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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#301

Awesome update..... U dnt knw how much im fighting with my self 2 not read the 11th part again...... I have exam tomorrow and im still thinkin abt ur update...... I'll tell detail mein l8r....... Tomorrow after reading this part again......😉😉 when are u updating the next part?
p.s. I was not underestimating shaan re...... I was just telling ke i trust him he will not do anything bad......

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@Medusa..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#302

Woowww manjuuuuuuu............................................!!

Confession part??....ahhh.....luvdd it luvdd it......soooo muchhh........😳😳

and actually it was a surprise confession...😆😆..but was soo real....😍😳😳...

Her entry...tht ws rly cutee...d way she sat on d sofa n all ws justt too sweeettt........!!😳😳

luvdd their each and every dialogues...especially d confession partt....................!!😍

n awwwww......he used collect her things...n used to keep those wid him..just too close to himm.....hayeee.......tht ws just chooooooooo....cutee......😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

n yeahh scarf fight...their fighting too ws just rockinn....😆😆...

do cont. soon.....w8inn disp...................!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

*sighh..*☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

luvsss,

shama.......

Edited by shamasallfav - 14 years ago

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#303

omg this is the confession part? 😲 i was really amazed by this..... i mean i didn't expected shan will say it so soon looking at his sadu attitude 😆 but the way whole part lead to it is just superb 😳 hmm so ab next is shanak romance na?😉 m so excited to see i mean read it.......continue soon di 😊

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

hey manju di!.....luk at our ranks yaar! :(

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

That was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L....!

Just Magnificent !!! Adorable tha re ekdum !!

Loved everything from the "he cares...cares not" style cloth washing to him refusing to let her into the house...!

Her getting annoyed at Gopal being treated better than her by him....LOL...

Him saying that the scarf is mine....Her asking if he intends to keep her heart with him as well...?

Him saying that being with him wud be more painful and not to complain later than he didnt warn her....

It was allll soooo lovely...! Shaan is soooo cute !!

The nose kiss......the tears,....The confession....The promise to be there with each other at every step.....

Just AWESOME !!! I loved it....Now holi will be her most memorable day for a new reason !!!

P.S - One question.....Last part me I got confused......Is Jai still wheel chair ridden or did you say that he recovered?? He is wheel chair ridden for life right??

CONTINUE SOON !! Want a first date...Make it dinner...not lunch...! LOL !!

Luv,

Vandu

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#306

Lovely manita!!

liked it in full !! ur style of wriitng is really very good with clarity!!!😊

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

👏👏👏👏awesum update DoC M....nways m HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE wid Mr Shantanu Khande:wal frm UR FF Update jaldi *hugs*!!!

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#308

Ohhhh Lala!!

Lovely girl!!! Love the emotions that you succeed in stirring in not only Shanak but us yr readers everytime you update!!

Loved the Khanak self talk....she's so sure of her love!

And of course the scene in Shaan's apt...now there are no doubts!!:)

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#309

Manitaa ....

What do i say ?????
All words like Mindblowing fantastic Superb are just not the correct ones to describe the beauty this part holds !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shantanu and Khanak are made for each other !!!!
There couldnt be a better way of showing this Manita !!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I am dumbstruck !!!!
Will comment again in detail !!!!