FF:Presntn Tinda & Karela-Weird Dastaan:Pt 7D p33

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Bona

@bones88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

rooj just brilliant😍❤️ loveeeed it... can't wait for the next part😳

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Oye hoye...kiss..wid Verbal sparring..voila!!..waitin 4 ur nxt update!😊

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

rooj.... loved the updates dear... wow....first boxing match wit words.....now kissing match.....ahem... ahem.....too good... waiting 4 the next part

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Lovely part !!

These two are mad and insanely attracted to each other....But m sure they are not gonna give the each other the benefit of the knowledge of this attraction....

I hate you for leaving the last sentence incomplete?? Did they fight again or did sumone interrupt them !!

CONTINUE SOON !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Yasharanrocks

@Yasharanrocks

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

awsme.ur FF is rockng.plz cont soon...........

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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Heyyyyy rooj!!

Just wanted to let you know that although i've never commented on your FFs i absolutely LOVE them! 😃

I truly admire your writing style....you are on heck of a writer!!! 👏 And your FFs are totally AMAZING! ⭐️

Im actually a regular reader of both; 'Tinda and Karela' and 'An Innocent Vixen' but just never got the chance to comment so thought why not shower some love on your work today 😆 I will try to comment whenever you update but thab thak ke liye.....

YOU ROCK!!! 👏⭐️

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Awww thanks Hinna....

im glad u read them daily then...so i guess u will be reading my next part soon...and thanks im still learning to be great writer. lol

and keep reading u will find many new things...

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

@ rooj hey could have told me this was up i had no idea lol,

cow u left us wanting more again arghhhh

aww got to love the persistent shan and the verbal sparring these 2 have is too good yaar i actually laugh out loud whilst reading it👏👏👏👏👏

love the kiss's (reminded me of HUM TUM rani and saif- love that film)

after that ending i expect another update sooon lol this one ended tooooo soon

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: rafia 24
@ rooj hey could have told me this was up i had no idea lol,
cow u left us wanting more again arghhhh

aww got to love the persistent shan and the verbal sparring these 2 have is too good yaar i actually laugh out loud whilst reading it👏

love the kiss's (reminded me of HUM TUM rani and saif- love that film)

after that ending i expect another update sooon lol this one ended tooooo soon

sorry baba...i forgot to tell u that i update...Im gonna add all the people and then update them whenever i update

and thanks for the comments...

im gald they reminded u of them...actually it was sort of inspired by them...

working on the next parts but first the innocent vixen before this one...

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Haha woah these two are so perfect for wah other but ready to clash and fight and argue but that passion would remain and the result was the dance and in this chapter the kiss o should I say kisses lol anyways great ff and really cute storyline and can't wait to read more 😊

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