*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :)

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

love the update so cute story! listening to Adhoore as I read this perfect for the situation in the story! keep it up!😉

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NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

I was listening to teri ore and adha ishq while writing this...again and again🤣🤣🤣

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

hi vatsalya.......

awesome update.................

loved it........

cant wait 4 next part update soon

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

I know this is late...but I wanted to inroduce the characters in pictures and I openly declare that this idea is copied from Pooja🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

But this way I get to post my fav pics of kt, yashu...🤣🤣🤣

SHAANTANU KHANDELWAL

KHANAK:

SHAYERI:

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deepali

@-Deepali-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Awesome update vat..🤗 Very nice written..loved it👏 I am so glad to see your FF vatsalya😃

pl keep it up and update next part soon..🤗
But vat pl.. thoda hot to chalega dear if possible... shantanu khandelwal photo so hot dear🤣

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Deepali88
Awesome update vat..🤗 Very nice written..loved it👏 I am so glad to see your FF vatsalya😃

pl keep it up and update next part soon..🤗
But vat pl.. thoda hot to chalega dear if possible... shantanu khandelwal photo so hot dear🤣

they still have a long way to go!!

I have a few romantic things lined up...for hotness abhi toh dhoop enjoy karo goa mein🤣🤣🤣

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Oye Item!🤣

tu badi chalak nikli!🤣

mere ko pata tha tu besharam toh hai hi par yeh nahi pata tha tu itni achi writer bhi hai...

u left me behind in writing yaar...

ok coming to the update...

i knew we were gonna know a bit about the past...u know how to create mystery...

so Shaan and Khanak were friends at point...i wonder what happened...did they fight or went their separate ways? i wonder...

Next meeting is def. Shanak...one way or another...I wonder what will happen...

continue soon!

PS: get on CCC i need my ring!🤣

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Okay first the show make my heart race with anxiety and now the writers of the forum are hell bent on killing us with the suspence too😆.....

Eeeeek!....Meeting, flowers, kab ke bechare ab milenge⭐️.....Lovely Vat👏....Keep it coming

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

hey vatty!...srry for the late comment!...

really nyc....so this is wat u do during boards, eh??....(i waste my tym on IF!! :)

dnt take the comment seriously and update soon ;)

this gonna be love-triangle?..mayb thts y khanak not feeling tht comfortable wid shayeri!

PM me if possible...

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

vats

yaar i loved it there's a differernt air and feel to ur ff, i love the way you start explaining something and then just as we get into to it or about to find something out e.g khanak was prob gonna ask mrs winter about shaan ssomething happens or interupts the moment leaving us more curious and wanting to know more. mre winters seems like a sweet lady and shayeri seems sweet (love the name). aww i love tulips too cant wait for the next part as im sure shanak are going to bump into each other and hopefully we'll find out what happened 10years ago why both left etc👍🏼🤗