*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 35

Nice part.

oh...it's awesome yaar...update the next part when u get time....luv u...

I really love shaans perspective and it's so like how he was in odhani confused about his feelings towards khanak and loved the part where he had the dream and stopped each part to analyze his own dream lol and awe the cafe part was sweet how he left seductress Sonali for khanaks smile anyways great update and continue soo. 😊

Awesum as ever..wil b eagerly waitng 4 d nxt part

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

pooja dear.. i am so loving this shaan s pov......so my fav things.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

1. the dream and purab...... wow ....

2. shaan thinking abt what khanak wud be doing.....

3. shaan wants coffee only from coffee machine..... i really enjoy such minute things...plays a major role in effective storytelling.... which u do 100%

4.shaan has his eyes stuck to her when she s around.....

u better have copyrights for ur work... seriosly......then don complain if u see it in a movie soon....😉

thanks priya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗 @bold- 😆😆- will do for sure....😆

Originally posted by: -shamima-

I really love shaans perspective and it's so like how he was in odhani confused about his feelings towards khanak and loved the part where he had the dream and stopped each part to analyze his own dream lol and awe the cafe part was sweet how he left seductress Sonali for khanaks smile anyways great update and continue soo. 😊

thanks shamima!!!

Originally posted by: iluvmanar

oh...it's awesome yaar...update the next part when u get time....luv u...

thanks!!!

Each update is better than the one before👏👏👏....I can't praise you writing enough and the fact that I love 'Dostana' and 'Complicated ' equally, proves what a awesome writer you are....Please give the show's writers some words of your wisdom Pooja😃......

oh pooja it wasc realy gr8 shaans dream waslike lol........................and his feeling for khanak oh so sweet...........its like a first live..............................kash kt ko bhi ye ho jaye to maja aajaye

wonderful part Pooja... u always give us reasons to fall for this FF more 😳.... and sorry for not replying on earlier part as my exam was goin on...