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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear CVs,
I am with Sejal (sharmida) and Sareeta on this. The point is, we were all hoping Shaan and Khanak will face the fact that they were almost about to lose each other for ever with that shaadi plan. But instead, we find them both behaving like nothing ever happened, that there was no Natasha in their life, that Khanak had just gone for a walk rootke, and Shaan manaofied her and brought her home!!!! That just doesn't make sense.
Many of us in this forum are not the kind of people who start believing in fictional characters and assume them to be real live beings. No. We are a mature bunch, we know this is fiction, we know Shantanu and Khanak do not exist in real. But even fiction needs logic, otherwise it won't hold for long. Natasha's character has been etched in our minds as the most mature of the 3 and the way Shaan and Khanak are behaving, it is making a mockery of their marriage and Natasha's broken heart!
Please wrap up this ILU business and get to the story. Drama does not have to be rona-dhona. Remember the scene you did when Shaan accidentally told Natasha 'I love you Khanak'? That was brilliant. The scene where Natasha comes into Shaan's room one morning and finds Khanak there, that was superb! Karan and Yashashree are very good actors and so it is not clear to us why you are resorting to so much comedy, for almost 3 weeks now...
Are we in for a huge storm later on? is that what you are hinting here?
If not, please get this anniversary party going, and Karan singing, and Khanak saying ILU etc... all done, and get these two immature people to talk to each other, and realise that one person simply walked away so that these two could live happily. If not for anyone else, Shaan and Khanak owe it to Natasha to have a proper conversation.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmida

Sorry CV's but this track ain't working.Could you'll please explain to me the kind of comedy you'll are dishing out???.It is actually quite pathetic to see grown-ups behave like this.You'll have 2 great actors and instead of exploiting their talent in the right way you'll are dishing out such slapstick nonsense.Is this the way to show 2 people in love who were literally on the verge of losing thieir marriage.Please dont make a mockery of this sacred bond.Khanak is behaving like a total ditz ever since Shan brought her back home.Poor and repititive dialogues.Shan is encouraging this attitude form her.I mean are you'lll showing 2 people in a live-in relationship or a youthful married couple who have started to fall deeply in love but instead behaving like comedians and the comedy is far from funny.Isn't this supposed to be an emotional drama??? I am not asking you'll for hottt scenes but please for the love of God can Shan and Khanak communicate like humans?? This I LUV U business is the longest i have seen dragged in any TV show ever.It is dragged to the extent of boredom that i dont even care now if she confesses or not.The thrill has long gone.The shaadi track was emotional and while I did not want to see the whole rona dhona, i will not accept ridiculous comedy.I mean are you'll interested in shifting this show to SAB TV that harbours such comedy shows???I am extremely disappointed.The heartwarming love story is vanishing fast and thick under this blanket of unecessary dragging and stupid comic filling episodes that are not eevn funny now.You'll do want ratings to improve right??? Get to it .Stick to what you'll had done b4.Instead of Shanak maturing in their journey theyare growing smaller and smaller day by day.It is too hard for me to digest this .This comedy or comic releif that you'll are trying to provide is not amusing.And BTW please tell me the date when Khanak decides to open her mouth.It will save me from watching all the episodes in between
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Even I think its dragging. Since Shaan has brought back Khanak they have hardly had any emotional scene where they say or atleast how badly they needed eachother. I mean the way Khanak left and Natasha made Shaan realised they have been fighting and fighting. Everytime this nok jhok kind of become irritating. I mean when there is a emotional scene you except it to be emotional but suddenly they will start fighting, arguing or pulling eachother's leg. Common we want to see Shanak chemistry. They should be potrayed as the most romantic pair on Television.
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Posted: 14 years ago

CVs - The day Shaan brought Khanak back,you had me feeling for with characters with you .My heart was filled with emotions of relief that they got a chance , fear that now with Mr A ,Madhvi and Khusboo not happy with them these two have a lot to face ,happiness that they would face it together and we would see their relationship maturing from Friends to hubby-wife.

But now with current track u have me lost and confused.Its good to show the other characters of family ,comic relief is good but please dont turn a soap of genre drama to comdey .

We love RBO because it is different and unique in drama category.And still love it and have hopes that the growing and maturity of the characters would be preserved in future and comic relief would be there like it was from begining but not in heavy dose as now which has turned the characters situation and action confusing.

When one is watching it on TV with another person/family who is/are not ardent fan of any show(majority viewer population who contribute to TRP) its difficult to convince not to switch channels when for last two weeks the protagonists and story are not moving .This person can always go and watch it on YT but does it help the show?

PS: You would always have a supporter in me becuase I have faith in you .But also be ready for constructive crticism when I feel its due as I want this show to succeed :)

Edited by priya1209 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Got one thing to say , kindly use ur own style and head in deciding this confession and end it soon , since ur style is catchy and gud , Dont drag it further , i have stopped watching rbo for one week now .............
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Posted: 14 years ago
OK I am basically copying and pasting the same thing that I did in Gaayus post.Thanks to Manita and May for encouraging me coz i was initially taking this as a joke but then later realised that this was not the worst idea in the world.😆.


OK CV's this is totally out of the blue but i just thought i should make you'll aware of what i wish to see in RBO's near future.Ok before i post this i know that it will be difficult to take this plot immediately coz Shanak haven't even reached a stage where this track can be used but i do feel that you'll cannot show them going around in circles for long.It has to end at some stage and once it does I would like to see them facing new challenges,tricky situations,obviously there will be some trust issues as well as both of them haven't been completely honest with eachother,whether it is Khanak telling Shan about the letter swap mystery and Mr A's initial threat or Shan using Khanak initially only for business reasons.And while i would like to see them face all this as a couple and also over come it,i do know that circumstances totally beyond their control can also cause them to drift apart not because they want to but that is just life.Things happen.

So if you'll ever decide to separate them plz dont make it boring like other shows where the girl leaves the house,finds solace in another rich man that takes care of her in the time being,the boy pines for her for a long period of time,finally they meet after months and then both the guys are vying for her affection .Plz dont make it like a typical soap opera.

Instead i thought that since Shank are such a fun couple even their future storyline should retain that element of fun in it.So dont ask me from where ,it was sort of out of the blue but i just got the idea of the Parent Trap,the 1998 version ofcourse with Lindsay Lohan.Now i dont know if you'll are aware of that movie but it is basically very simple.Incase you'll want to know more about it you'll will have to go to IMDB.😆.The story is simple,two people who loved eachother got separated coz they were at dfferent points in their life, career wise ,only to be brought back by their kids who meet at a camp .We know that Shan and Khanak are very towering personalities and it would be good to bring in a track where we see Khanak wanting to go out and acheive something in life and also be successful at it. You'll can show Shan being happy for her but at the same time also feeling the pinch coz he is a man and men like Shan have this whole ego thing going😆 .I hope you'll know what i am getting at.I am not saying that this is a valid reason for misunderstandings,but this could be one of the many things that you'll could show that can cause friction between the leads.I for one dont want to see Khanak in the kitchen all day long wasting her life?? How else will she discover her true talent?.I mean you'll can always show problems between the brothers and sister-in-laws,you'll can still retain the family drama but then again this is something that we see in TV shows daily and while it is ok for a week or 2,it becomes for monotonous viewing after sometime coz if we wanted to see family drama there are alot of shows doing the rounds that we can watch.RBO should be different i feel.

So if ever you'll come about this post could you'll atleast consider this in your future script?.I know that this track cannot be put into action immediately,but at some stage you'll will need to think about the future as well,so maybe after a few months,possibly after the new year,you'll could give it a thought. I am not saying that you'll should copy the entire movie or even the scenes.You'll can add your own touch and flavour to it and at the same time make it entertaining and beleivable.And if ever you'll decide to do this plz see that the child actors are capable enough coz the whole thing could backfire if the actors are average.😔.For inspiration i have posted the pic.😆




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Posted: 14 years ago
LOL i like the Parent Trap idea.Love that movie.It would be cool if they can incorporate this.I dont think it has been tried before on any Indian Show so it would definitely be interesting.But could they pull it off?😕.It would be tough getting somebody as talented as Lindsay Lohan though,i mean at that age with such acting prowess, but it is definitely worth a try.
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Posted: 14 years ago
dudee! I love The Parent Trap! :O it would be so cool to watch that with ShaNak! adore the idea. :D

^^ I agree with Heavens_Kiss, it would be kinda hard to find suitable child actors..but it doesn't hurt to try looking for them?
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Creatives - First of all I would like to say that the persent family track is wonderful👍🏼 and it important that we get a balance of ShaNak and the rest of the family....We understand the these tracks lay the foundation for furture events....But as Priya posted above, please move on the serious aspects of the show, once this track is over.....
The comedy is entertaining, but we want Shaan and Khanak to seriously talk about their lives now....Once the aniversery and ILU track is over, we need to see how the Dulwadhi relatives are going to delt with...It was never clear if they have left or not....
Shaan appears to be reverting back to his old habbits....Where is the responsible Shaan, who changed for Khanak?....And Khanak should continue to inspire him and make him work harder....To a certain extent we see her keeping him in check, but we want to see her act stronger....
There is also the issue of in-complete dialogue....The dialogue is half finished and confusing in some of the romantic scenes....It leaves us viewers with mixed feeling....Acting is always outstanding, but unfinished lines, are a put-off....For example Shaan said ' Jab mein bhuraa hojawo gha, tum mujhe tumhare baare mein kuch bhi yaad nahi rahe ga ' ....Why he said this was unclear....Was he saying this because Khanak doesn't express her love?....Or to tease her by denying his would last?😕.....Please address this in the script.....
We have praised the music in this show many times and till this week it was near perfect😊.....But this week you have introduced another new piece of fast guittar music for ShaNak....
It may not have been needed, as the RBO origanal & new classical ( sittar and drums ) and the ShaNak signiture music was enough....Please could you keep just a few variations and please tone down the volume so we can hear the dialogue....
Overall the show is awesome and love the romance between ShaNak and the various song squences we have seen picturised on them.....You have a wonderful cast and it is interesting to watch the stories if the other family members.....Looking forward to the aniversery party and Karan Tacker's singer....
Thank you for giving us a wonderful show and considering our surjestions😃......
Edited by The_May_Rose - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
CVs u guys r giving us an awesome flair of romance n comedy ...........im absolutely in love wid this track cause it gives me sooooo much of romance that i was dying to c on shanak n plus the superb comedy scenes of the entire khandelwal family
every dialogue is just soooooooooooooooo awesome n wen these superb talented stars bring it out wid the perfect expressions its like a double treat
im soooo loving all the different versions of the title song n shanak romantic tune
in 2days episode wen the title song was used it was so aptly performed......... rbo has the best music
all the dance sequences u have shown r just tooooo good
the way u guys choreograph the songs is superb
hatts off to u cvs
u never ever give us a dull moment in rbo.. iots always fun n romance
soon after the party i want shanak to b seriosu too n i know u shall give such rocking emotional scenes that yashu n kt will out do themselves
u guys put in so much of efforts to please yr viewers n im thouroughly enjoying this phase of rbo👏
keep it up cvs👍🏼
gr8 job👏👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Creatives - Most of us are enjoying the current romantic/comedy track....The last few weeks have been very entertaining and you have always surprised us with the turn of events in the show.....But please could you also tie in the serious issues of the show too.....
The problems ShaNak had before Natasha left can not just simply be forgotten....And then there is the issue of the Dulwadhi relatives which has been forgotten....What will be Mr Agarwal's next move?....
Though I love Akshay and Khushboo comic scenes, please keep the essnece of both their characters along side the comedy....Akshay Bhaiya was shown as a smart business man, with a sense of humour, but he was always direct with Khushboo and never let her undermine him...Somewhere this side of him seems lost....
We love how ShaNak are playing match-makers for their family members, but we don't want their scenes to be limited because of this....We are hoping to see Khanak confess soon as the track is coming to a close....And we like the message you put out, that the expression of love doesn't have to be verbal.....
Looking forward to the aniversery week and the news of Shaan's college flsh-back sounds interesting....We hope after next week we see ShaNak deal with the serious issues in their lives too.....
Thanks for a great show and congratulation on 150 episodes completed😊.....
Edited by The_May_Rose - 14 years ago

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