Chaloo Khanak- OS UPDATED on page 2 and page 3 - Page 4

tofeeeeeeeessssss i wannna hug u big time🤗🤗🤗...........dear u just made my mind n heart go sumwhere else only wat a super duper scene awesome awesome awesome......i cant tell u in wrds how beautiful this scene is......a perfect romance n a perfect confession...i want this 2 heppen wid shsnak at their confession time..........really really put this on the star one site n im 10000% sure u wil win...i soooooooooooooooooooo loved reading it n i was imagining everything happen between my shanak..............beautiful dear just superb.......standing ovation 2 u👏👏👏👏👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

yeah beeni., karishma is right.

Originally posted by: arsh-fan

hey beeni nice scene........... 😊 i wish something similar to this happens 😛 spacially shan carrying khanak in his arms 😉 "remembers last time when he carried her" oh those golden ShaNak days!!! 😭 miss them badly 😭
anyways loved ur post 😛 do continue soon 😊 😊

the ending was superb...i loved it and i loved the part when he took his shirt off i wonder how khanak kept her hands to herself lol ..wish you could write more...

OMG OMG Too Good Beeni honey.!!! 👍🏼.Where were u all this while?.You write fantastic.Plz i want more😆.Love the title BTW Chaloooooooo.😆

😆😆😆😆😆Beeeennnnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii....hila...just loved it....loved it ...loved it and hope soemthing simila happens in the show....

@ heena thanks a lot :) i'll try to write more :) how abbout i convert this to an FF? lol

@ sehjal: oops i forgot to put your name in. I was only thinking of you when i made shaan go shirtless. thanks waisay :)

@ krishnaaa *hugs* thank you soooo much!!! i lvoe you loads!haha sehju is happy with just looking at his well toned upper part of the body :D er...you on the other hand...lol...tiny teeny towel ROFL!!ok sure i''ll try :D

Originally posted by: missfilmy

Shaantanu, on the other hand, sat on the bed and what he did next made Khanak gulp. Taking off his shirt, he announced to the room in general, "Buhat garmi hain" and laid on the bed, shirtless

Originally posted by: togepe30

If he does that...Then Not only Khanak but all the Gurls in RBO Forum will be 😳😳😳👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ROFL !!!

Loved the 3 part OS !!😆😆 Cheerz to many more such OS's !!!😉

Luv,

Vandu😉

Beeeeeeniiiiiiiiiiiii dear