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Posted: 14 years ago

@Creatives - you have given us undoubtedly the most unique soap of indian tele where along with thrill of the drama there was a comic releief .Some best dialogues and enriched our vocab with Good Neend , Burthal and many more :) Shown us contemporary way of handling same old situations . I would always be with you but here is a plea for you on the current track ....

If I see the current track from rom-com perspective its good but if I see the current track in perspective of the RBO story it somewhere falls short of where the story was when after Shaan brings Khanak home and Tashu moves out.

Earlier there was a thrill of unpredictable situations in the story and the way the characters handled them.When Shaan got the project ,Khanak stood up to get back her love ,Sunil helped Shaan and Khanak the viewers felt as high as if they have scored a goal .And there was always the excitement around Shanak scenes which showed a couple who once were cuase of each others grief in life were now the strongest allies ,life of each other .


Now there is still excitement about Shanak scenes but the thrill on the story front is lacking for me.There is too much focus on their nok-jhok and less on their understanding as husband wife....Shanak figured out the way from hatred to friendship to love all by themselves (ok ..gauri bhabhi,chanda varkar were triggers) ,so please bring back that level of their relationship where one knows without saying what the other half wants ....

Show their scenes but also tell us their story .I am eager to know what happened next in the story after the spoiled brat turned loving husband brings back the once widowed but getting a second chance at life girl of 20(?) home.

Does Shaan work on getting her more educated ,how does he cope with his new responsibilities? ...What is it about Shaan's life that Khanak finds diffult adjusting ? Her ignorance on certain aspect of life being such young and Shaan's maturity in handling those situation for his wife who is younger than him .

Whatever be the future track I am sure you would excel once more but please tell take their story forward.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya1209

@Creatives - you have given us undoubtedly the most unique soap of indian tele where along with thrill of the drama there was a comic releief .Some best dialogues and enriched our vocab with Good Neend , Burthal and many more :) Shown us contemporary way of handling same old situations . I would always be with you but here is a plea for you on the current track ....

If I see the current track from rom-com perspective its good but if I see the current track in perspective of the RBO story it somewhere falls short of where the story was when after Shaan brings Khanak home and Tashu moves out.

Earlier there was a thrill of unpredictable situations in the story and the way the characters handled them.When Shaan got the project ,Khanak stood up to get back her love ,Sunil helped Shaan and Khanak the viewers felt as high as if they have scored a goal .And there was always the excitement around Shanak scenes which showed a couple who once were cuase of each others grief in life were now the strongest allies ,life of each other .


Now there is still excitement about Shanak scenes but the thrill on the story front is lacking for me.There is too much focus on their nok-jhok and less on their understanding as husband wife....Shanak figured out the way from hatred to friendship to love all by themselves (ok ..gauri bhabhi,chanda varkar were triggers) ,so please bring back that level of their relationship where one knows without saying what the other half wants ....

Show their scenes but also tell us their story .I am eager to know what happened next in the story after the spoiled brat turned loving husband brings back the once widowed but getting a second chance at life girl of 20(?) home.

Does Shaan work on getting her more educated ,how does he cope with his new responsibilities? ...What is it about Shaan's life that Khanak finds diffult adjusting ? Her ignorance on certain aspect of life being such young and Shaan's maturity in handling those situation for his wife who is younger than him .

Whatever be the future track I am sure you would excel once more but please tell take their story forward.

grt post.loved..u were excellent wid ur words.tht's realy want v want to convey d cv's of d show........TERRIFIC👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Priya,
Totally agree with you... well-said! There are many of us here who were attracted to RBO because, and only because it is the story of a widow married by circumstances to the man who she regards as her husband's killer! To me, that is very interesting and intriguing! Really hope this ILU and Shaan singing track gets over this wk, and we get back to the main crux of the story from next week onwards....


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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted on 7th September

@Creatives - First of all, we love this new intense track of RBO....The twist was good as it has made Khanak question her feelings and it is a test for ShaNak's love.....It's good you have bought back the Haveli issue and how it is related to Mr Agarwal....Madhvi's sweet poisioning of ShaNak is pure evil, but it is this unique form of emotional blackmail, better than a vamp storyline.....
If ShaNak have to go through heartache, please still continue the paatshala and project tracks.....It will be great viewing to see how they handle all the situations, while hiding their feelings and argueing.....
Please don't show ShaNak as weak toys for the negative charactors to play with....Keep the mis-understaning between them if you must....But we still want to see the same spark from this jodi....
Just one last idea for the furture.....RBO can take the story planning structure from western sitcoms.....By this I mean, you could add seasonal festivities, family incidents and cameo roles, to refresh the story from time to time....But at the same time, the a central track and charactor stories stay constant through-out the show.....I think Rang Badalti Odhani should show cameos like Gaurav Geera.....The journey track progressed ShaNak's story and it was entertaining too....It is always interesting to watch charactors interact during festivals.....Holi, New Years, Dewali, Rahki.....There are so many festivals to choose from....
Keep up the good work👍🏼....Karan and Yashashri's acting is fantastic👏⭐️....First they had us all smiling with them and we are crying with them too.....

@Creatives please can you bring back unresolved issues. Like we have said we have loved the family track , but we need a balance of serious and light😊....
Edited by The_May_Rose - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Creatives and production team.....
We loved this show due to it's origanal concepts and diffrent story....
We still love the show and support it it fully, but I am afreaid to say if you continue to drag the ILU issue it will overshadow any progress you are trying to show in the relationships of the family members.....
We love all the actors especially Yashashri and Karan....But the same dailogue and story is tiring to watch after so many weeks....Please stick to the essense of the show, which promised to deal with real life issues.....You can show ShaNak facing this and still show a love story.....Please don't weaken the characters....We want to see a stronger Khanak and we want to the Shaan that has learned from his mistakes.....
Please show us some progrees or it may affect your TRP's in a negatiuve way.....The shows best promotion is the acting and surprise eliment of the tracks....It has already gained recognition for Star One by winning the awards for best music.....
Edited by The_May_Rose - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Creatives and Production House ..
You created characters and nurtured them as the story went ahead ..
We fell in love with those characters -their strength and weaknesses ,the content of the show and more so the original presentation of it...
But past month has been tiring .Once in a while a person can behave out of character but for a month ? ..Because of so much hype created around ILU it has now become be all and end all for viewers forming opinion around Khanak ...Khanak was never shown to do so much self talk (that was Shaan's forte ) and go back on her words so many times...So please dont compromise and loose the esence of Khanak or Shaan's character ...
Infact its evident that the story writters and dialogue writters feel as we do as they too have run out of option to repeat the same thing for a month ...
So please draw a line and take this show forward whatever be the direction.I have faith you would know the best way and direction for the show .
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Posted: 14 years ago

@Creatives - Oh how I missed this unpredictability ,the original way of doing things and basically your way of doing a sequence.Today you rocked yet again.👍🏼👏👏

From past week the story was slowly moving back to track(RBO felt like RBO 😊) and the characters behave like themselves.But there was still unrest amongst the viewers coz of long running Khanak's confession track ..What a way to confess..With the title track and flashback it could not have been better for me ..Thats what I call RBO way of doing things ..

For today ..I love you 😳

A special mention to Karan and Yashashri and the dialogue writters-
They deserve such brilliant scenes and make it 1000 times better with their superb acting and writng respectively.👏

@RBO Team -You all as a team complement each other😊 .All the best for the future track!


PS: This made me forget all those moments I felt drag at one point..Aap ko bhi manna padega woh kuch episodes drag the haan .So Please Please Please ...agli koi sequence mein itna zyada maat tadpana..😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
hatts off 2 u Creatives and also our beloved yasharan..they just rocked 2day...though the confession track was a bit dragging but u justified this through 2days episode....tthanks a lot....
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Posted: 14 years ago
dear cvs u did a great job on nov 8 episode.
.khanks confession was really mindblowing and not in the expected way.
Her dialgoues were tooo good..The whole scene was vey well written and U have a heartfelt appreciation from all of us..
Yashashri/karan ar brilliant actors and u have writtena scenes wherien they were able to showcase their acting talents..
thanx a lot from ShaNak fans.
sometimes out of our overwhelming lov we must have slightly annoyed u by scolding and also over suggestiong certain things......
nd the old flashback scenes were very well done too.Background music., title music and everything else was very very nice..kerp up the good work.
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Posted: 14 years ago
entire week was awesome fab wrk by u cvs no complaints at all.......ur wrk is always upto the mark

loved the new beginning scores n the awesome dialogues
keep the gr8 wrk going cvs👏👍🏼

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