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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankkk uuuuuuu everyone for liking and commenting.
@armannkashridz :I have posted the pictures.I will inshallah pm u.BTW my sister name is mariam too.
@Lavarnia :Thanxxx for liking and commenting.
@Tanvi:Thank u soooo much for liking my work i'm not experienced.'Hidden feelings' was my first fanfiction.I will inshallah pm u.
@nehara:i will try to update soon.Maybe i will update today.I will Inshallah pm u.
@pRatiBhA.1990: I also loveeee savan.
@Cwezy_Manoola:Thanxxx for liking.Maybe i will update today.
@Pooj@ :Thanxxx for reading.I have posted pictures of characters along with their real names in brakets.
@_gunjan_:Thanxx for liking.Maybe i will update today.
@JPSYAbiggestfan: Thanxxx for commenting dear.
@Sharonyaqoob:I have addd the real names of them.Thanxxx for commenting.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickachu

Thankkk uuuuuuu everyone for liking and commenting.

@armannkashridz :I have posted the pictures.I will inshallah pm u.BTW my sister name is mariam too.
@Lavarnia :Thanxxx for liking and commenting.
@Tanvi:Thank u soooo much for liking my work i'm not experienced.'Hidden feelings' was my first fanfiction.I will inshallah pm u.
@nehara:i will try to update soon.Maybe i will update today.I will Inshallah pm u.
@pRatiBhA.1990: I also loveeee savan.
@Cwezy_Manoola:Thanxxx for liking.Maybe i will update today.
@Pooj@ :Thanxxx for reading.I have posted pictures of characters along with their real names in brakets.
@_gunjan_:Thanxx for liking.Maybe i will update today.
@JPSYAbiggestfan: Thanxxx for commenting dear.
@Sharonyaqoob:I have addd the real names of them.Thanxxx for commenting.


hey just a suggestion pm the link of this ff to everyone in ur buddylist
so
u can have more readers😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Armaankashridz :Yeah i have done it.Thanxxx for suggestion.

fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey faitma....sounds really really nice and interesting

can you please om me when you write chapter 1
-sneha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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FF: KISMAT CONNECTION

PART 1

At Singhania's Mansion,Siddhant singhania commonly known as sid is sitting on a chair reading his book quietly in evening.When he hears a loud noise and then it looks like someone is shouting.Sid decides to see what happened outside his room.He enters in hall and sees his two brothers are fighting while his one brother is looking very angry.

Armann(Shouting):Yeh sab tumhare galti hai shravan,tum haar rahe tha iss liye tumne yeh kiya.

Shravan:Nahi bhaiyya iss main mere galti nahi hai.Last time basket ball aap ka pas thi.

Shantanu(angrily): Jis ke waja se bhi hoa...Aap logon ko pata hai main ne yeh vase apne girlfriend ka liye liya tha.Yahan iss liye rakha tha taike subha bhool na jao.Ab aap dono paise nikalien.

Armann:Iss main mere galti nahi hai iss liye main nahi do ga.

Shravan:Mere bhi galti nahi hai main bhi nahi do ga.

Armann:Tumhare galti hai.

Shravan: Mere nahi hai.

Sid: BASSSSS

Shravan: Bhaiyya aap ko ghar main se bus kaise nazar aa rahe hai???

Sid angrily glare him.Shravan after seeing his elder brother face thinks to keep his mouth shut.

Sid: Koi soch sakta hai ka aap log medical college main pharte ho.Bhala Hall main kon basket ball khelta hai???Aur yeh vase kitne ka tha???

Shantanu:2000 ka.

Sid:Ok,Main abhi lata hoon.

Sid goes to his room while shantanu and armann high five eachother.

Shantanu: Dad and mom jab bhi abroad jate hain tu sid bhaiyya ko paise dite hain.Kyuki woh samijh te hain ka sid bhaiyya bohat responsible hain.

Armann:Iss liye jab mere aur shaan ka mann kiya ka aaj raat ko pizza khana bahar chaltey hain tu hum ne yeh drama kiya.Tumhi nahi bataya kyuki tere paat main koi baat nahi rahte.

Shravan: Loo!!!Tu yeh sab drama tha.Lagta hai starplus dhekne lage ho aaj kal by the way sid bhaiyya ko kon manaye ga??

Shantanu:Main hoon na..tum bas raat ka intezaar karo.........

Sid comes back and gives money to shantanu.He is going back to study when his brothers insists him to play basket ball and after long time,he agrees to play basket ball.

At Malhotra's Mansion,A beautiful girl,kangann is sitting on sofa watching basket ball match on tv with her two sisters.One of them is bitting nails while the other is shouting on the players.

Riddhima: Areee yeh ball ise pas karo.Nahi tu woh wale team ka banda le le ga.Time bohat short hai.Jaldi karoooo...........Gud veryyyy good Tum logon ka sath aisa hi hona chahiye tha.Main jab kha rahe thi ka isse pas karo tu kyu nahi kiya.Acha hoa haar gaye.

Kangann:Yeh jalne ki kya boo aa rahe hai kitchen se.

Sanchi: Kitchen main tu khanak di hain woh kabab bana rahe hain.

Kangann:Kya????

Three of them run towards kitchen and see that khanak is lost in her dreams.

Riddhima:Khanak tum kin khayaloon main ho kabab jal gaye ab kya ho ga.

Khanak: Sorry mujhe pata nahi chala.

Sanchi: Its ok di, main aur bana di te hoon.

Kangann: Dad abroad jate hoya mujhe paise di kar gaye tha.iss liye aaj khana hum bahar khayein ge.Thauk hai???

Riddhima:Gr8888888888.Maza aaye ga.

Khanak:Mujhe tayaar hona hai.

Sanchi:Per hum bahar kya khayein ge??

Kangann:Pizza hum sab ko pasand hai iss liye pizza khane chale ge.Ok.Aap tum sab tayaar ho jao.

Ridz/khanak/sanchi:Ok di..

They hug eachother and go to get ready.

PRECAP:Boys and girls at pizza shop.

Note:Sorry for long and boring part.Plzzzz leave ur comments.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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ooooooooo continue soon
cant wait to read it
and it was not all boring
it was aweeeeeeeesssssomeeeeeeeeeee
plzzz plzzzz plz plzzzz continue soon
luv
maryam
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bhaiyya aap ko ghar main se bus kaise nazar aa rahe hai???🤣
i can imagine Shravan saying this with his innocnet face
Lagta hai starplus dhekne lage ho aaj kal 😆
nice chapter :)
thanks for the pm
looking forward to the next one
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Hi Fatima, this is called a cool start... now i have to wait for the next part as it would be boys- girls confrontation..at the pizza corner. loved this part & i am sure i will enjoy the next part even more. thanks for the PM...Please always do PM me whenever u update as now i am not very regular on these forum😊..take care bye

love

tanvi

😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey...
awesome update...
it was really nice... not boring at all....
i really like shravan in this.... :D
cnt wait to read the next update....
precap sounds interesting....
pls update soon... :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG my fav KaSh, ShaNak..........nice concept.......do PM me wen u update ur FF.........wud luv to read it

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