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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#321

Hi...Hope you are well :P 🤗

I love Shaan state of mind...So confused and unware of what he actually wants,very human! As everyone around him actually knows how more there is too Shaan and Khanak relationship then himself!

I loved last converstation between Shaan and Khanak...How he know's that everything will change,yet Khanak assuring him on his insecurities that nothing will change,BUT it will he know's that!

I love Rohan...he's one of the cutest characters just like for R.com as nitya said he remind you of him :))

Take care and update soon!

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#322

As usual Superb part !!

U have expressed Shaan's confusion and dilemma sooo well..

Hope he realizes soon....And seems like its time for that guy's entry in Khanak's life which will make Shaan realize his actual feelings

He wont be able to stand seeing Khanak with anyone...thats for sure...! Wondering what he will do when he gets insecure about her...Heheeh!

Continue soon !!

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Plz write d nxt part soon...wil b waitin!awesum as ever

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Great update di I mean you have pulled it off by putting yourself in a mans position and Shaans thought process and awe shaan stuck in this dilemma where he has no answer but Mayr unknown to the answer but I can say they're attracted to each other but now are saying they love each other but maybe that's the thing they're trying to restrain from their relationship as they're scared about ruining what they share anyways great update and continue soon 😊

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Yasharanrocks

@Yasharanrocks

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#325

its awsme.shaans POV is to good.its nt at all like girlish.enjoyd reading it......he feel like kissng her again 😆😆😆😆😆😆

Edited by Yasharanrocks - 14 years ago

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#326

hey pooja awesome update shaan is falling 4 her but he don't wana accept his feeling and specially note part it's make me laugh specially don't look khanak neck ohh plz shaan aise hi note banate rahay tu puri dairy note se bhar jay gi and it's so cute he want to kiss khanak wow it's so nice today's update was rocking.

thanks 4 pm and keep writing.

update soon can't wait 4 next update.

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Poooooooooojaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, u wll kill me gal, I m going mad with writting skill, u ROCK......:):)

pls pls pls update soon.

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swetamwari

@swetamwari

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#328

hi pooja...hope u r well nw...the update was reallly g8ttttt!!!! I just loved it and thank u so much 4 ur pm...i get so happy seeing them!!! Keep up the good work...u r really very talented

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: togepe30
As usual Superb part !!
U have expressed Shaan's confusion and dilemma sooo well..

Hope he realizes soon....And seems like its time for that guy's entry in Khanak's life which will make Shaan realize his actual feelings

He wont be able to stand seeing Khanak with anyone...thats for sure...! Wondering what he will do when he gets insecure about her...Heheeh!

Continue soon !!

@bold- i hve something bettr planned... at least i think it's bettr! dnt knw for sure... 😃 will get to know wen that plot comes up, it is two updates away... or three...

and thanks vandu!! happy to knw Shaan's POV idea was a hit... was really nervous abt it!

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