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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

is it me or did this update have lot more hindi dialogues between them?? BUT Me luurving it..continue soon

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Ok Dont Kill me -

Link to this pic - http://im.in.com/media/download/wallpapers/2011/Jan/ragini-khanna1_420x315.jpg

Ziana Chauhan....

Hahaha !!! If you are planning to cast anyone else then dont.....Leave the characterization open....Warna u have had it....

As for the part....LOL..........It was tooooooooooo short for me coz I already read half of it before...LOL....when you sent it to me for second opinion.😭😆

Love Zia !!!!! Cant wait to see the dinner party at K house...LOL....

Dying to see the Khanak-Zia conversations...

I promise....If you dont update A.S.A.P......I will not comment on your fic next time.....Iss baar hi I had decided not to comment.....but then I thought I will warn you well in advance this time and practice what m saying from next time !😆😆😆

Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

hi pooja............

its third time i am trying post my reply & their is some problem with my internet...........

wonderful & lovely update..............

loved the convo of Zia n Rohan.............n their sarcastic comments...............

shan the peacemaker b/w them very well described...............

shan wants to become boyfriend of khanak n khanak thinks of him as his bestfriend................

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amazing updsate...........n have no words to praise it..............

ur writing skills r awesome...............

when i saw ur PM i was amazed that u updated thanks that u updated,.................n 4 the PM...........

i have a request please update its complicated..........................

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

GOD!...Shanak!...they make me goo crazzyyy!....

awesome update PD!...hopefully Shaan will propose/confess soon??...

Shanak roxx!...im in shanak la-la land now... *dreaming...*

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Reserved Reserved...
PD .. Finallly !!!

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

oh pooja,
u finally got time to update..thanks for tat..really this zia is cute..both rohan n zia sitting on each other's nerves is real fun to read..didnt khanak really notice tat shaan confessed his love..but shaan's covo with coco n himself was real cute..do update soon yaar..loved each n every part..so khanak too started loving shaan..she too is helpless how to talk to him..hope in the dinner with khandelwal's family zia will do something that wud make shaan n khanak confess their feelings for each other..n khanak has to to talk to her dad..dont make us wait for a long time yaar..
luv,
ramani

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

it ws superb n nw waitn for khanak 2 b sure dat she is in luv W*H shaan.....................pls conitnue soon

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Excilient update pooja🤗
loved the all part and dilogue !!!!!
glad to see rohan and tashu together !!!!
poor khanak still stuck with aaditya..usko kab samaj ayegi !!!
loved to poor shaan and his frustation and talk about him self loved his
all dilogue when talk about him self "gayi bais pani me vo to mujhe best friend hi samajhti hai🤣
@vandhu..good choice lol !!!! loved your idea for zia and loved ragini too
waiting for next update pooja😃

Edited by Deepali88 - 14 years ago