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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
aditeee nooo
Pogaathe...
Next part uh complete pannitu po... pls......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Hi Aditee
Read the last three updates
U update so quickly
Awesome updates its so interesting to read
please continue when u get time
Waiting for ur next part 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Arghh !!
I loved it....
Complete part 9 fast....Like A.S.A.P...
Love you for all these AWESOME parts !! *muahhh*
P.S - OYEEE !!! Watz with the MSW taunt???😡😡😆😆😆😆 How dare you??😆😆😆😆 Khoon kar dungi tera!!😡😆😆
Luv,
Vandu
Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
hei aditee,
it was really good..do continue soon...love to read it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
aditteeee all tghe 3 parts were superb loved them
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkssssssssssss im soooooooooooooooooooooo excited to c wats coming next let thios go on frever plssssssssssssssssss:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
hey Aditee............
wow ........all three parts amazing..............loved it..............👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
ok shan said to khanak that she lied .......that she was widow..........wonderfully described............
she was thinking about him & sooraj..........but again was thinking about shan............lovely...........
shan followed her & watching all her actions..........& she is again thinking about him............amazing........
i guess both love each other but haven't realise that ..............i want to know more..............
continue soon..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Just caught up with the rest of the parts
LOVING it!
Love the eyes and hair fixation
Love the eyes meeting and holding across rooms
Love the multiple Khanaks
Love how the attraction shines through the antagonism
Love how he spends so much of his time thinking about her
Love the scrunchie stealing
Love the being jealous of dead husband
Love how she is almost COMPELLED to compare him to Suraj
Love how Suraj sounds better to her mind while Shaan sounds better to her on some elemental level-even though she doesn't know it.
Love how they have started living for each other. A glimpse, his thoughts, her thoughts, the looks.

Sigh.
Update soon!


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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
loving all these updates! One of the better stories I have read, it's different and the setting/ situation and dialogues set it apart! Thanks for three awesome updates!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
Aditeee...


Loved it.

Loved this khanak.

When is next update?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Thanks you guys!
You are the BEST!
You make it worth my while to stay up and write until 1 AM
Priya........ "sophisticated"? THANKS SO MUCH DI
I hope it was............ I tried a lil to make it different
Yumna......... poori kavita likh daali aapne to
Your summary sounds better than my story
Vandu: sheher mein itna to chalta hai boss. You are family di, I can take pangas with you and tease you. It suddenly struck me and I just typed it. Could be a certain somebody I know........ or could be Khanak
Eeach and everyone of the rest........ I know I am not recalling all names here
Yasharan rocks
Karishma
VAISH
Ad girl
Krithika
Angel
RB81
Roshni
AND EACH and everyone that I missed inadvertently
Thanks for liking it so much
This is my day job today ..............
To type the next 3 parts and hopefully wrap it up by tonite
Love
A
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