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purvi08

@purvi08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

shantanu's dream was🤣

great pooja

update soon

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Hi Pooja

wonderful update loved it...........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

beginning ..............was amazing i read & i was like i will faint............wow very well written............😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

oh it was only a dream............shan is frustrated.............awesome.......😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

loved convo b/w Khanak & Zia...........& wow shan send im to Zia...........loved the meesage u described..........don't tell khanak i forgot to tell u khanak working in trendz is my khanak.......lovely........

lovely dialogues..........

shan & zia's convo lovely interupted by khanak..............

at the dinner their behaviour was wonderfully described................

loved the update......................

thanks 4 the PM

Happy Holi...........

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

loved the update Pooja, thanks for the pm!

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Shit I forgot to commment ...

Okay reading again .... Will update soon !!!!!

WOW PD !!!!!!

I am a biggg deewaaaani of your storytelling and Dialogues and Everything !!!!!

I was stuck at the sex dream ..... !!!!!!

Loved the Convos betweeen everyone and the Latttu Shantanu !!!!!

Swaying to soft music ... Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayeeee ... I can so imagine them do that !!!!!!!

Update sooon ... Bring Back Tashu yaaaar ....

PS : Agar next update main REAL kiss nahi hua ... toh dekh tu .... hahaha ..just kidding !!!!!

Edited by rbo_d_best - 14 years ago

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Awe shaan having a ahem dream lol and good to see zia and khanak hitting it off and now zia has found out that she's shaantunus khanak how sweet and haha shaan when telling zia about the sex dream lol was so funny I loved zias reaction and haye shaan behaves like a love sick puppy when khanak is around and haha zia and Sunil part was so cute and funny too and khushboo telling the four to get out poor rohan and khanak as they were actually trying to listen while zia and shaan were bored and haha love zia and rohans nok jok too cute and ooh looks like zias got a plan to get shaan and khanak together and actually asking for rohans help anyways great update and cant wait ti read more 😊

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

boss.... too good hai!!!! agla part kab aayga.... jali karo...i know creativity takes time but jyada der na karna plllssss

~cheers,
Dish

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

@pooja no time no see u are Busy i guess may be with exams..Happy holi

Loved the part pooja 😊

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

idk if i forgot to give you a comment in ur other update...

I loved the last part so well. it was too good. especially Rohan and Zia's fights. but u showed a lot of Zia in the last update...

I loved her character. it was too good.

I wonder what khanak would feel towards shaan now...? especially with Zia there. I wonder why u are showing Shaan confused. lol

neways great update pooja

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Another great update Pooja👏⭐️👏......Love ShaNak's situation.....I think by the time Shaan gets the courage to confess....They will be in Simla for the wedding and Khanak will confess first😍.....

Rohan & Zia sound very interesting....Infact I am tempted to suggest a photo of her character😉....

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose
Another great update Pooja👏⭐️👏......Love ShaNak's situation.....I think by the time Shaan gets the courage to confess....They will be in Simla for the wedding and Khanak will confess first😍.....
Rohan & Zia sound very interesting....Infact I am tempted to suggest a photo of her character😉....

may vandhu also suggest Zia charactor and she is ragini khanak..very suteble that charactor
i loved her...and i think perfect zia character..cuteeeeeeeeeeee😆

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