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-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Hailaaa... This was mind-blowing... Their conversations are so gripping ...

Shaan & Talwarbaazi & camel ride ... God save the Talwar & Camels 😆 😆 😆

Great update dear.... Update soon gurl !!!!

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sweetsute

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best
Hailaaa... This was mind-blowing... Their conversations are so gripping ...

Shaan & Talwarbaazi & camel ride ... God save the Talwar & Camels 😆 😆 😆

Great update dear.... Update soon gurl !!!!

u r not feeling bad for poor Shan-------aage dekho uska band kaise bajta hai

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-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sweetsute

u r not feeling bad for poor Shan-------aage dekho uska band kaise bajta hai

Nope not at all....... He deserves for doubting Khanak ... for making her cry .... For mistrusting that one person who loves him more than her life !!!!!

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

Nope not at all....... He deserves for doubting Khanak ... for making her cry .... For mistrusting that one person who loves him more than her life !!!!!

but u know what... aftr the story shifts to dhulwadi... and shaan tries to woo khanak and she doesn budge...... v r gonna feel bad for shaan

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Shilpa darling just read both the parts adn loved it....loved lvoed Govind....what a character...Can't wait for th next part 😃

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.Dilwale.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

@shilpa

thanks for the PM darling. i can't tell you how much i enjoy reading your OS. i love the elements of surprise in your story. and is govind supposed to be hiten's character? if yes, i would love to see him play something similar in the serial! very well written darling!😃

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vidisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Wow...i Like it ..cant wait to read more.

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Wow shilpa!! You've rendered me speechless!! Literally!! Loved the rustic flavor...and fantastic flow!!:) Update soon! Simi

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

wow shilpa ab aayega maza love the way youve added khanaks conditions for shaan earning her love back and the way it came about that liss and shaan's impulsive passion exploding lol- the way khanak keeps ignoring shaan and the way he gets frustrated is too good and im liking the way this govind guy has been incorporated he has a mysterious air to him.

cant wait to read the next part. x

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Bona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Shilpa🤗 🤗🤗 firstly sorry for the late comments..... I loveeed ur FF❤️ the way u write is amazingggggg... the first and second part... I soo wish this happens in the show.. the dialogues were brilliant... loveed it❤️ can't wait for the next part😃

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