*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 16

😃* is speechless due to all the wonderful comments * 😃

Originally posted by: -Nitya-

holy shoot! :O can you please make this FF into a show? I'll fund it(but you can't go to Goa, I can't afford that kinda stuff😆) but you HAVE to name the characters Yashashri and Karan, would suit them more than Shaan and Khanak. ;)

I was waiting for you to get to atleast chapter 10 cuz I wanted to read it as one BIG chunk! and now that I have..DAMN! I had so many things to say about the previous chapters but I totally lost my thinking process by the end.😆 ):

This FF is so totally hatke! It has the realistic touch in it and plus..it has *cough* Yash&Karan *cough* I mean..uhhh, Shaan and Khanak!😆 Whenever I read something that Shaan says, I get this mental image of Shaan really saying it! the drama queen-ness in his dialogues is awesome!! <3

and Khanaaakkkk! she is one helluva an amazing chic! Totally diggin' her character! The independent personality of hers is awesome.

'kisne kaha?! Main tumhe apne tan- maan se pyaar karta hoon!' he put his hand across her shoulders and pulled her to him, ' Humara toh janam janam ka saath hai jane-maan.'

Khanak smiled, 'you are still buying the prawns!'

'Oh! Fine!'

^^ oh shit! this part right here totally takes the cake! I can SO imagine Shaan and Khanak(Yash&Karan) having a chilled out conversation like that!<3

looooveeee the FF! the witty dialogues and the characters make it totally awesome!

-Nitya

p.s. whenever I say Shaan&Khanak, I always mean Yash&Karan..because for me, this FF is totally for them! Me and Beeni have been freaking out about them becoming a couple..and this FF isn't helping my brain much.😆

Suppperbbb Update, Pooja!!👏