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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: iluvmanar
Noorya..just luvved it yaar....awesum...thanks 4 pm...

ur welcome dear

and thanks😛

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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: sana.shanak
Its just awesome

thanks a lot😳

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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: RB81
Awesome!!!
Shaan flirting with khanak..it was cute..loved it..shantanu spl..
waiting 4 ur update.
do add me 2 ur pm list pls..

thank you😛

and i'll add you dont worry u'll get a pm for the next update😉

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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: shamasallfav
gud work noorya..!!
very well-written..!!awesome update...

do cont soon..!!n thnxx 4 d pm....

thanks a lot😃

will try to post the next one soon

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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84
dear noorya loved this one..good job..thanx for the pm

thank u very much Shriya😛

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noorya

@...Noorya...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: krock
awsome update but u bahut late karti hain ha this is nt fair but loved it ha shaan and khanak flerting oh ho noorya cant wait to see them romancing yaar

thanks😆😆

i know yaar im takin too much time to post sorry baba😳

and yaar FF abhi start hua hai hw can they romance already

toda wait tho kar mere dost😆😆

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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: shiksha_03
hey noorya i ws a silent reader in ur fiction til nw bt bw i cudnt control myself frm commenting so i hve 2 say it ws realy vry gud n i m realy waitn for d next part pls continue soon

hey Shiksha ( i dont know if its ur name😳)

but thanks dear im glad ur likin it and it forced u to comment😆😆

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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn
nyc noorya!!...really gud and really LONGGG!!....
sunshyn likey!!....lol

update soon....

hailaa u think it was long??😲😃😃

thanks yaar im surprised coz i sometimes update longer parts

in my other FF but people find it short😆😆

but im happy its not the case here😃😆

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noorya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: nine2
aww the trio is awsome....haha loved shanak part:)...i love this khanak....cant wait till Shiran enters...plz continue soon!! :)

thanks buddy😛

shilpa will enter soon just need to wait😳

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Nazmien aka Naz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#180

OMGGG yaar..2 parts post ho chuke...

oye yaar have to catch up...warna peeche rehjawungi...

tujhe toh patta hai naa meri hectic schedules...

work, gym, couch pe lurakna,

aaj kal couch pe zyada lurak jaati hoon..😆

(umar joh hogayi hai)ssssttt itni zor se mat read karo yaar..secret hai..

chalo no more lurkin on the couch...

warna teri mindblowin FF miss na kardoon..

saali sleep ko samachna hoga..

ke always uska manmaani nahi chalegi..

so no more lurkin on couch..😃

achha chalo comment continue

warna meri bakwaas bak bak

se yeh poora comment lamba hojaayegi..

Sabse pehle toh

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

luv luv the siggie for the title name of the FF..

haiii love love the blue and white and dark colour in the siggie

part 3

love the beginning..

very nice and sweet convo of

madhvi khusboo and khanak..

and yaar i was also gettin anxious for Shaan to come

and see that its the girl from the bar

haii so excited..and Shaan ki enterance also

very very good writing yaar..

ek dum jaise movie mere saamne chalrahi hai..

and i luv the Karan and Khanak parts

😆 im sure her looks were angry but still cute towards him

damnn yaar kaash i could really this

unke expressionss kamaal ke lagrahe hai in my head..

i luv how she was talkin to herself abt Karan at the bar

yahan bahut witness hai 🤣

so funny yaar..

and omgg Shaan was lookin so hot

and haii he had twinkles in his eyes

when walkin towards the bar wonderin who the girl iss..

and Khanak nice hilarious convo with the waiter

has has ke naa meri aankh mein ansoo aagaye...

when she sais waiter banna mera sapna nahi tah🤣

uff i love her...🤣

and OMG thank u thank u thank u

for not draggin their meetin

jaise koi beech mein aake Shaan ko leejaata hai

and he never sees her face and bla bla that kind of draggin u know

uff yaar tum serial jaa ke banao naa...teri stories mein no

draggin waggin..all goes smoothly and all emotions involved

love, happiness, sadness, angerness, comedy

uff teri story toh superhit...👏

awwwee loved Shaan and khanak convo

so sweet and lovin

Shaan bechara itne din wait kiya thanks bolne ko 😆

loved it very much yaar...

and oye yaar..loved loved how u wrote that part

that she was almost gonne tell him abt Karan but Su started his thing

hehe kya timing hai teri story ki coincidences ka..luv it

totally not annoyin like it happens on tv..

oye yaar im lovin ur story more then the serials on tv 😃

and awww bechara Shaan ko galatfaimi hogaya..

lekin jaldi hai door hogayi..i like that..😃

man i really loved the convo of them all talkin at the bar..

Khanak is really cute and soo funny

ufff just love whole the convo...

whahahah loved the khitpit of Khanak and Karan 🤣🤣

hilarousss yaar 🤣

i could totally see it in front of me

whahha when she calls him GAY 🤣

and he says Jungli Billi 🤣🤣🤣🤣

has has ke meri aankh mein ansoo aagayi

haha i totally agree with Shaan

dono ke dono weird hai but i love them yaar 😃

and Karan askin tum sach mein woh ho🤣🤣

amazing yaar..

and omggg love the endingg

haiiii Karan and his pyar wala thoughts

woww.amazing yaar

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

ufff yeh part 3 toh ek dum Masterpiece hai

uff yaar tussi ko serial banana paregi..

ur just too good re...

kaash koi director yeh read karle

aur tujhe contact kare

haii..main toh bin music ke dance karne lagungi...

coz sach me believe me..im not sayin it coz im ur soulsis

but im sayin it coz its damn true..

ur a MASTER in writin yaar...

every part of the story goes soo smoothly

and fun ..ufff i just love it...

im so glad i started to read the fanfic...

thanks for mentionin it to me

warna i would miss readin this awesome fanfic...

uff can't wait to read part 4..

which im goin to do rite now..😃

Love u

Naz

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