Written Update 7th March 2011

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shan's worried, he's in the living room i think

shaan: may papa banoonga to idiot lagoonga yar how will i introduce myself to others, "hi may shantanu khandelwal, may ek papa hoon, ye meri beti hai, ya beta, jo bhi hoga" (shan is wondering how he'll introduce himself to others after the baby, as in "hi i'm shantanu khandelwal, a papa")

khanak to herself: shantanu kahan reh gaye, ab tak aye nai (where's shan)

haribha asks khanak to give milk to khushbu, she agrees (i love how he orders khanak around)

akki-boo scene..

boo: i was almost in depression, u never even msged
akki: i msged 20 times a day, i cant message more than that with the meetings n all
we talked so much on fone, we said everything, then i didnt understand what to write in sms.

boo: now i understand that u r bored of me, all my kitty frnds say husbands get bored, you're also like that, u dont care abt my love, you love work, u've married work, that is why i dont want this kid,

khanak heard it

akki shocked
khanak shocked
akki: what kia bacha kiska bacha kaisa bacha (whos kid, where kid, what kid)
boo: what do u mean kiska bacha (what do you mean whos kid)

akki is grinning now..
boo: may pregnant hoon (i'm pregnant)
akki: omg i'm so happy
boo: stop overreacting
boo: i've decided i dont want this kid, 9 months big tummy, my figure will spoil, and no1 at home knows, they think khanak is pregnant,

khanak is scheming

boo: i'm not going to tell neone, she wont let akki tell either

Scene change..

khanak comes out "this means khusbu bhabhi is going to become mommy"

boo comes out..."harilal, i asked u to bring milk where is it"

khanak: he was busy so i brought

boo: tum and shan to chuppe rustom nikle, dhulwadi i thought shan manane aya tha, but wo to kuch aur hi chal raha tha (you and shan turned out to be sharp, i thought shan went to dhulwadi to apologize but you ppl were doing something else there) (she's talking about the pregnancy)

khanak: i heard ur talk

boo: now that uve heard i request u not to tell anyone , i dont want ppl to know, even if they're fake, atleast this house is getting happiness.

khanak: wats wrong with it, its such a good thing, y do u want to hide

boo: whatever i'm doing theres a big reason

khanak: i want to know
boo: i m not ready right now, when the time is right i will tell everyone, dont tell neone, i cant become a mom yet

khanak agrees not to tell but not for long
boo thnx n says dont even tell shantanu
she gives kasam

khanak in thoughts

Scene change..

shaan in his room "idiot lagoonga may"(i'll look like an idiot), lagta hai khanak arahi hai, phir se bachoon ki baat karegi, may soney ki acting karta hoon (i think its khanak whos coming, she'll talk about kids again, i should act that i'm sleeping)

he sleeps

khanak: i want to talk to u shan
khanak: i shud tell shan everything, i shudnt hide..but bhabhi gave kasam how can i break that, what to do..lets start talking, we'll see what happens..

she tries to wake him up...
"shantanu aap so re ho" (shantanu are u sleeping)

lol funnny scene

khanak to herself: chaddar daal ke to sab sotey hi hain na nahate thori hain , may bhi burthal hoon (ofcourse he's sleeping, who baths with a blanket on)

she's trying to wake him up
khanak has figured out he's up..
khanak: looks like he's really sleeping
She goes towards the cupboard and glances back...

catches him watching her..

khanak: i know ur up, i know ur acting becuz u dont want to talk to me, then i also dont want to talk to u

khanak also sleeps on the other side: y did u come to dhulwadi, take me back there, but why u, i can go myself, bus give me one answer, what will i say to people there, she fakes crying

shan: sorry khanak, sorry yar..i'm saying sorry na,

shan: ok fine.. he gets up on bed..says: until u forgive me, i'll stand here on one leg..
khanak: ok keep standing..

shan; khanak sorry yar

he falls on her..
she laughs

shan laughs
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

both are blushing for real

forgive me now , says shan

khanak: i do, i want to tell u something , about kids..

shan gets up, he hears something, thinks its from a toy..

khanak takes the toys.."what happened"

shan: i was thinking, what if its 3-4 kids..
khanak: if you want to think, why 3-4, think about 5-6 and you will be handling them 1 will want food, 1 will want to play, 1 will want to sleep , 1 will want to bathe, and some will want to sit on ur back..
shan is freaking out..
khanak: it'll be so much fun

khanak to herself: tomorrow everyone will find out anyway, until then why dont i bug shantanu, waise bhi he bugs me a lot too

shan: i couldnt sleep anyway, now i'm more scared..

khanak: i'll put u to sleep..

shan: keep the kids away first! (he means the toys)

lol

funny scene

Scene change..

some guy asks rahul to come out of the car..

he asks for money..

theyre goons

guy: give back bhai's money
rahul: i dont carry so much money in pockets, i'll call bhai

rahul calls bhai, : bhai i wanted one month and u'r asking for money already...
i will return all ur money in a month

does that mean rahul has no money?

confusing

Scene change..

madhvi is prepared for something
sunil takes her interview and films it..

"whom are u waiting for dadi ji"

madhvi: a baby girl, i have 2 sons..i want a girl now

he asks khanak khanak signals khushbu..
khushbu; dad u shud ask me first...i'm the elder bahu

sunil: thats right..u tell
khushbu is quiet

madhvi: we have to show excitement
sunil: someone's going to call u aunty now
boo: no he will call me K, K is styling, aunty is tacky...

sunil i will become sandy then
madhvi : i will become maddy

rahul comes n sees

rahul: uncle where's shan
sunil: he wont have time for anyone now

he asks madhvi: i dont know
shan comes: sunil focuses camera on shan

he escapes with rahul

khandelwals have gone crazy..

Scene change:

rahul: whatttt

i mean i meant congratulations

shan: yea

rahul: i dont believe u'r going to become dad..

shan: even i dont understand

shan: i kept asking for pocketmoney, now someone will ask me for pcoketmoney

rahul: congrats my new dad

shan: its not funny, anyway, u here?

rahul: i'm very happy for u

(i m hating shan's pink shirt)

shan: glad you came, i wanted to tell u something, see , sam canada chali gai yar,

rahul: did she call?
shan: no rinny told me
rahul: rinny
shan: what are u thinking
rahul: nothing, rinny came here?
shan : actually....

someone screams :shantanu khandelwallllllll

its ducks

he's come with a Vuvuzela and a mask

shan: dude wats up, what's all this have u come from a carnival
ducks: dont change the topic, you turned out to be faster than broadband, i feel so proud today, he goes to sunil..

sunil i s busy shooting madhvi

ducks gets in the screen
i want to sing, "uncle may to uncle ban gaya" (saala may to baap ban gaya style)

sunil: tum hi boldo, daddy to kuch bol nai rahe hain.. (you only speak, since the daddy isnt speaking)
duck: shan kuch nai bol raha? koi iski bolti band karne araha hai na (shan's not speaking? maybe because someone's going to come to shut him up soon)
duck to shan: shan u'll have to speak

(sunil camera focuses on him)

khanak to herself: everyone's so happy, i should tell them..
boo is watching khanak
she is sad too

Khanak goes towards sunil's camera, stands next to shan
khanak: ok , ask what you want to ask
sunil: say anything you want..
khanak: what to speak when there is no kid at all..

everyone is surprised..
ends at shan giving khanak a "What!" look

Tomorrow:
khanak to madhvi: mom i want to talk to u
madhvi: say anything
khanak: baat bache ke baare may hai

boo hears..

sorry no analysis..
no time for it :(

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jparker thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks teech for the painful task and applaud you for your painstakingly done marvelous job!!😆👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update teech
gr8 epi n bestest bestest scene ever ...........shaanak yasharan rocked it completely...........totally speechless.......this is wat makes a jodi.........hatts off yasharan
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Posted: 14 years ago
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true

the scene was so original
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG
It was you then I felt sorry for😆

I guess the ShaNak scene more than made up for everything though!
Kudos!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i think rahul shud go after sam, to canada or someplace

i liked them showing khushbu's emotional side..
they've only showed her as a butterfly before..

and i dont think its the figure she's worried abt
there has to be something else

i'll wait for that :)

maybe she'll realise the whole family's happy and they deserve the kid?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: IFsKhanak

i think rahul shud go after sam, to canada or someplace


i liked them showing khushbu's emotional side..
they've only showed her as a butterfly before..

and i dont think its the figure she's worried abt
there has to be something else

i'll wait for that :)

maybe she'll realise the whole family's happy and they deserve the kid?



EXACTLY what I wrote in my analysis at the CC!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Boo looked pretty today...hehe....

I was so hoping that Rahul will get a shock or sthing seeing the khandelwals....they were all so mad today....and go away to his gym.

Sheesh.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very cute shanak scene

very cute EXCEPT for the chappals on the bed....YUCK!🤢

Wonder if Khanak shall tell Shaan about Boo's pregnancy and they decide to 'act preggie' until Boo reveals herself....

if treated well, with subtle comedy, it would be fun to watch such a track...like the whole 'kutkut' ..'rasmalai' thing we got ....

As for the suck brigade....please this Rahul is allowed into their house itself is a blasphemy... and what is Duck here for?

that side track is completely sidey...no one cares for it...
Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update

HATE HATEE them ignoring the MMS fiasco like that...don't mind duck but Rahul 😡 arghhh!



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