FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 39

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww Rosh ,

Zabardsat update after a long time .

Really loved the way Rani took care of RS . Mithai khanay say rok dia ? 😆
Kitni pyaari jagah hai yaar .Photo is too soothing .😍

And Yudi was naughty ? 😎Didn't allow her to touch his reflection. So cute scene yaar and just after that....woh boat ride? 😍 Wow Yaar .

Rani is getting bigger aur sharma rahi hai ? 😳 cute .

Loved Niki- Rani scene as well and Yudi is so responsible yaar. He want Saksh to establish first then he will give Nikki's hand . Wow ...sensible thinking . Responsible bro hun...and Saksh was too good.

Yeh phir say jhagarnay lagay ...Beta - beti..😆 Cute fight .

Ab jaldi say CR kikhilli flying karday yaar . Rani ko kidnap karay gi yeh..Usko to main chorungi nahin...

Update soon hun..
usmrasul thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
uhuh rosh, really good update and lovely picture..wish could see real yura there
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh,
That was fantastic. 😛😃🤗
Loved the way you handled Nisha story. Your Yudi is just too sensible. I hope Rani is not in trouble.
CR need to be caught soon. Loved the YuRa khitphit. 😃😉
Chal ab jaldi se next part likh.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh,that was awesome,sweetie!!
What a home sweet home-it's very beautiful!!

And,Yudi's mischief-aye haye,so cute!!

Nisha part was the best-I loved the way Yudi handles everything from work to family-he is perfect-jaldi usse raja bana do!!

Oye,phir se cliffie??

Par koi gal nahin-itna lamba update jo kiya hai!!

Continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh its amazing!!! Specially this line "The night ends with hour long talks, few touches, few kisses making every second of it memorable with the moon and trees as its evidence!".

Yeh Rani Yudi se itana zagadati kyun hain?? But apana Yudi hain na mana leta hain usse!!!

So finally Nikki tells truth and Yura accepted Saksh-Nikki relationship! Great one!

But the end is so scary..... Rani's kidnap on verge of her god bharayi... it could be risky to kid Rosh!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh loved it and thank you for the long update and lovely visual effect with the lovely picture. Where did you find it? Loved every bit of YuRa Nok Jhok over beta ya beti, loved NiSha issue handling by Yudi, loved their long boat ride and Mischievous Yudi before that Ooooh craving for such scenes in the serial. 😍 Rosh what is going to happen next? Please dont let CR be successful and let Rani and our Yuvraj be safe. Hope at least in your FF the baddies are dealt with properly. In the current track I do not want Yudi to forget or completely forgive his family for throwing Rani out in her condition.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh loved it and thank you for the long update and lovely visual effect with the lovely picture. Where did you find it? Loved every bit of YuRa Nok Jhok over beta ya beti, loved NiSha issue handling by Yudi, loved their long boat ride and Mischievous Yudi before that Ooooh craving for such scenes in the serial. 😍 Rosh what is going to happen next? Please dont let CR be successful and let Rani and our Yuvraj be safe. Hope at least in your FF the baddies are dealt with properly.
In the current track I do not want Yudi to forget or completely forgive his family for throwing Rani out in her condition.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Roshni aise scenes tho khabhi bhi dekhneko nahi milenge RKAB mein. i just loved it.❤️ All you FF writers should write a good story and submit it to the channel to show them that you people are better writers than that idiot called sampurn😡
Edited by latakathera - 15 years ago
Roshni. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Faiza,
Thanks a lot!
😃 Acha laga woh photo? Thank you so much!😳
CR ko nahi chodegi? Ok Ok..Pakad le...meine kab mana kiya?😛
I'll surely update soon my dear! Pata nahi kab!😳
Usma,
Thank you so much my dear!😃
Bobbie,
Thank you so much! I always wanted my Yudi to be sensible - toh bana diya!😳
I'll surely update soon!
Purva,
Thank you dear!
Kya karoon yaar...itna lamba type karke, my fingers were aching!😳 I'll surely update soon!
Issiliye cliffie dalna pada!😃
Darsh,
Thanks yaar! Uss jagada mei bhi pyaar hai naa!😳
Rani ko kuch nahi hone doongi, Yudi hain naa! always the protector!😃
Juna di,
Thanks a lot for the encouragement di, Hope I live upto your expectations!!
I'll surely update soon, then you can say how it was or if I disappointed you!
I always had that type of home in my mind..So just found it out!😳
Lata,
Thanks a lot Lata! I shall surely try wirting it better!😃
PS: I shall surely try to update it soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 36

Rani and CR go to the temple. When Rani prays, CR signals her men to kidnap her. The men take Rani away despite of her struggles and trials to scream. They had shut her mouth so that she doesn't scream. The men are too strong for her and she is unable to get out of their clutches! As per the plan, CR hits herself so that she is not doubted. Rani faints and the men easily take her!

CR goes to the palace all the way smirking but changes her expressions as soon as she enters the palace! She runs inside making it look as though she had been running all the way!

CR (panting): RS…..KUNVER! Jaldi aayiye!

RS and Yudi shocked go near her and make her sit. RS asks her: Araam se kahiye Kya hua?

CR stars crying and faking a drama: Yeh sab humare wajeh se hua! Pata nahi ab hum kya karenge!

RS: Batayiye toh sahi ki hua kya?

CR: Jee, Woh - Woh Badi Bahurani ka apharan ho gaya!

Yudi and RS are aghast hearing that! Yudi's worst fears comes boiling up which he had long ago burried deep inside him…But after all those were too good to be true! There was a deadly friend waiting for Rani's death! She had to find out soon –but how! But before all that he had to rescue Rani and the kid! He prayed the almighty to keep Rani and the kid safe! His thought were completely incoherent! He would only be alright if he sees her safe!

RS tries to calm Yudi down but Yudi has his temper raised.

RS: Bete, Dheerej rakhiye kuch nahi hoga!

Yudi: Kaise Pitaji? Issi ka toh darr tha! Iss se hi toh hum Rani ko raksha karna chahte the! Ab jaldi se hume kuch karna hi padega!

RS: Haan Bete, Ab jaldi chaliye hum unhe doondte hai!

RS turns towards CR who was still continuing her acting: CR, aapne dekha ki who log Badi Bahurani ko kahan le gaye?

CR: Nahi, Hum behosh ho gaye toh hume kuch nahi pata chala!

CR had expected RS to show a little concern towards her, instead he calls a servant and asks her to clean up CR wounds and make her take rest.

Yudi and RS leave to search for Rani while CR from a different number calls her men and warns them about RS and Yudi. She also instructs them to give Rani the poison as per planned so that no one is doubted! She preferred the non-violence method to kill – the same way she adopted to kill BR!

Rani slowly gains her consciousness and opens her eyes where she could hear few men talking! She could catch some words like "Memsaheb" and "Zehar"! She thought it would be wise for her to act as if she was unconscious so that further harm is not done to her and at the same time listen to these people and find out about who was trying to kill her!

Next what Rani heard scared her out of her wits; she never imagined such a thing to happen!

One of the goons had said: Arrey! Suno..Memsaheb ne kaha ki agar uss ladki ko hosh nahi aati toh phir bhi hum usse zehar denge – injection se! He calls another goon to go buy injection!

She had no option to escape- she was tied to the chair! She tried to think properly for some way to get out! She was not going be an easy victim for them! Like her Kunverji had thought her –she was going to fight them! Though she was too weak for them – she was going to tackle them with her mind which was strong enough to beat them!

CR waits and waits for hours together to get the good news from her men. She wanted to know what happened to Yudi and RS as well…Unable to wait for longer time, She decides to call them and enquire about it! No one picks up the call..She gets so frustrated! Yet, she does not give up, she tries time and again and finally someone picks up the call – She doesn't speak at first waiting for the person at the other end to speak..When no one does, she is about to cut the call when she hears "Line pe koi nahi hai Pitaji! She gets a shock of her life! Yudi and RS had reached that place? But… how? How did they reach there so soon? Moreover, how did they locate the place so soon? Soon she was going to get her questions answered!

It's almost night time when RS along with YuRa enter! Yudi carries Rani and gets in and without further delay, he goes to their room and makes her sleep! Yudi sits beside her while she keeps and thinking about the events that happened! Though they had found the loose thread, it was not yet certain! He was so deeply immersed in his thoughts, not knowing what happened in his surroundings! Next thing he heard was Rani's scream!

Rani had woken up screaming thinking about how the men were going to give the injection to her and kill both her and the baby! She was sweating even in the low temperature of the AC!

Yudi tries to comfort her, but all in vain!

Yudi: Rani, kya hua? Aap teek toh hai?

Rani was still panting and sweating, the words choked her throat! She was unable to talk anything, she looked pale and worn out!

Yudi: Idhar dekiye, Humare taraf dekhiye!

He cups her face and tells her: Aapko darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai! Aap ko nahi hoga, hum aapko kuch nahi hone denge! Jab tak hum aapke paas hai, hum aapko har sankat se bachayenge! Ab aap araam se so jayiye!

After lot of consoling and comfort, Rani sleeps but constantly keeps murmuring that "Kunverji, hume chodke mat jayiye and holds his hand tightly!

Yudi was thinking about his plan to be executed to catch that person, he just wanted another clue and the right time! RS was also keenly working towards this! No one knew about this except for RS and him!

CR in her room keeps thinking about her riddance and every time she is saved by Yudi! She wonders how to execute her plan, but sooner or later she thinks that she has to reveal herself and kill Rani to achieve her goal! She was going to try that method too as it was no use depending on some men hired! She trusted her capability more than anyone!

In the morning, Yudi allows Rani to sleep a little longer remembering her nightmare and how long she took to calm herself before sleeping! He goes to have breakfast thinking that he would bring the breakfast to the room itself!

RS and Yudi talk over it and think over and over about their plan and that too with the Godhbharayi function nearing they had to halt their plan for the time being and give their entire concentration on Rani to keep her safe! They see Rani coming towards the dining table, and Yudi changes the topic all of a sudden to BR, that was the only thing he could think of at that time! RS too understands and continues with that topic.

Rani, not wanting to disturb them just sat in her place and started having her breakfast quieter than usual but raptly listening to their talk as she did not want to interrupt them!

Yudi: Toh, Pitaji hum pooch rahe the ki, Jab hum Mehal mei nahi the toh maa ka dekhbaal kaun kar raha tha?

RS: woh toh Niharika aur CR kar rahe the! Par poori tarah se Niharika ne zimmadari utta li!

Yudi: Uss din kya hua tha pitaji jab Niharika humse milne aayi thi?

RS: Haan, Uss din toh CR unka khayal rakh rahi thi! Poore din unke saath hi bait rahi thi, hili tak nahi! Pata nahi kya hua, achanak BR ko passene chootne lage aur toh CR ne doctor dwara di gayi dawaai unhe diya, par halat sudhari nahi, balki bagadti gayi aur –

Both of them hear a noise and turns towards Rani to see that she had dropped the spoon on the plate with a shocked look on her face! She was looking from yudi to RS unable to talk anything!

Yudi instantly gets alarmed and goes near her to see what was wrong and why she acted that way!

Yudi: Rani, kya hua?

Rani : Jee woh Maa ke baare mei –

Yudi: Aap ghabrayiye mat, kuch nahi hum bas Yunhi baat kar rahe the. Aap chinta mat –

Rani(talking as fast as possible): Jee, who baat nahi hai! Baat yeh hai ki Badi maa ko koi dawaai nahi di jaati thi kyunki doctor se di gayi dawaai ka koi asar nahi tha, Issiliye Chotti Maa na khud roka! Issi wajeh se toh hum gaanv se aaye the taaki Maa ko jadi bhootyon se teek kar sake! Yeh baat Chotti maa bhi jaante the aur doctor bhi! Toh unhe dawaai kyun diya tha?

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