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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

hi manita

first of all , a big sorry for not commenting for any update...

actually , i used to read all ur updates and i indeed found our FF very interesting, but was too lazy to post nething, so on behalf of all missed comments , i m posting now..

just love the way u have woven the whole plot, each n every update makes me more eager n excited to wait for the next one...

abt this current one,

khanak's monologue was too cute..i was just laughing reading the whole thing

Shanak's interaction was so sweet n emotional..i could just imagine the whole scene...

i have even read it more then once, u wont believe dat!

1 more thing

thanks for including me in ur PM list, even though i never commented.....

now please update part 12 tonight only..i can wait even late night for it.......plzzzzz plzzzzz..

PS: why do everyone in dis forum writes so superb Shanak romantic scenes, i keep on imagining them, aab main padai kaise karu bolo .

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#292

Hi Manita
Superb update
Loved the part
So nice awesome👏
Finally Shantanu confessed his love
Very well written
Thanks yaar 😊

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Am speechless. one word : WOW.

really left me with no words...i'll tell you later what all I loved...or maybe not cuz I'll just quote the entire thing out...

*edited*

I am going to read it again now😳

Edited by vatsalya - 14 years ago

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#294

manita i m totally speechless oh god yaar hw do u write such stuff i ws totally imagining the scenes & dey ver beautiful & pls dnt make us wait more pls update soon coz nw its d most difficult thng 2 wait for d next part