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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Ad....I am a huge fan...of your writing..you know that already....

no one....no one has the ability to make one feel for the characters in seconds the way you do....I love your shaan I love your Khanak....your story is so rushed and yet so thoughtful......really hats off lady!!! HATS OFF!!!!

And why do you want to end this? You are the one who loves this falling in love phase....come on drag it a bit....😃

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

hey Aditee..............

loved the update..............

its wonderful...............

khanak is going to fall & shan is going to hold her(i think)...........lovely

looking forward 4 next part.....................

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

dnt end it soon ady...plss!

waitin for the nxt part!....

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Angel,

Thanks

She is already off the ladder!

This is not a cliched story.......... a squeaky clean one........ no touching what so ever

If I can afford it!🤣

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

@Ads...aage ki update..wen u doing it???

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Brielient update aditi..very nice
nice to see khanak confussen for herself that she loved shaan ot not
loved their emotions and expression
waiting for next part

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

keep it up Aditee! just loving this!

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@Medusa..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

heyy aditee...!! Fab writingg...!!

Read all d parts...beautifully written..
luvv d characterss....n yeahh d joker shaan..hehe...
Everything is just too gudd...awesome...!!
Nw..do cont..soon....

Shama...

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Very nice

My most favourite part was all the things they notice about each other when she bumps into him.We never get that on the show-have to make it all up ourselves-thus loving the list!

Love how they take it all in within seconds.Sigh.

As much as I sometimes love cliches absolutely loved that you did not go that way with the ladder-nice way to get in that waist factor😃