-Shanak SS- Banwra Mann Final Pg 16

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Urooj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Man Saazy You know how to ruin a good kiss 🤣 koi baat nahi hug bhi chalega!🤣🤗

So coming to the SS update...

kya update hai yaar! I love it!

again you balanced out everything so well!

Waise I would prefer that our shaan has grown up but this works too...our old Shaan! Kya baat hai yaar...and as for Akki-boo and sunil and madhavi...so typical. So it seems Mads is still not really soft towards her but still being a good MIL or trying to and I loved it how you showed her character

as for Boo, she seems to be melting...

Loved their cute si fight...it is sooo cute!😳

and man Kya Shaan, u have to be selfish...darn u!🤣

ok Saazy done with this one, can't wait for th next part!

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KrazEee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

I don't usually read FF/SS but had free time today so decided to open this topic and I am glad I did! you are a superb writer!! 👏 Can't find words...you should take over the RBO writers...This is how it should have been, god knows whats going on in CVs brains!...

RBO had such beautiful characters, soo much they could have done involving everyone...But look where they are taking it *sigh*...Thankyou for making up for the not-so-good track at the min Do continue! : )

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shanakrocks1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

kya update hai yaar....this is how it shd be.......mera bas chale to wo rbo ke kektaish writers ko abhi nikal ke teju waha bitha du..........love do anything to see this scene in rbo.....

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Amritha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

sumthng is really wrong wid our actual shaan!....ur shaan is.... ;)

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destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Yup ammu u stole my words really our shaan(i mean show wala shaan) is not acting good these days

Donno why? kuch bhool gaya shayad after his ill ness...

and Saaz great to hve creative people in our forum ur updates are rocking..

u really have multi talents....tooo good keep it up. photography ., writing.....

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tvrasika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Loved it Saaaz.... Loved it!👏

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Saaz darling do I even need to say it dear...brilliant...perfect.

I would have commented yesterday night as I read it then..but with one daughter on my lap and the other in my hand was occupied and then after putting them to sleep ended up sleping myself...😆😆 So forgive me the late reply.😆

Loved how you had the whol family involved in the issue...from Madzs Sunil discussing Khanak as a normal couple to Akki and Boo. Miss these things a lot in the show...these characters have been sidelined when they should be in the thick of things ...alas....

Aww....love loved your protrayal of Shantanu...just as we all see him...his reaction and the dialouges that you used bang on...showing us his burthalness, impatientce,slefishness, insecurities and love.

Loved their cute fight so Shanak (old) and him going to the study to sleep on his fav couch...😆😆 I knew a scene like this was coming..😆😆😆

Loved Khanak talking to the pic and sleeping with it..and as so many have already said loved loved him coming back to check on her...the kiss...and burthal instead of sleeping back on the bed with her in his arms..had to go to the couch...😆😆😆

And as many have already stated Saaz darling its tooo short a part...😡😆😆😆So lady get to writing a long very long part....ASAP!!!!

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wooster

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Dear Saaz

I was reading a script when I read your story...very nice and heartfelt....really takes the essence of Shanak and brings it out so beautifully....👏

The 3rd part is superb...loved the nuances which is missing in RBO today completely...really please put this across to the Creatives... maybe they should pay and hire you as writer....love the sofa, the head on acknowledgement of Suraj and his death...mature yet Shaan!!!😉

Honestly we will have a good fun show... you incorporated the family which is great... Akki/ Khushboo and Madhavi/ Sunil....

I wish this was the story and ....

PS. Can I also request you to burn the guitar in one of your SS...I will pay you for it...as we are paying for everything!!! 😉

Thank you😊

Edited by wooster - 14 years ago