The truth of love- my first FF part 17 Page87

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#191

hey Shilpa

wow ...............superb update......................

loved it........................

& emotional too...............

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deepali

@-Deepali-

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Thanks for update Shili
will be comes Shortly

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Bona

@bones88

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

shilssssss🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 beautiful update but highly emotional one too😭

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Ramani

@RB81

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

hei shilpa,
gr8 update..but girish was too harsh on khanak..how could a man in such position talk to a woman in such a manner..that was too bad of girish..but khanak's reply for her rate was simply superb..when khanak wanted to share this with shaan he too got angry with her..felt bad at that time..but when shaan came rushing to her felt very happy..waiting for the surprise..continue soon..

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

shils
its superb n sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot
kya likhti hai yaar
vatty ka asar..lololo
loved it sweety superb:)

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.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

read last two parts together...and it was treat...fantastic writing...

their SR was like tooo hott....

felt bad for Khanak...waiting for the surprise though...

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

nice update shilp!!

good writting!!! liked the way story is moving fwd, liked khanak nd shaan's dad convo.

but plz update soon.

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Hi Shilpa
Awesome update
Very well written 👏 👏
I liked Khanak's answer these lines " each and every breath your son takes every second, each and every drop of blood which flows in his veins, each and every part of his body, his soul, if you can have a account of that, you will know my rate…because that is where I reside."
Thanks 😊
Continue soon...