FF:Presntn Tinda & Karela-Weird Dastaan:Pt 7D p33

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@sampar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

superb👏... finally i read all the parts and it is awesome ....hilarious...love it yaar....mr tinda and ms karela kya combination hai yaar.👏👏......continue soon and want lots of shanak ....

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

hi Rooj loved ur FF..............

mr tinda n ms karela r awesome...............

pls update next part soon...............😊

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Yasharanrocks

@Yasharanrocks

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

gr8 part yaar and u say ur not happy with this part.its awsme.plzzz cont soon....

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Hey I really enjoyed reading this part if felt mote natural loved the fact that after the kiss they didn't meet for a month that time apart just made them more curious and intrigued about the other, and finally lived that they met at a coffee shop with khanak arguing with the cashier- like how u linked it to the way they originally met.
Haha these two can never go without having a sparring session and both sooo stubborn. Can't wait for the next part x

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amina

@aminakhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

thanx 4 the pm😊 waiting anxiously for next udate😃

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

it was really good both of them thinking abt each other aur fir milkar zagda just the way shanak is...................................llike the nok jhok

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Roooooj ..... Sorry yaaaar i missed your PM ....

Sorry i hadnt commented on the earlier part ... So here comes for both ...

Loved the Sensuality of the dance ... i was so engrossed imagining it ... Loved the clash.... how typical of Shaaan & Khanak ... And the Kisss ...., mmmmmmm ... WOW first violent kiss isnt it 😆😆??? Angry young dashing Shaan ... woowowow

Update sooon ... waiting for the party .... hope some more sparks follow ....