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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NazNgs

OMGGG yaar..2 parts post ho chuke...
oye yaar have to catch up...warna peeche rehjawungi...
tujhe toh patta hai naa meri hectic schedules...
work, gym, couch pe lurakna,
aaj kal couch pe zyada lurak jaati hoon..😆
(umar joh hogayi hai)ssssttt itni zor se mat read karo yaar..secret hai..
chalo no more lurkin on the couch...
warna teri mindblowin FF miss na kardoon..
saali sleep ko samachna hoga..
ke always uska manmaani nahi chalegi..
so no more lurkin on couch..😃
achha chalo comment continue
warna meri bakwaas bak bak
se yeh poora comment lamba hojaayegi..
Sabse pehle toh
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
luv luv the siggie for the title name of the FF..
haiii love love the blue and white and dark colour in the siggie
part 3
love the beginning..
very nice and sweet convo of
madhvi khusboo and khanak..
and yaar i was also gettin anxious for Shaan to come
and see that its the girl from the bar
haii so excited..and Shaan ki enterance also
very very good writing yaar..
ek dum jaise movie mere saamne chalrahi hai..
and i luv the Karan and Khanak parts
😆 im sure her looks were angry but still cute towards him
damnn yaar kaash i could really this
unke expressionss kamaal ke lagrahe hai in my head..
i luv how she was talkin to herself abt Karan at the bar
yahan bahut witness hai 🤣
so funny yaar..
and omgg Shaan was lookin so hot
and haii he had twinkles in his eyes
when walkin towards the bar wonderin who the girl iss..
and Khanak nice hilarious convo with the waiter
has has ke naa meri aankh mein ansoo aagaye...
when she sais waiter banna mera sapna nahi tah🤣
uff i love her...🤣
and OMG thank u thank u thank u
for not draggin their meetin
jaise koi beech mein aake Shaan ko leejaata hai
and he never sees her face and bla bla that kind of draggin u know
uff yaar tum serial jaa ke banao naa...teri stories mein no
draggin waggin..all goes smoothly and all emotions involved
love, happiness, sadness, angerness, comedy
uff teri story toh superhit...👏
awwwee loved Shaan and khanak convo
so sweet and lovin
Shaan bechara itne din wait kiya thanks bolne ko 😆
loved it very much yaar...
and oye yaar..loved loved how u wrote that part
that she was almost gonne tell him abt Karan but Su started his thing
hehe kya timing hai teri story ki coincidences ka..luv it
totally not annoyin like it happens on tv..
oye yaar im lovin ur story more then the serials on tv 😃
and awww bechara Shaan ko galatfaimi hogaya..
lekin jaldi hai door hogayi..i like that..😃
man i really loved the convo of them all talkin at the bar..
Khanak is really cute and soo funny
ufff just love whole the convo...
whahahah loved the khitpit of Khanak and Karan 🤣🤣
hilarousss yaar 🤣
i could totally see it in front of me
whahha when she calls him GAY 🤣
and he says Jungli Billi 🤣🤣🤣🤣
has has ke meri aankh mein ansoo aagayi
haha i totally agree with Shaan
dono ke dono weird hai but i love them yaar 😃
and Karan askin tum sach mein woh ho🤣🤣
amazing yaar..
and omggg love the endingg
haiiii Karan and his pyar wala thoughts
woww.amazing yaar
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
ufff yeh part 3 toh ek dum Masterpiece hai
uff yaar tussi ko serial banana paregi..
ur just too good re...
kaash koi director yeh read karle
aur tujhe contact kare
haii..main toh bin music ke dance karne lagungi...
coz sach me believe me..im not sayin it coz im ur soulsis
but im sayin it coz its damn true..
ur a MASTER in writin yaar...
every part of the story goes soo smoothly
and fun ..ufff i just love it...
im so glad i started to read the fanfic...
thanks for mentionin it to me
warna i would miss readin this awesome fanfic...
uff can't wait to read part 4..
which im goin to do rite now..😃
Love u
Naz

baaappp reeee i dont know where to start😆😆

thank u se kam chalega kya???ROFLROFLROFL
maybe the siggy...Pooja made it for me😛 soo sweet naa? aur soo awesome😃
yaar ab teri waje se jab i read sunil's name tho samne Hussain aata haiROFLROFL
when ur done with the 4th part naa so i'll show u something to clear everything...
aisi zabardast cheez hai mere pass😆😆
jab tu aisi baatein karti hai naa then u know hw i feel dont u😳😆😆
🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
haan toh yeh rahi mera comment part 4
ke liyee..😃
previous comment se bore nahi hogaye naa
kya karoon short comment dena chahti hoon
par ungliyan khud nahi rukte..
hamesha bakwaas bak type karne lakte hai
like now ...i dont know why i always start with
idhar udhar ki baaten...
hope u dont mind...😃
chalo asli baat karte hai..😃
Part 4
ufff again u blow my bheja away
with a bhejablowin siggie
haii love it...
🤣🤣 karan in kitchen subah
even i was shocked 🤣
again cute lovely funny interaction of Khanak and Karan
and omg everythin u wrote on life and destiny
for Karan to say..haii so true yaar..
totally agree with that..
joh kaam ek baar karke kuch nahi mila
dobara kyun kare...par sab kuch toh destiny ke haat mein hai..
loved that part very much...
🤣🤣 Mona and Rosa..kutti and kameeni 😆
hahahha i love them...no matter how much annoyin they are
nice business baaten btw Karan and Shaan
achha dosti growin btw them as well..😃
hahah Karan is also so funny
when he says kya tum khanak pe book likhne waali hai
omgg so hilariousss..
Noor meri jaan teri sense of humor
i love it...ur a very funny girl yaar
maybe u should write the scripts
for comedy circus..kam se kam Archana ko
fake toh hasna nahi paregi..🤣
anyways..
🤣🤣 Mona aur Rosa attack on Shaan
haha directly number pe chalegaye..
haii bahut forward type ki hai yeh Mona aur Rosa...🤣
hailaaa Shaan playboy mood mein..
Ria ko pasand kardaala 🤣
like that part in the story...
nice convo between Shaan and Khanak..
hehe love the comedy and the seriousness in their convo..
love it totally
omgg the cold coffee part haiii
loved it the flirt was very cutee...
and hailaa i also want cold coffee now..
i only drink cold coffee i dont like normal cofee..
Shaantanu Special kahan milega..
ufff loved it yaar..totally awesomeee...this fanfic rockss
i just love the whole part
and omgg cant wait to read what happens in Divine club
and waiting for the entry of Shona..
Meri MahawriterGuru..
Another Masterpiece Part yaar..
its awesomee...
mera bas chale naa toh tujhe main
writin certificate dedoon...
sach mein love love ur fanfic..
waitin for next part...
Love u
Naz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update noorya🤗 loved it...loved it...lovedit...all scene part 4 excilent⭐️
shaan-karan conv,shaan-khanak conv.khanakl-ria conv all of them soo cute👍🏼
very like shaan flirting with khanak and he liked to ria..wow..wonderful😆
Amazing part dear..why you should not come to shilpa..waiting for her😳
looking forword for next part soon😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update noorya
In luv wid this FF
update soon
Thanx fr the PM
sweetvidisha thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow this was good....can u plz add me in ur pm list thanks..cant wait for the next part
-Harshu- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Noorya 🤗

Nikammi how come I don't know abt a ShiRan FF ?? 😡😡

thanx to Zarquu I got d link otherwise mujhe toh Pata hi nahi chalta na 😡

Anyways coming to d FF
Read all d 4 parts in one go & I love love love it 😳

Karan & Khanak r so cute 😳

Love their cute noke jhok😆

Party scene was really good
D convo B/w Shanak & Karan was too funny [LOL😆😆

Awwwww Karan has a past dat didn't work out😔

now Phuleeezzz bring my Shona soon 😳

Continue soon & don't forget to PM me Varna 😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update kardo yarrrrrr noorya


luv zara
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NazNgs

haan toh yeh rahi mera comment part 4
ke liyee..😃
previous comment se bore nahi hogaye naa
kya karoon short comment dena chahti hoon
par ungliyan khud nahi rukte..
hamesha bakwaas bak type karne lakte hai
like now ...i dont know why i always start with
idhar udhar ki baaten...
hope u dont mind...😃
chalo asli baat karte hai..😃
Part 4
ufff again u blow my bheja away
with a bhejablowin siggie
haii love it...
🤣🤣 karan in kitchen subah
even i was shocked 🤣
again cute lovely funny interaction of Khanak and Karan
and omg everythin u wrote on life and destiny
for Karan to say..haii so true yaar..
totally agree with that..
joh kaam ek baar karke kuch nahi mila
dobara kyun kare...par sab kuch toh destiny ke haat mein hai..
loved that part very much...
🤣🤣 Mona and Rosa..kutti and kameeni 😆
hahahha i love them...no matter how much annoyin they are
nice business baaten btw Karan and Shaan
achha dosti growin btw them as well..😃
hahah Karan is also so funny
when he says kya tum khanak pe book likhne waali hai
omgg so hilariousss..
Noor meri jaan teri sense of humor
i love it...ur a very funny girl yaar
maybe u should write the scripts
for comedy circus..kam se kam Archana ko
fake toh hasna nahi paregi..🤣
anyways..
🤣🤣 Mona aur Rosa attack on Shaan
haha directly number pe chalegaye..
haii bahut forward type ki hai yeh Mona aur Rosa...🤣
hailaaa Shaan playboy mood mein..
Ria ko pasand kardaala 🤣
like that part in the story...
nice convo between Shaan and Khanak..
hehe love the comedy and the seriousness in their convo..
love it totally
omgg the cold coffee part haiii
loved it the flirt was very cutee...
and hailaa i also want cold coffee now..
i only drink cold coffee i dont like normal cofee..
Shaantanu Special kahan milega..
ufff loved it yaar..totally awesomeee...this fanfic rockss
i just love the whole part
and omgg cant wait to read what happens in Divine club
and waiting for the entry of Shona..
Meri MahawriterGuru..
Another Masterpiece Part yaar..
its awesomee...
mera bas chale naa toh tujhe main
writin certificate dedoon...
sach mein love love ur fanfic..
waitin for next part...
Love u
Naz

Diii🤗

me and get bore of ur lamba comments....NO WAY😃
tere ko tho pata hai hw much i love reading ur comments naa😳😆
yaar trying to write phunny convos re tere se sikh gaayi hoonROFLROFL
hailaa u wanna a Shaantanu Special....uske liye tere ko France aana padega then forget the shaan wala i'll make u a Noorya wala😉😆😆
you already have the idea for the divine club naa
par uss pe work kar ke result dekhna phir bhi
and Shona is commin soon fikar not
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepali88

Awesome update noorya🤗 loved it...loved it...lovedit...all scene part 4 excilent⭐️
shaan-karan conv,shaan-khanak conv.khanakl-ria conv all of them soo cute👍🏼
very like shaan flirting with khanak and he liked to ria..wow..wonderful😆
Amazing part dear..why you should not come to shilpa..waiting for her😳
looking forword for next part soon😃

thank y Deepali😃

and dont worry dear soon Shilpa will enter the FFEmbarrassed
...Noorya... thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sr-medha

Gr8 update noorya

In luv wid this FF
update soon
Thanx fr the PM

oye hoye Medha meri nikammi tu bhi aa gaayi🤗😆

im very happy shaapy u're here...one more reader😆😆😆

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