SS~~Maaf kardo khanak- Update FINAL part pg10

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

This is Brilliant Gurl !!!! You need to update more !!! Do continue !!!!

Loved Shaan-Khanak convo & Hiten's advice 😆 😆 😆

Update soon

@Rooj - Thanks for encouraging this gurl !!!! You have discovered another Gem !!!

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jyothi1989

@jyothi1989

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

👏👏👏👏 rafia brilliant piece of writing dear loved it plzz keep writing quite often u r really gud in it

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

shal-nuts....maine kuch nahi kiya...she did it on her own...

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

thank you so much smitha, simi, rooj, shalini and jyothi 🤗

seriously i appreciate all the comments and now i understand why ppl😳 because i seriously am its nice hearing such positive feedback and i also appreciate all other creative members on the forum even more as i know how much effort and time goes into their work

and rooj stop being so modest this is not the time to be be feeling guilty😉

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Sneha Patro

@snehapatro

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

hey rain awsome OS yaar lovely lines.... the dialogues are tooooo guddddddddd expecting something like this in today's epsiode......
loved it......plz continue soon....waiting for ur next update.....😃

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Bona

@bones88

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

rafs🤗 OMGGG what an OS 😲 I am speechless😲... just brilliant... the dialogues.. soo beautifully written❤️ please continue sooon... loveed it❤️

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Rafia...I really liked it...the lines especially...you must write more re....

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

rainy: tu baaz ayegi ya nahi? do chitar lagaongi aur tum theke ho jayogi🤣🤣🤣

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: rooj-i
rainy: tu baaz ayegi ya nahi? do chitar lagaongi aur tum theke ho jayogi🤣🤣🤣

kya???? main samja nahin- arey you know my hindi/urdu isnt great

@ saaz thanks miss speaking to you

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Rafia 🤗 You write so well and how comes we didn't know huh? ;-) Your gone be in demand now for OS or SS now!

It's amazing and loved some of the lines in there,portrayed brilliantly shanak's usp nok-jok and hopefully something like this similar will be portrayed in todays episode with sacarsm,seriousness and nok-jok

will be waiting update soon :D Mauh x

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