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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

oh Beeni..it's so good yaar...when the next part is coming?

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Thanks Vandu, May Shriya, Rooj and iluvmanar :D i'm so glad you all became happy reading this :D

@iluvmanar: Errrmm there is no next part lol! this one was the last part :D but i'll keep writing OSs waisay :D

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: tofeeees

Thanks Vandu, May Shriya, Rooj and iluvmanar :D i'm so glad you all became happy reading this :D

@iluvmanar: Errrmm there is no next part lol! this one was the last part :D but i'll keep writing OSs waisay :D

Beeni if my LBM thread inspired you, please write a non-besharam OS about it 😃.....See you later!

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Errr May you seriously DON'T expect me to be NON besharam when i have a song like Zoobie Doobie to describe in an OS DO YOU??!! LOL

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

o really...it was the last part but why yaar...we want 2 see how shaan takes care of his pregnant lady luv...🤣

but ok ...yaar...write OS regularly...i enjoy these a lot....

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Beeni if my LBM thread inspired you, please write a non-besharam OS about it 😃.....See you later!

If you can keep it decent, like ' O Friends and Babies ', that would be fine😊....

Well it's your vision at the end of the day😃.....I'll just have to blush😳and accept it....Please write the OS.....

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Beeni Beeni Beeni.....love you ...loved it and what a cute part indeed....aww..as some one already said Dil Khush kar ditah tu nah....*muwah & a big bear hug*

Now...you better write a besharam version of the whole Shanak drunk and Zoobi Doobie thing.....😆😆😆

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Beeni...Sorry! Was reading you OS will comment soon!

Had to bring this thread forward!

Edited by -Saira- - 14 years ago

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

So Beeni are you writing that Zoobie Doobie FF?😊

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#130

^^Beeni...you must have got tired of me spamming your OS thread!

So where shall I start from? Ermmmm....OK.🤔

I read your 1^st OS of ShaNak When roles reverse...no doubtfully think this one of the best, I mean best one shots of yours! I loved the burthal Shaan...god how nervous was he and icing on the cake when Akshay teasing him LOL! 😆 Totally cuteness and in simple words it's hilarious!! LMAO!!🤣 The last thing we see in RBO is Khanak being seductive and Shaan all shy types! How the heck did you come up with this whole idea? I so wish this idea was used in RBO...what a classic suhaag raat it would have been! I loved the Pink and white combination for ShaNak! 😍

They're freaking adorable! 😳 especially at the end when she kissed his forehead and he goes 'Khanak, your unbelievable you know right?' If Khanak ever does this in RBO that's the exact thing that Shaan will say! *sigh* your dialogues are so like the classic ShaNak types...I miss the old RBO! You're a terrific writer yaar, how the heck to you keep the ShaNak soul alive? 👏

The second OS is HOT! I'm all red while just writing the comments on it 😳...I didn't know you were an TOTAL beshram LOL! I was like did Beeni write this W*H! It's so romantic and very coquettish! ☺️ How Shaan was taking revenge from ILU,Natasha and rest on...Such a tease! The captivating moment was when Khanak couldn't take it anymore and how she said she can say in telugu...It is written elegantly Beeni! The OMG was the fact it had SO SO many kisses! I was like ok 1...2....3....4!!! It need censorship before being read by someone! I was total deaddeadead and had too many heart STROKES!

How many times shall I say I love this and that! Ok Betaabi was ROFL!🤣🤣 Shaan...how desperate was he? 😆 Poor burthal! I loved the whole idea of the 1^stdate and on top he goes to Khanak she can't sleep! HAHAHAH!!! 🤣 What I stuck me on was the nok-jok at the end,so ShaNak types. ☺️

I need tips from you! I'm scared to start mine now....I think I might to OS's sometimes with FF it's hard to keep with the characters if the screenplay becomes stretched,so I think I should write OS's on dhulwadi as background! I'm inspired by you now! 🤗

Write more often...Your a ⭐️⭐️ at writing OS's,very elegent and impressively written!

Edited by -Saira- - 14 years ago