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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#381

hei aditee,
the dinner was quite yummy n khanak asked shaan to try veg once in a while..shaan was very natural when he tried the panneer from khanak's plate..as far as the lunch date..oh khanak wears t-shirts..u always described her in skirts n tops accordingly..so i never thought that..n shaan appreciating the letters inscribed on it..that is soo shaan..naughty boy..but the part B was short..i think u posted as much as u finished..thanks for the update..continue soon.

Khanak was looking out for reasons y their relation wont work..her bhai wud accept him even if he is punjabi but aada wont..oh god..wat is this yaar?

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@Medusa..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#382

OMG...aditee....

nw tht ws beautiful.............!!wonderful update..........😳

Luvddd it ......!!just awesomeee.........

cnt find exact words to describe it.....!its just beautiful...!!

n shaan instead of paula....umm.....intresting huh...waiting to knw more.....😉do cont. soon.........😛

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#383

Omg

Aditeee

Another awesome one !!!

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: dishbhan
Aditee,

I absolutely LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Cheers,
Dish

And hate you as well ... hamesha tangha kar jati hain ... pata nahi suli par latakte hue kabhi jaan na nikal jaye meri!!!!

~Cheers,
Dish

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#385

Awesome update Aditee 👏
Simply superb 😃
Continue soon... 😊

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#386

Hey Aditee...........

awesome,superb update loved it.................

amazing description...............

shan in place of Paula...................it wiil be interesting.......................

pls update soon..........................want to know more.............................

waiting for ur next update............................

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#387

hmmmmm.....i have no words to describe ur FF nd i blame u for that...u have left no stone unturned 4 writing dis masterpiece that keeps me hooked to the forum itself in the anticipation for your next update....Love d Uber Sexy yet Classy Shaantanu and the traditional yet modern Khanak....a match surely made in heaven😳😳😳....well done Maestro you have just nailed it for sure with this work.....👏👏👏

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#388

Shantanu is very brave, daring and naughty here, wow! What an update can't wait for more!😃

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#389

Adi..... you are something else...loved loved the 'connected only by the kiss'....the way you have built this whole story of second chances for Khanak...is beautiful...at first the fact that you paint Shaan so perfect affected me a little...but then when you paint Khanak so realistic...I want to believe that such stories exist...where for every realistic Khanak...there is a perfect Shaan...so in the sense,,,it is not Shaan who is perfect all by himself, it is for Khanak he is perfect...forever and always...

Paula ka punya ka kaam kya rang laayegi....???...jaldi update kar...

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#390

Thanks to the silent 780 and the articulate 20!😳 yet again.......

You all make it worth my while to write.

I want it to be fantastic, romantic and hopefully utterly real.

Thats how I like my love stories.

Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaz

Tujhe Shaan perfect laga?

Really?

I thought, I did a fair job of bringing out flaws in both.

He is arrogant, snotty and thinks no end of himself.

She jumps to conclusions and is tactless (See I gave her one less. As much as I like him more he is more flawed. That should tell all my critics how much I love Khanak😉)

Huh! You "saw" a perfect Shaan?

Hmmm.......

Well, good for me.

I like the guy anyway

So why not!

Perfect guys make fanciful love stories

We already have a Shaan that is a slob, unemployed, and a slacker😉

Mine can be focussed and ambitious

Makes him more desirable.

Atleast for me, not sure about anybody else!

Lovely note. Thanks for reading

Love you all