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priya

@priya_cool_123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

omg.... that was another rocking and dhamakedaar writing from u.... i am speechless yaar.. awesome....

ur lines .... story was so amazing.....

pls update soon

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Fabulous yaar...!

I loved it.....I m expecting a similar entry for Hiten....on the show..!

Loved it absolutely....It was a Fantastic part...!

Cant wait for the next part....Post soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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wel1111

@wel1111

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

excellent writingshilpa.....loved it..hope we have same to same entry of hiten in d show.....

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angel_9

@angel_9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

awesome writing shilpa............

loved it............ 😃

hope same kind of sequence happens in RBO

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

ya it was just awsome gr8 mindblowing and mindbkasting.............................love u shilpa yaar kya likha jain i m falling in love with this story i loved the part when govind call shaan ugly then khaak said heis hansome and boys throwing pebles on him wow and govinds charecter is very well written and ur dialogs r just awsome mujhe lagta hain cvs bhi itna accha nahi likh sakte hatsa off to u🤗u should write for rbo yaar i wish cvs yaha se kuch idea lele

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dtu

@sampar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

really good....superb.....fantastic 👏👏👏...wish somthing like this happen in RBO.....thank u so much for lovely part 👏

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

shilpa thanx for the pm sorry for the late reply

net was down

very good keep it up😃

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

loved it dear, this is it, what I want to happen in Dhulwadi! awesome job!😃

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Livelife

@tina2mina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

OMG OMG....You are amazing Shilpa. I get so engrossed in reading that I completely forget that it is a fan-fiction story. I love it. Thank you so much. I can only imagine the time you take out to write it and with such good details, with the dialogues, character descriptions, etc.. everything is just AMAZING! ❤️