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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

that was so beautiful Yumna!

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

babes...get well soon!!!nyc update👏

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Omg..

Yumna..

I was sleepy when i started reading it...

I din realise when i became fully alert..

e\excellent writing man..

U wrote this when u had a flu...

Loved every bit of it...

Esp drawing a line to P & P...

It never came between then even if they had both of it.. how true...this one is never gonna leave my mind....

the Hands were amazing again..

I wonder how i am gonna sleep now....

Beautiful.. .

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

SYS - the flu brought this out of you...Good Gosh!!! you are really something,,,,

very very nice...aage badho...

okay i got a bit confused for a second- so Khanak met Shaan through Rahul? Did i understand this right?

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

@Saaz

Yep she did.Umm I don't know many Indian names tou using what material there is😆

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Sooo cutee...

They miss each other soo deeply......The hand reference was soo cute...KT indeed has large hands...LOL !

Loved the eye lock part.....And the reference to their respective pride and prejudices...!

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Wow... so beautiful Yumna... 😍😍

Pain is beautiful... the pain is there yet it is beautiful as it reminds him of her... and he forgets everything other than that painful beautiful memory which is his very thriving reason of existence...

khanak's first memory of him... sigh as she yet feels the strength of his touch...

Such a sweet painful tryst this one is... yet so beautiful it is...

Very nice update and those lines... 👏👏👏

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Imane

@accountband

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

There is just something so AMAZING about this story that I just can't get enough...i loved the foundation of your title and how well it is tied in your story...Just absolutely love it....I am a fan of ShaNak with intensity and their distance that you have depicted surely gives an intense gloss of emotions that a great writer like you is able to pull off no matter what! Thanks you so much but please update soon i am loving this.

Edited by imane568 - 14 years ago

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-Unknown-22

@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

I can't comprehend how two people so in love separated it's very sad 😔.... you write beautifully and you described their feelings really well!...now update jaldi we want to know what happened and why they separated

P.S..Hope your feeling better! xx

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KrazEee

@KrazEee

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

dasht-e-tanhaai mein,
duri ke khas-o-khaak tale
khil rahe hain tere pehlu ke saman aur gulaab
uth rahi hai kahin qurbat se
teri saans ki aanch
apani khushbu mein sulagti hui
maddham maddham

Beautiful!

The title caught my attention, love the lyrics...Call me sadistic but I find sad stories have more depth, more intensity, more story to it...oviously with happy endings though...read first part only and loving it already! like how you captured both of their emotions...both absorbed in memories...very touching 👏

I see there is another part posted already 😃...have to go now, will read it later

Keep Writting : )

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