another side with his hand under her head and he dint want to wake her up so slept next to her...


In the morning khanak woke up seeing him next to her and was shocked as to how he came here...but then her slight movement made him open his eyes and see her shocked ..she thot something hpnd between them
Khanak: Shaan how come u r here?
Shaan thot of pulling her leg and started his nautanki..
Shaan: khanak u wer shivering last night and u needed body heat so i came here...n in dat u started coming closer and i cudnt go away as u wud have got serious...(shaan said this hiding his laugh)
Khanak: no u r lieing..say u r lieing...
Shaan :no khanak...
Khanak: but till the time i was awake i dint feel sick o something lyk dat..
Shaan:ya but ltr u felt asleep and wer shivering and wer turning white..i could not see it...
Khanak:if dat was the thing u should have let me die...
Shaan now thinking that the joke was enuf n she had started taking it too much seriously..
Saying this khanak started going away...when shaan in process to stop her torn open her zip..
for a moment both where stunned khanak dint understand wat to do n shaan just gathering his thoughts of what he just did went closer to her and pulled the zip up..his this touch made khanak nervous...she started breathing heavily ,with her chest goin up and down and shaan seeing it..
Shaan whispered in her ear that he aws kidding and he dint do anything with her...
after dat he made her look at him and said dat he wont step ahead unless she is ready for it...thus made her feel relieved...and put the green shirt on her to reduce the conscious feeling she had bcz of her wet suit which dint dry fully and her torn hook of zip..

Edited by sonalishah - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice job Sonali, my name is also Sonali lol
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super... shanak ke liye kuch b...❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ahhh sonalishah ..welcome dear...
i am seeing u first time here writing an O S 😊
it was very cute I loved this one 😊simple and cute just like our shanak..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks ya.i tried it for the first time
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hei sonali,
it was simply superb..a passionate dance..continue writing more OSs,etc..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi SonaliShah
Nice OS 😊
Very cute loved it superb 😃
Loved the romantic dance
Keep writing 😊
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nice one dear plzz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sonali shah
very nice os
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sonali...
welcome dear...
amazing OS...cute part...
loved it...

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