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-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Shili................... This was Chilli Hot !!!!

oooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmggggggggggg ... I fainted collapsed died , went to heaven and am still there !!!!!!!!!!

Uffffffffffffffffffff ... it was superHot !!!!

Ab Jaldi se Update karo .....

I want A MORNING AFTER Moment !!!!!!!!!! *stomps my foot*

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

OMG!!!! OMG!! OMG!!!

i dnt knw what to write after this😳😳

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purvi08

@purvi08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

shilpa.......i dont know what to comment so this is for you🤗🤗🤗

i am still☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ i am speechless..............purvi

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Ramani

@RB81

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

hei shilpa,
u updated after a real long time n update was toooooooooo passionate..n v r all total besharam..loved it....no words to write..come back n continue..
luv,
ramani

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Fariba100

@Fariba100

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

wowwww !!!! u hev made them moreee moreeeeeeee romanticccc !!!!

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Krithika

@k.krithika

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

OMG Shilpa
I dont know what to comment for the first time
Damn hot and passionate love
Good job 😊

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

OMG..shilpa..what is this? itni besharmi...faint..faint ..faint...and tell u we enjoyed a lot...

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Ok Back with my comment...

sorry the last time I couldn't type because I forgot what I had to write.... but now I don't lmao...

neways so...

when i was reading ur marriage part, me not being hindu, I got the fastest and simplest form of understand how the pheres work...i have read detail work too but urs the best I like so far, easy and to the point.

as for the shaadi...i loved it how u showed Shaan's friends bugging him. lmao

ok now to the next part...why exactly his mom lied to his dad? i get it that for his sister but is she thinking that he will come around? this is messed up. she shud understand the sacredness of the thing called marriage.

secondly why am i fearing that he will leave her the next day? i hope not. i hope something else is a better reason for all the present scenes

btw a sgguestion...idk bout others but can you write present scenes too? i mean go back and forth between present and past then it makes the story a parallel interest...

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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#179

omg....omg.......omg........... wat was that............😲😲😲😲😲😲

god........

i just dont have words at all...........😳😳😳😳😳

glad i dint read it ystday.........

otherwise i wud have surely flunked in chem 2.............😳😳😳😳😳😳

im feeling dizzy........😳😳😳😳😳

sumone help me plzzzzzzzzzzzz...............😳😳😳😳😳😳

im still dreaming abt it.............😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
that was very besharm! haiyee, I am fainting too Priya!😳

Glad Shantanu and Khanak got married but next is facing his family

thanks dear..

but plz don faint..i want u to be fit fro reading my next update..

and yeah, c how dey face his family