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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

nice one Pooja... 😛

omg khanak staring at shan chori-chori.. naughty gal 😆... and shan noticed that?😲.. oh poor khanak .. such embarrassing situation .. but these two really share nice chemistry here too hun ....... now m really curious abt next part... do update soon pls 😛

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

I loved it !!

I wish you could direct this as a show...! With KT and Yashu in it !! Hehehe !!

I think Khanak will flirt with that Aditya guy and Shaan will be left alone and be jealous !!😆

Continue SOON !!

Luv,

Vandu

Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

lol... nice update.... tell shaan no to look for Mr. Right for Khanak as he is her MR. Right... lol.. plz cont soon and have Shaan ogling Khanak in bikini exactly like how she tought he would... lol....

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

🤗🤗🤗thank you🤗 🤗🤗

@manju- yup he notices, but I wanted that to happen to show just how comfy they are with one anothr... just like the time he climbs into bed with her to wake her up...

@vandu- u b the director and me the writer, then we will mke KT and yashu do all crazy things!!😆😆

@dhrashtee - she might be in a bikini- it is Goa and anything can happen..........😆

@janu- thanks

@ jaya- tke ur time, and do PM me ur critique....

love,

pooja

Edited by p.fashion.d - 14 years ago

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

nice one pooja love this one.do wright mor............................☺️khanak is so naughty............................love the story dear

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TitanFan

@TitansFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

lol, what have i become 🤣

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: JayaV
lol, what have i become 🤣

😆 🤣

Edited by p.fashion.d - 14 years ago

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

pooja dear loved it a lot.....suuuuuuuuuuperb sunshine and cheerful and wow kabaddi !!!!

Edited by sshriyaa84 - 14 years ago

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Can't get over how different both you FFs are, but they both suit ShaNak....Nice update Pooja😊....

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isomers

@isomers

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

holy shoot! :O can you please make this FF into a show? I'll fund it(but you can't go to Goa, I can't afford that kinda stuff😆) but you HAVE to name the characters Yashashri and Karan, would suit them more than Shaan and Khanak. ;)

I was waiting for you to get to atleast chapter 10 cuz I wanted to read it as one BIG chunk! and now that I have..DAMN! I had so many things to say about the previous chapters but I totally lost my thinking process by the end.😆 ):

This FF is so totally hatke! It has the realistic touch in it and plus..it has *cough* Yash&Karan *cough* I mean..uhhh, Shaan and Khanak!😆 Whenever I read something that Shaan says, I get this mental image of Shaan really saying it! the drama queen-ness in his dialogues is awesome!! <3

and Khanaaakkkk! she is one helluva an amazing chic! Totally diggin' her character! The independent personality of hers is awesome.

'kisne kaha?! Main tumhe apne tan- maan se pyaar karta hoon!' he put his hand across her shoulders and pulled her to him, ' Humara toh janam janam ka saath hai jane-maan.'

Khanak smiled, 'you are still buying the prawns!'

'Oh! Fine!'

^^ oh shit! this part right here totally takes the cake! I can SO imagine Shaan and Khanak(Yash&Karan) having a chilled out conversation like that!<3

looooveeee the FF! the witty dialogues and the characters make it totally awesome!

-Nitya

p.s. whenever I say Shaan&Khanak, I always mean Yash&Karan..because for me, this FF is totally for them! Me and Beeni have been freaking out about them becoming a couple..and this FF isn't helping my brain much.😆

Edited by -Nitya- - 14 years ago