FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 40

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Posted: 15 years ago
Girls,
Please forgive me..There are no YuRa moments in this part, but I hope you would understand this as the story had to move ahead! But, I assure you that you will get a nice YuRa moment soon!
I hope you all like this!
Please do comment and tell me how it was!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh ,

It was really nice update . I loved the way you described about Rani's feelings and when she got kidnapped she did not give up so easily and faced the situation brilliantly as her Kuwarji wanted her to be strong always na😃 . She did not let him down and I loved RS and Yudi who quickly reached there and saved her .👏 ⭐️

CR has decided to handle the matter herself .😲 So cruel and evil yaar.😡But my Rani is again brilliant . Teray FF main bhi uski tube light on hogai . Wah !!!👏 😆

Looking forward to read if what RS and Yudi will do when they will get to know about CR's cruel plan.😈

And there is no need to ask forgiveness about missing YuRa (scene). This update was really well written according to situation .👍🏼 and i know very well , once haalaat would be normal then there will be a long YuRa scene . ( romantic wala )😍 and in this update i like the way he consoled him. It was much needed rather than showing romance in that tensed situation

Again i am saying , it was brilliant update !!!! 🤗

Continue soon hun...😉 😛


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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh I loved it and it is getting more and more interesting as Yudi gets closer to the clues. Thank you Rosh you are so creative and hopefully in the next part Yudi and RS have more proof about CR and there could be some bedroom scenes, I mean caring lovey dovey scenes with YuRA 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
no time to comment will do later sorry
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Posted: 15 years ago
rosh mera cuddly duddly no need to apologize.....update was really good and yes story needs to move ahead...just having yura look at each other for infinite and praising each other with nothing happening is awfully boring.................
CR is a smart evil as always
hope the baby is alright
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh,
I see that our Yudi carried her in their room......😛😉
I liked this part very much. I see you are better at building suspense than our friend. Do update soon. 😃
Edited by bobbiedhillon - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh, I am bit confused in this part... How did Yudi and RS come to know where is Rani? I am glad that she is fine and her kid too... But now she got link with BR's health as well? I hope there is no more harm for her from CR....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh,

So sorry I missed ur last update. Okies, the YuRa moments were too cute as usual. CR, she a person who's never gonna change. The way Yudi helped Saksham is indeed smart of him. Niharika and Saksham can look forward to a settled future. Faking kidnapping?! God, this female will never change. Hey, this isn't fair, you didn't tell us how our heros saved our Princess!

Okay, CR, your happy days are gonna end soon, bad days ahead!

Thank God, Rani is smart and put the two and two together!

Do update soon!




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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh,when did u update this one??
Never mind,better late than never!
Wow, CR ka game khul raha hai!! Rani has got brains! Kya team hai: RS,Yudi aur Rani!!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Faiza,🤗
Thanks Faiza! Ab toh khatam karna hi padega..Enough of CR's chaal!😳😳
You will get to know soon..Everything will be sorted in the next part!!
You will surely get a bada waala romantic part after the mystery is solved!😳
Juna di,🤗
Thank you so much! I will try to live upto your expectations!!
Sadia,🤗
Still waiting for your comments!😳
Usma,🤗
Thank you so much my dear!Thank you for your lovely comments!
I hope I live up to your expectations by wiritng suspense!😳
Bobbie,🤗
Just showing our dear friend how to bulid up suspense!😳 Aapki farmaish poora karne ki koshish me lage hue hai!😛
Darsh, 🤗
No need to be confused..I'm just building some suspense here! You will know it in the next part for sure! And I wil explain it with a flashback of what happened and how RS ad Yudi went there!😳😳
Tia,🤗
Thanks so much!
You will surely know how the princess was saved! Sabr karo meri pyaari dost!😳
Purva,🤗
Thank you so much for your lovely comments!
Dekhti jaa akhir hota kya hai!😳😳
Will post the next part soon!😳😳
Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago

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