OS- True love never fails- part3 page7- epi-page8

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

it was awesome yaar...... your os should go to the hall of fame if they had one for os writers.... amazing... mindblowing....

i have nothing more to say.. i am speechless.... wow....

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

oh fantastic sweety loved it sr was good ha................khanaks dialog omg it was so touchy yaar

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destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

@shilpa lovely and me too loved khanaks dialogue😃

Edited by sshriyaa84 - 14 years ago

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Sonali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Shilpa loved it keep it up!

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rafia rashid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

shilpa loved part 3 and epilogue love the way shaan handled each task and thankyou for making him fall at the last hurdle but his attempt and coming sp close ws enough for khanak who then forgives him. i like the float away/ free spirit nature of govind and the part he played in bringing them back together, and wow at how they got back together😳🤣 and haha khanak broke shaan s nose as a kid and wow yeah log kitne hooneymoon main jayenge lol

loved this os pls keep them coming you write really well xxx

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Daebak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

ROFL........LOved it..!

Loved the Bachpan ka tadka you got in the Epilogue !! Funny !!

Do write whenever you get time !

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deepali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

wow shilpa...Just I read 2 & 3 part its amazing yaar.. you such a good writter..🤗
Loved all part and all of them mindblowing..well done👏
Loved below part too😉

Khanak nods , gives her hands, he takes her to another place, rather a beautiful place'makes her sit on a bed of flower petals 'goes near her-gently kisses her palms, takes off her bangles, kisses her bare hands , moves up , takes out her earings, kisses her ears, then gently carasses her hair, kisses her forehead, her eyes, brushes his nose wid hers , kisses her lips , moves down, kisses her neck---then gets up , takes off his shirt , again goes near her , makes her sit , takes her hands and places it on his bare chest'Khanak blushes, slowly hugs him , her hands start wandering on his back, holding him more tightly as he slowly and untied the dori of her blouse and kissed her neck while his hands wandered somewhere inside her ghagra, until they reached their destination, giving Khanak, the ultimate pleasure, the content of being with her beloved,as he took her to his own world".Finaly they became one again.🤣 🤣
Omgg itne Kiss Hope cvs serial me dekhate😍

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Ohhhh! That was sooooo cute, an absolute delight..wow, but I want them to stay in Dhulwadi a while longer or visit very often!! But a great conclusion to the problem!!👏👏👏

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

oh god the end was gr8 shaan and khanak bachpan ke sathi nak tod di so sweet yaar ....................loved it.............u r too good kyon sone jaa rahi hu min nahi dungi tumko sone write fff s yaar ur really good ha shilpa