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Bona

@bones88

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Saaz🤗 just brilliant... loveeed it❤️

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

hi saaz, just read both ur updates, this one and Tere khusboo me...and u knw what, its monday mrning and i have just reached offc, before looking into any wrk i started my day with ur updates, lovely shanak momoents.....ur updates r more imp than my pending wrk...😆😆

pls keep writing , u r too good at it, u help me take a break in the offc to go thru ur lovely write ups ,

love

rupa

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

ROFLLLL........Lovely Part !!!

I will die if I see Khushboo wearing that Sun Locket....! Hahahahahahahaha !! ROFL....

It wudve been soo good...If Akki-Boo had tried to help Shaan-Khanak....this cudve been a good track....

CVs need to know how to explore tracks man...!

Instead of dishing out trash like they are doing..Huh !

Shaan is soooooooo Cute !! Thinking she is leaving him...hehe!

CONTINUE SOON !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what a part........................Awesomeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!

clearly the best writer of the forum......Take an Award
loved it loved it loved every word of it...............
how she is hurt and avoids him and how she interacts with Madzy and Khushboo
How Khushboo and Akki step in..........no OTT treatment .....
how Shaan's anger and feelings were sufficient for both their feelings....how he tries to talk to her...........how he clenches fist typically Shaan style.....how he signals Dharam and Harilal to mind their own business......how he is in tears thinking she is going to leave him........Awwwww.....................
omg perfect description and perfect emotions......
wish we saw this drama for real......
this is called dealing with the past ......all together !!!

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

oh Saaz..awesum yaar..lekin itni jaldi conclusion...why mujhe to abhi se rona araha hai.....😭

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smitha

@SPN_JD_Addicted

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Saaaz-you are killing me!Would you believe if I say I was on the verge of tears when Khanak agreed to go to Dhulwadi and Shantanu unable to grasp that she would be leaving him?WOW!!!It's a first for me crying while reading an FF!!!Superbly done.Though its sad to see them at loggerheads,it's such a treat to read their pain and angst and hurt and all!Am so waiting for the next part!Did I say I LOVED it?!

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

saaz awesome yaar... atleast we get to see shaan baba getting serious and emotional in ur ff.. thank u 4 that....warna wo sirf sr or date ke baare me hi sochtha rehta hein.... i loved the sofa part again..... next one is the last part... why... why.....

beutifully written with the essence of rbo in mind.... love that

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Hi saaaz u expressed very well the emotions of shanak.................loved u r update

u made khanak agreed to go to dhulwadi............n making shaan angry that he would not b able live without her..............loved it though it made me almost emotional..............

update soon .............😃

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.Dilwale.

@.Dilwale.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

you are indeed our new SS queen! pehley the sunil mad SS (which remains my most fav) and now this!

one complaint though. want more of khanak's POV and reaction along with shaan's. you potrayed shaan spot on but what is khanak feeling? i want both shanak kuriye. serial mein khanak ziyada hai aur teray SS mein shaan!😆

i have PMed you my response in detail. keep writing coz' you are superb at this. waiting for part V now!

loves🤗

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Ok so I finally had the time to read it...sorry for being late...

I loved the update! Great job Saazy!

Can I say that I missed Dharam and Harilal! It was too good!

As for Shanak...I liked it how the family is involved and that is really good.

Shaan still needs to grow up man...kya kar raha hai yeh nikama insaan. lol

loved it how you have kept the essence of RBO alive, it's really good and it seems you are getting Dhulwadi dream come true too🤣. Fantasy itni important hai kya?🤣

Jokes apart...i loved it again!

Rooj

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