OS- True love never fails- part3 page7- epi-page8

It was night, but not dark.becoz it was moonlight, and the whole sky was glittering with stars-millions and millions'..The prince came riding on his horse- he was dressed in black,he was bestowed wid looks dat would charm anyone-just too handsome.He could get anyone in dis world, their was no damsel who would refuse to be his soulmate'''But he was in search of someone else, someone who was different, unique, from his world. He came to a halt as he saw a figure standing at distance away. He came near d figure, saw it closely'''It was a human figure, a girl-wearing a black gown, a dress which fitted her body , revealing her slim and petite figure'He got down from his horse, came further close to her, her face was covered with a veil, he slowly removed the veil, saw her face'at an instant, he was dumb, he would not move a bit, he could not even blink his eyes- she was so beautiful, he was just messmerised, he could not figure out which was more beautiful- the glittering sky , the place wid flowers or his princess-yes she was his princess, only his'''he wanted to touch her, feel her, make her smile his forever'..But before he would even budge, she took out his hand and kissed it- He slowly carrased her face 'it was smooth, he wanted to kiss her--------his hands were on her waist, hers on his shoulders, slowly they danced, to the tune of the wind, the chirping birds, in their paradise''.He moved a bit back, bend on his knees, took out a ring and proposed her,-"Will u be ,mine forever and ever" . She was smiling, he knew her answer, he closed his eyes'''he would hear a voice-"Khanak, Khanak"''It was not her voice, was a male voice, not his either, he opened his eyes, saw a person stand behind him'''.Khanak turned back, saw dat person, she tried to get away from Shantanu, but he was not ready to leave her, he hold her tight, she begged him wid her eyes, slowly her hands loosened his grip, he kept on holding her, till only their fingers touched, then she was gone, he called for her, shouted her name- "Khanak, mujhe chod ke mat jao, I love u '..please"'''But she was gone, gone forever.

Khanak, khanak, mujhe chod ke mat jao, he kept on ranting'''..Suddenly he woke up, it was a dream-a bad dream''Shan shook his head, y have I seen dis dream, she is mine , only mine. He stretched his arms to feel her, but could not, he turned towards to the other side of the bed-it was empty''''It was not a dream, it was a reality, she was gone indeed, his princess was gone, -she left him'''..His eyes filled with tears''..Shan could not believe himself, everything was finished in a day'''.He was crying, for the first time in his life, he ever remembered, he quickly got down, went to d bathroom to freshen himself, '''but could not.." Main main ro kyun rahan''koi dekha ga to kya sochega, nahi Shan stop crying.." These words kept on his mind , but his tears didn't stopped. Finally he gave up and searched for something- He put on his goggles.

At the breakfast table

Khusboo-" harilal, yeh kya hai?.. Nashte mein kuch acha kyun nahi hai"

Harilal- " woh madam, woh mujhe to yehi banana ata hai"

Khusboo- "kyun, Khanak kahan hai, usne tumhe sikhaya hoga na"

Harilal-" Khanak madam to nahi hai"

Khusboo-" What? Who kahan gayi?

Madhavi-" arey Khusboo, woh Dhulwadi gayi, kal mujhe pooch rahi thi, to maine kaha jao"

Khusboo-" Madam ko achanak apne maike ki yaad kaise aagayi''neways, jab hum chahte the ki who jaye to kabhi nahi gayi, aab jab we don't want her to go, she left'''...such a confusing character"

Akshaye came to the breakfast table

Khusboo-" Akshaye , aao, tum bhi baith ke harilal ke nashte ka maza lo"

Akshay-"haan woh" before he could complete his sentence, his gaze went to Shan

"arey wah rockstar, looking cool haan. Kya baat hai biwi ko gaye ek din bhi nahi hua and tu abhi se ladkiyon ko impress karne chala"

Shan-" bhaiya, nahi who"

Khusboo-" Akshaye tum bhi na'waise Shan, yeh Khanak kab wapas ayegi'''.i m missing her theplas"

Shan-" woh kabhi nahi ayegi" he was lost in his thoughts

Khusboo-" What?"

Shan-" hmm, kuch nahi bhabhi, aaplog breakfast kijiye, main ata hoon "

Madhavi-" beta kahan ja rahe ho? Breakfast to karlo"

Shan-" no mom .Bhook nahi hai"

Saying dis, he went away

Madhavi-" ise kya ho gaya?"

In Dhulwadi

Tears rolled up in her eyes, as Khanak kept on thinking these words, sitting in d bus' Dhulwadi, Dhulwadi- the conductor was shouting, "ooh madam agaya Dhulwadi, utarne ka irada nahi hai kya"

The conductors' voice shook her .she got down from d bus.. There she was- at her place, her Dhulwadi, which was her own. She could not believe dat everything was over, her chapter in Mumbai was over, and she was back again-back to the place, which she could call her own, where people understood the meaning of relations, where her childhood memories were prevailing, where still dere was a chance of humanity, unlike in the big cities, where everything was fake''. She belonged to dis place, only this place'' Khanak didi, Khanak didi'suddenly she was surrounded by some kids'her friends, she was delighted''

.She went to her house, her mayaka- Her friends called for her mother- " dekho to kaun aya hai"

Her mother-"kaun hai"..she came out, --she could not believe her eyes, standing in front of her was her daughter, her flesh, one whose a glimpse , she was eager for so many days to see'. Khanak ran to her mother's arms and hugged her tightly- tears were flowing from her eyes, she didn't knew they were tears of happiness on seeing her parents or tears of grief of being away from her husband'

Shan was sitting alone on the rocks, thinking about Khanak, reminiscing all of their moments..Suddenly a hand felt on his shoulder

"oh bhai saab, kya soch rahe ho"

Shan turned back, saw a man, he didn't knew him, the man seemed to be drunk.

"ladki ka mamla hai."

Shan-" woh...."'

Shan-"dekho, don't irritate me, jao yahan se"

Arey main to chala jaonga, mera kya hai'yeh lehre bhi chalengi, hawa bhi chalegi and yeh waqt bhi'ruke to tumhi ho, mian majnu'

Saying these words, the man left, Shan kept wondering- he was right, jab kuch bhi nahi ruka to y should I stop my life, just becoz she left'so wat uske pehle bhi main jeeta tha, aab bhi jiyunga, apne marzi se'usne mujhe Shantanu Khandelwal banaya, aab main phir se Shan banuga-who Shan, jisne kabhi kisiki parwah nahi ki, jo sirf apne bare mein sochta tha'.yes Shan is back..

Saying these words to himself, he stood up and went away to find solace- he decided to go to a place where he can forget everything and just enjoy'.he went to bar, to discos, to clubs, everywhere, but was he really able to find peace, no, absolutely no..becoz where ever he went, her gaze followed him, even in d glass of beer , he could see her smiling face'Y would she leave him, she was his shadow ,afterall..

He was frustrated, he came back to his home, he didn't had the courage to go his room, he went to gym, he started doing pushups, wen suddenly a felt a pair of hands carrasing his face- he saw her, his khanak-she was smiling- he wanted to smile, kiss her lips, but instantly his smile changed to anger-" y r u here? Jine kyun nahi deti, tum mujhe, ..just, just leave me'goo, get out of my life". He was shouting, suddenly 'Shan, Shan, "

It was Sam, -"whats wrong wid u?"

Shan, turned back-"tum?"

Sam- " haan woh main Khanak se milne ayi thi, par Sunil uncle ne kaha ki who apne gaun gayi hai

Shan-" yeah, she is gone, gone forever"

Sam-"kya? Tum aise kyun keh rahe ho?

Shan-" kyun yakin nahi hota..mujhe bhi nahi hua, par meri kismet ne mujhe hamesha surprises diya, dangerous surprises, is baar bhi"

Sam-" Shan , mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai tu kya bol raha hai"

Shan-"samajh mein to mujhe bhi nahi aay Sam, ki kab main Khanak ke pyar mein pagal ho gaya, itna ki kuch aur dikha hi nahi'yeh samajh hi nahi paya ki uska dil, uski atma hamesha uski gaon mein hi thi, uske suraj ke pass, maine to wahan se ek chalti firti lash se shadi karke, yahan laya, - usme kuch jaan bhi bhari, par usne toh aab meri jaan hi leli'gayi woh mujhe chod ke, apne Dhulwadi"

Sam , was confused at his words, she could not understand wat was going wrong, suddenly her gaze went to his mobile, which was kept on d table, she took d cell, at a moment , she understood wat was wrong- " dekh shan, tu jo soch raha hai, waisa kuch nahi hai..woh Rahul"

Shan- "yeah Rahul, how is he, haan?"

Sam'" Rahul to thik hai, par'"She narrated everything to Shan- "Dekh Shan, Rahul apni is galti se'."

Before, she would complete her sentence, he was gone, she looked for him for a moment, Suddenly- "ooh no.Shit! mujhe use rokna chaiye"

Sam came running downstares, -"Shan, ruk , kahan jar aha is waqt-" She clutched his hands-

Shan-freeing himself, -"Sam, mera haath chod, leave me"

Sam-"nahi, tu meri puri baat sun pehle.

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Shan was in no mood to listen to her, he was filled wid anger, Sam shouted-"harilal, Dharam"

Dharam-"kya hua madam"

Sam-"arey woh Shan ko jane mat do"

Dharam , instantly blocked Shan's way

Shan-"Dharam , mere raste se hat, main nahi janta main kya karunga"

Dharam-"Shan baba main nahi hatunga, bas.."saying these , he snatched the car keys from Shan's hands

Shan-" Dharam, car keys wapas kar, come on"

Dharam-"nahi"

Shan looked here and there, saw a bunch of keys, lying, he took them, went out, inspite of Dharam and Sam's efforts to stop him..He took out his bike, it was raining'

Rahul was sitting in his home, thinking , cursing himself for his deeds, wen suddenly he heard someone shouting.. He came to the drawing room.Shan was standing there..He came close to Shan-"Dekh Shan, woh"

Before he could complete his sentence, a hard blow came on his face, he was not prepared for dis..As he tried to gain composure, again the punch came back, --He was thrashed for a hundered times by d the boy whose life, he wanted to destroy, the husband whose wife's character he was trying to spoil-by Shan , who was there to seek revenge, for what he has done to his love'..Rahul was badly injured, he knew he was wrong, so he dared not to raise his hands back, at Shan-but dat was being uncontrollable, he at last managed to stop Shan and in a fit of rage, as he tried to hit Shan back with a punch, he was stopped by Shan 's look- a gaze which was filled with anger, pain, his eyes were red, he had never seen Shan so angry. In the meantime, Shan got hold of something, and after a minute, Rahul could feel a sharp thing on his throat, he was a inch apart from death, the knife was in Shan's hands, a slight movement was enough to kill him..but he was saved, not by Shan , but by Akshaye, Duck and Sam, who came at the right moment

Akshaye-"Shan, chod use, kya kar raha hai" saying these words, he pulled Shan away from ther, though Shan resisted-"Bhaiya leave, me, I want to finish this rascal". Akshaye forcefully dragged Shan to the car and told Duck and Sam to rush Rahul to the hospital

At home,

Sunil-(in anger)-"yeh, yeh kya karne ja rahe the ?"

Shan-" Main mar dalunga use, I will kill him. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha Khanak ke bare mein"

Sunil-"just shut up. Woh kyun sochega, Khanak uski kya lagti hai, woh to tumhari biwi hai' tumne socha"

Shan-" Dad, woh meri biwi ka gunegar hai, mere pyar ka gunegar"

Sunil-" Ghunegar woh nahi, tum ho Shan, tumne Khanak ki zindagi barbad ki, usne nahi'saza dena hai to khud ko do.."-saying this , he handed a knife to Shan- " lo, aab khatam karo khud ko, comeon"

Madhavi snatched the knife-"Sunil! Apne gusse ko control kijiye..Akshaye, beta tum Shan ko uske kamre mein le jao.

Shan was in his room..he went to the wash room to wash his face'He felt khanak's hands on his bare shoulders,he slowly turned her towards himself..-"Khanak, I m sorry, maine tumpe shaq kiya, hamare pyar pe, please mujhe maaf kardo" She was smiling. He closed his eyes and moved forward to kiss her, but again she was gone'He closed his eyes, opened the tap to wash his face, which was filled with tears

In dhulwadi

Khanak was now in her home, she was not spared a single moment to be alone, as she wanted'everyone from her village, came to meet her..they were so eager to see her, their bubbly Khanak- the jaan of Dhulwadi'.but she wanted to be alone, Only her mother would sense it. Her mother felt something was wrong-" arey aap sab aab jayiye, bahut ho gayi baatein, meri Khanak ko aaram karne dijiye"

Everyone left, only Khanak and her mother were there in her room

Mother-" beta , sab thik to hai na.tu kush to hai na jamai ji ke sath"

Khanak-"haan bai, main bahut kush hoon..bahut kush"- she turned away as she said those words-she was in tears

Mother-" phir tere chehre pe yeh kushi kyun nahi dikh rahi hai?"

Khanak-" Bai, woh, woh, main bahut thak agyi hoon is zindagi se, shehar ki zindagi bahut hi thakan deti hain, isliye main yahan ayi hoon, apne gaun mein, apke pass'saying these words she laid on her mother's lap- "bai, mujhe sona hai, chain ki neend leni hai, mujhe lori sunao na, pleez"

Her mother smiled at her childness-" pagli kahin ki, shadi hogayi, par bachpana nahi gaya" She stroked Khanak's hair gently..

In the morning

Gopi, came to their house, calling for Khanak

Khanak's mother-" arey Gopi! Kyun chilla rahi hai"

Gopi-" Kyun na chillaon. Meri sabse achi dost kal ayi aur mujhe kisine bataya bhi nahi..Kahan hai Khanak"

Khanak's mother-"apne kamre mein.ja jake mil use"

Gopi went to Khanak's room. She was delighted on seeing her friend back- Both hugged each other

Gopi-" aur bata ..yahan kaise"

Khanak-" sab ki yaad ayi so chali ayi"

Gopi-"acha.. waise shehar ki mem ko gaun ,mein neend ayi..mujhe pata hai nahi ayi hogi, shehar ki aadat jo lag gayi hai, Shantanu bha ki aadat" She teased Khanak

Khanak-"arey nahi, main bahut ache se soi kal raat"

Gopi-"oh ho! To sapne bhi dekhe honge' waise tujhe dekh ke to lagta hai tu abhi bhi sapne mein hai"

Khanak-" nahi Gopi..aab main sapne nahi dekh rahi hoon'.8 mahino se sapna hi to dekh rahi thi'bas aab mera sapna toot gaya..aab hakikat mein aagayi hoon main.. meri sachayi- mera gaun, woh shehar to paraya tha"

Gopi was confused at her words. She turned back to see Khanak's face. It was filled with tears.

Khandelwal house

At the drawing room, Akshaye and Sunil were playing chess as they spotted Shan coming down. Sunil signaled Akshaye.

Sunil-" hmmm, Akshaye, tumhari mom aur biwi nazar nahi aarahe hain"

Akshaye-" idk dad, Khusboo , aaj khusboo koi movie dekhne ki baat kar rahi thi, may be who dono wahin gaye honge"

Sunil-" movie se yaad aaya Akshaye, tumne woh movie dekhi- Jodha Akbar"

Akshaye- " hein! Haan dekhi maine..achi movie thi"

Sunil-" Haan usme sache pyar ki dastan dekhi , kitna pyar tha Jodha Akbar mein..Ajkal aisa pyar nahi dikhta hai

Akshaye- "aap aise kyun keh rahe dad..Pyar aab bhi hai"

Sunil-" pyar hai, par woh josh nahi hai.. aab dekho movie mein Jodha ruth jati hain to Akbar, joki badshah the, apna sab kaam chod ke , biwi ko manane pahunch gaye..bahi use kehte hain pyar.

Akshaye-" apne thik kaha dad, aaj kal woh baat nahi hai'biwi ruth ke chali jati hai to pati use manane ke bare mein sochta hi nahin

Both were purposely discussing these things to incite Shan, who was standing nearby listening to their words

Sunil-" waise Akbar ko bahut papad belne pade.. use manane mein'.akhir Rajputani jo thi"

Akshaye-"Rajputani! Dad hamare ghar mein bhi koi rajputani thi na..kahan gayi abhi"

Sunil-" Come on Akshaye..kya comparision kar rahe ho , Khanak rajputani hai to kya, apna Shan thodi na koi Badshah Akbar hai'who use kabhi manane nahi jayega, agar jayega bhi to woh nahi manegi.

Shan could not control himself-"arey kyun nahi manegi? Rajputani hai to kya, hai to ek insaan..ek aurat'jo jo mujhse bahut pyar karti hai"

Sunil-"kaun Jodha?"...before he could complete his sentence, Shan was gone..

Both father-son laughed and gave high five to each other

In Shan's room-

" enough is enough dude..tu is tarah hath mein hath rakh ke nahin baith sakta"

Yess , i should go, he got up-" but who nahi ayegi, jiddi hai..maine use kitna dukh pahunchaya"

He stood in front of the mirror, saw his face-" what the hell! Main main itna ro kyun raha hoon, woh bhi kal se, I m not a girl..ladki nahi hoon main'.Shan! boys don't cry"

These were Shan's monologues, which he muttered to himself..Finally he got up and went to the wash room to get ready'for a different challenge

Madhavi , on seeing Shan come down wid a bag- "Shan, kahan ja rahe ho beta?"

Shan-" mom main Dhulwadi jar aha hoon, apni biwi ko lane."

Madhavi was shocked, but before she could stop him , he was gone'

To Sunil- "aap use rokte kyun nahi..Woh pagal ho gaya hai, Dhulwadi jaraha hai"

Sunil-"haan toh! Jahanum mein thodi jar raha hai."

Madhavi-" Sunil! Wahan danger hai, woh log mere bte ko nahi chodenge'use kuch ho gaya to"

Sunil-"Madhavi! Ishq ki takat ko tum nahi janti ' sache ishq ke samne insaan to kya bhagwan bhi sar jhukata hai'.waise bhi tumne Om Shanti Om ki woh dialogue nahi suni- Agar kisi cheez ko shidatt se chaho to puri kayanath, tumhe use milane ki sazish karti hai"

Madhavi-" What rubbish!" Looks at Khusboo, signals her '"what?"

Khusboo-" idk mom..maine to sirf Sanjay dutt ka naam suna hai, yeh Shidatt kaun hai?"

AKshaye and Sunil , together- "OMG!"

i thought of quoting the lines i liked... like i did for ur last os... but this time if ihad to do that.. i should quote ur entire os..

excellent lines and dialogues...... the dialogues were getting better and better... i was so confused as to which one i liked the most.... loved the k family s lines... amazing....

tu kya hein yaar... kahaan thi tu ab tak....

i wud be so happy if this actually happened in the show.. bit i know i shud not expect too much...i am sure that the cv s wud not get such an awesome script.....

sab ke OS me khanak dhulwadi pahach gayi, hope in actual she wll reach dhulwadi soon...:)

why dnt u write part 2.

Sunil-" Ghunegar woh nahi, tum ho Shan, tumne Khanak ki zindagi barbad ki, usne nahi…saza dena hai to khud ko do.."-saying this , he handed a knife to Shan- " lo, aab khatam karo khud ko, comeon"

loved the dialogues & Khandelwals !!!! As always they are the best !!!!!

Hope CVs wrap up the Separation this way ... Phataphat Ek hi episode main !!!!!!

Aur likha kar!! And write a sequel or sthing...😳