FF~Trespassers Prohibited #1~ Note : Pg 152 - Page 103

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

Ohhh... that one... i still shud have other options naa... waise both are almost same... i just have to choose the better one !!!😉

Originally posted by: k.krithika

Hi Manita
Wow what an amazing part 😃
Awesome update once again too good just loved it 👏
Beautifully written I love all the characters in this FF u have described about everyone so well superb writing and I love this Shantanu and Khanak so much and I know its hard to find such people in reality but i know there are such people in reality who love their loved ones unconditionally 😃
I enjoyed reading this update it was so real.
I loved the last part beautifully written 😊
"We can go back anytime, but right now, the most important thing is to keep our self- respect and dignity intact. We will not leave as traitors. We will prove that we were loyal to the organization that we worked for."

"I am so proud of you Chotey," said Akshay with a glint of pride in his eyes.

"Me too''" she whispered very softly again, smiling at him, missed by Akshay but heard by Shaan.

Please continue soon want to know how they solve this issue and i want them to be awarded for their loyalty and hard work by their organization.

Thanks a lot 😊

❤️ Krithika

Originally posted by: simiv

Wow!!! Just wow!!...

You brought a beautiful twist in the story and have dealt with it so well so far...love and suspense!! What a grt mix!!!!..Love it!!!

Feel sorry for Shanak but I'm sure they'll pull through..!!!:)

Lots of love, Simi

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loving Shantanu in this update, like wow, his assurance to Khanak, how he is trying to prove her innocence, it's amazing!👏

keep up the great work Manita!

Originally posted by: KrazEee

What an amazing update it was...loving the twist and how well its being handled...love your Shan...he is such a loveable character...Liking the calmness in him - the way he revealed he is supposed to fire her 😆

keeping previous update in mind I think I might be able to guess who is behind all this fiasco...but, won't say will wait and see how you reveal it

Loved Akshay coming down to help...Looking fwd to what these 4 will get upto...

Update Soon 😃

Originally posted by: Ujjwala

Lovely Update ...

Shanak's relationship has reached a new level now ...

I liked their faith in each other and the way he stands by her ...

Loved Akshay too :)

Pls donot delay the next update .. it's a humble request 😊

Originally posted by: vatsalya

Oye priya di, any idea when will mani di stop spamming her own thread🤣

I think naye update ke liye she'll need a new thread :D

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

superb manita I did not expectt hsi suspense of khanaks lap top

..it was out of the world Roshni i loved ur comment jisne bhi kahnak ka lap top use kiya ho keede pde usko..I wish the same 😊 prwan cury nd rice tastes yummy ...even from here.. awesome update keep it up😊

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

i know !!! I ve been telling her too !!!

See mani !! For once me and vatty are aggrreing to a same thing !!