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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
aditee pls pls pls pls update it tonite really dying to read it
im in love wid this writing:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
lovely update dear..............
plzzzzzzz update soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
ok finally read all parts aditee...

Superb!

Got a little confused with so many names that it was hard to keep track. lol.

anyways Im guessing you are an architect right? well my dad is one too. he has been all his life and mom an artist. it's funny how my parents give me the artistic talent in my khoon only but i can't seem to take interest in it much.

neways I loved, loved all the updates. Especially the way you have etched the characters. It seemed that you showed the two sides of coin. I just don't understand the reasons Khanak gives of not liking shaan. idk to me it's like she is not giving him a fair chance and is judging very hard. The same goes with Shaan, i don't get him. Why is he always like that? Too much ego a turned off!

oh and the best part about all the updates are that you describe the details of a project so well.

that last update was amazing, short but yet effective. I can't wait to read more.

plz continue soon

PS: off to read other people's update and comment...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Thanks Rooj!
Sorry for the names yaar. At first I thought I would write a 20 or 30 (YIKES? Exactly) part story........
Thats why I thought I needed so many people.
But not anymore
This should end in the next 3 or 4 max
I had hoped to end it by 9, but it went over.
I am an accountant yaar. Architecture se mera door door ka wasta nahi hai.
I just read stuff and tend to mentally hang on to things I like........
I am so happy you loved it
I am sorry for the names.........
Thx
A
Edited by aditee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

u r gonna update tonite.. yay

Thanks so much di Priya
Not tonite, may be in the next hour or two......
If I finish up the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: aditee

Thanks Rooj!

Sorry for the names yaar. At first I thought I would write a 20 or 30 (YIKES? Exactly) part story........
Thats why I thought I needed so many people. why an apology aditee...tumhari SS hai. lol I loved it! 20 or 30 parts...hmmm well if u can extend it then by all means do so...Im more than willing to read good SS...(which reminds me what happened to ur Dhulwadi one? I'm still waiting)
But not anymore
This should end in the next 3 or 4 max
I had hoped to end it by 9, but it went over. boo hoo....this is not good...more in demand plz!😆
I am an accountant yaar. Architecture se mera door door ka wasta nahi hai. oh mujhe laga ur an architect. lol. my Bad...well my daddy is and I see him working at home...man their program is tough. all has to be done on computers.
I just read stuff and tend to mentally hang on to things I like........
I am so happy you loved it
I am sorry for the names.........
Thx
A


again no apology...im looking forward to ur next update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
yayayayayayayayy waiting im dying to read:)
thnks aditee
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
awesome update aditi
just read your all 9 update contiounsly and loved it
the way you discribe all charctors and things ..superb and amazing
khanak looking much intelegent and shaan feeling for her shown very well
eagrly waiting for next update
sorry for missed your ff previously and late comments
looking forword for next update😆😆


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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
wow Aditee................u r updating in an hour...............
can't wait 4 it..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90

PART 9 B

The elevator slides to a noiseless halt. "The country's top construction company is housed here, the elevators cant be creaky" smiles to herself. People forget the line and jump in.

There are around 7 or 8 people inside'.. nobody she knows'''. Or that's what she thinks.

Leans on the steel wall and takes a deep breath'''. A fragrance she recognizes so much''. In recent days wafts through'' she hears a PLUNK in her ears''. Must be her heart. Doesn't scan the heads to see'''.

"I had to go pick up my Dad at the airport at 4, the driver's kid is sick, so Dad wanted me to go check on him at Cama Albless (govt) hospital. Gawd! I am never driving to that part of town (Dhobi Talao)ever again. My driver was gone for the day'.. the hospital was awful man! Ive been up all nite, I think"

Her eyes were shut. She hears every word of it. She was back to being perplexed''. "happy he was here at work? Angry he didn't spend the nite the way she had assumed he did? Happy he reached out and helped an employee? Outraged he would talk so insulting about how 90% of the world lived?"

"I just don't NEED this! Its his life, he shud live it how ever he likes to"

Easier said than done'''.

She was strangley becoming acutely aware of his presence. When people filled their meeting room, she held her breath until the last person arrived. When he didn't she wondered, when he did, she quickly bent down and stared at her laptop keys.

She went to grab water at the corner breakfast table and turned around and walked right into him'.

Acted as if she didn't hear the "Hi! Khanak". It's the closest they had ever been, physically'' in the past month and a half'' she felt like she had hit a brick wall.

She noticed his side burns''.. the cleanly shaven face''' the speck of red his eyes''' from staying up all nite''..

He noted the kohl lining under her eyes'.. the solid glass pink bangle pair she wore in her right hand, she smelled fresh'''' clean'''. Like soap''..

Nachiket: Gujral kal tone Shamim se baat ki kya?

The trance is broken'''.

He steps to the side and lets her walk past him

Facing the coffee dispenser "Nahi, he promised to call today, yaar ek din ki chutthi hai uski, let the guy be".

She never looked directly at him. Didn't address converstaions at him.. When the room emptied.. she made sure she walked out with the crowd'''. All in an attempt to keep HER sanity and keep up the promise to herself "If I don't talk to him I wouldn't feel the desire to insult him" Simple!

Its all going to work out! She concluded on Monday evening''.

She was slowly befriending Paula and Nivedita. Paula referred to her as "Honey" as Khanak was too hard for her to say'''. She liked being Paula's friend.

He didn't show up on Tuesday''. All day'''.

She was unable to concentrate on work. Shut down her lap top accidentally in the middle of her presentation once. Wanted to ask Nachiket where he was' she thought he must be at the Site.

Went out for lunch with Nivedita and Paula''.. hoping they would talk about him''. Or atleast share some news about him''.. his life''''. She was never coy'.. she had infact walked up to Sooraj at the SPA cafeteria the first time. She had asked him out for the Diwali party the final year.

She had showed up at his PG dig on Holi morning. She would walk in to class and go sit by him all through the final year. He used to be amused but didn't say a thing

But NOW was different she thot'''' "Oh! Pleez! I am not dating him, why am I talking about him like I am?"

No answer''.. she got a busy tone from her brain

She asked Ram if she could skip a day and so she did'''' "two could play the game?"

Ofcourse not! She had over 500 emails to respond to and being at the client afforded very lil time for such mundane tasks. So that's what she did on Wednesday

She was back at Ajmera on thurday''' in a lemon and green ankle length chiffon skirt and a lemon colored blouse and had braided her hair''. Some strands were escaping to their freedom by the end of the day'''.. with her hair being barely shoulder length and too silky a braid was just not the thing''. The kohl was back in her eyes with some yellow gold tinted bangles in her right wrist'''.

Talked herself hoarse''' walked across the street to Coffee Day to grab a latte and walked over to Nivedita's cube'. She was upset at being left behind on the coffee trip''' promised she wud be with Khanak in a few minutes when she wrapped up the email she was working on.

Nivedita and khanak had a full afternoon lined up''

Returned to the conference room'' it was empty''.. there was a ladder placed in the middle, some ceiling boards were skewed'' hit the space key on the PC''.. the overhead projector had been messed with the image was shooting away from the screen''' she reached up to adjust it'. It was too high. Pulled the ladder close to the huge oval table in the center''' and climbed up'.. reached and moved the projector '' the image needed to be expanded'''.the door opened

Khanak: Niv can u do a "full screen" on the slide?

The full screen image appeared, she reached out and adjusted the proj some more'' smiling turned around to thank her. She didn't fall off the ladder'''. Made it''. If only barely'''.. not before giving him a peek at her midriff''.

And his most challenging problem''.. now he had one more thing competing for the top spot in his mental list of her'''.. hair, smile, eyes and now her waist'''' she was competent resourceful brilliant AND most importantly was not afraid to climb a ladder! 😃

Shaan: Hi! Khanak

Edited by aditee - 14 years ago

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