JAZ'S FF-NEW PART 15, PG 27, 10 APRIL!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
jazz nice part..finally BR realise the king that Rani is best..
nikki doing acting or real me she hurts..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thhhxxx silvergirl... for your lovely words! i know how it is... i didnt understand hindi AT ALL till i started watching films and serials...coz i dont speask it at home either.... will try and do most of it in english 4 u(ill try to add a lil translation of dialogues after 4 u!!!)....

hope that my hindi makes sense!!
and thanx pop77(is it payal?) ...4 ur v nice comment :) 😊
jaz xxxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey thanks Jaz..its really wonderful..If only our RS could be soo matured in his thoughts.. I hate the way they treat Nikki in the show..Waiting for the next.. Btw.. i hope Yudi and Rani do figure in your next part..
Thanks for this it really makes our weekends happy..😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you jazz, really happy now that i will be able to understand the dialogues but please if it is too much trouble don't worry. please translate for me what was written in the letter given to munna from yudi, i just have to know!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
aww no problem will try my best...as for the letter.. noone yet knows whats in it!! not even me really!!!!. i mean the whole scene where sumitra and munna told rani she would have to get engaged to buddha doctor was part of what yudi wrote in letter as his plan. basically, he explained to sumitra in his letter about how he loved rani and then gave instructions on what to do to surprise rani( he knew rani could never really tell her mum she loved him as she is too shy so he did for her without embarasing her)
hope that helps!! jaz xx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww thanks jaz, so embarassed now because i thought i knew what the story was leading to but i didn't. i completely missed the engagement bit. thanks for explaining it to me. ooohhh now i'm really excited about the next part, will Rani go for the buddha doctor as she only loves yudi but she doesn't know it's him. looking forward to the next part and monday's episode. i think i can safely say we are all mad about RKAB especially yudi, he always looks hot, hot, hot. i don't think i have ever been mad about any show apart from pride and prejudice with colin firth. am really happy i can share these moments with everyone that is a fan as my family thinks i'm crazy and obsessed. silvergirl xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yura scenes coming VERY soon....... but just 2 give u sumthing 2 read in meantime......translation is in brackets for silvergirl!!! PS SILVERGIRL... PM ME FOR A DETAILED UPDATE ON WHAT HAS HAPPENED SO FAR IF YOU WANT.......enjoy!!!

Part 5

Some time later, yudi was sitting in the car,w ith saksham driving. He was in deep thoughts, when suddenly his mobile phone began to ring. Looking at his watch, he realized it must be Munna.

M: "Kunwarji aap kahaa hai?(Prince where are you?)

Y: "Bas, abhi aa rahe hain…dho ghante mein hum aate hai…."(Im just coming.. I'll be there in 2 hours)

M : "Theek hai…..aap jante hai kunwarji? Didi ko achche kapade aur zebar pehne se manaa kar diya. Aap tho jaante hai ke hum gaaonwale ke paas itne achche kapde nahin hai lekin voh….voh ek seedhi saadhi sari pehane se bhi manaa kar diya. Woh bahut hi pareshaan hai…Humne unki baatein suni thi jab hum mandir mein, chandu ke saath the…woh keh rahi thi bhagwan se ke voh aapko dhoka nahin dehna chahti ho…bas woh amma aur dadi ke liye yeh sab kar rahi thi…..Dadi ko abhi tak pata nahin hai aap dono ke bare mein…."(Ok.. do you know? Didi has refused to wear nice clothes and jeweler…. You know we villagers don't have very nice clothes…but she is refusing to wear a plain simple sari…. Shes very worried…we heard her talking to God in the mandir, when we were with chandu. She was saying she didn't want to betray you… she was just doing this for Amma and Dadi…dadi doesn't even know about you 2…)

"Such much? Humne rani ko itna bada dhoka aur pareshaan de kar acha nahin kiya. Woh tho bechari... "(Really? I've not done good by deceiving Rani and troubling her. Poor thing she..)

"bechari kya kunwarji…manaa key eh unki majboori thi.. lekin jab Rani aap ko dhoka de rahi thi .. RB ban ke…tho woh theek tha ? "(What do you mean poor thing Prince? I agree that she was helpless, but when she became RB she was deceiving you.. was that OK?)

Yudi smiled to himself, shocked at Munna sticking up for him instead of his didi. "Arre munna… kis ke bhai ho aap? Rani ka.. ya humara? "(Munna..whose bro are you… rani's or mine?)

"Kuch hi dino mein.. hum aap ka bhai bhi banenge….aur oos se bhi zyada yeh hai ke hum dono achche dost hai tho phir hume yeh sab kehne ka haq hai.."(In a few days I'll be your brother too…and even moreso.. we are good friends.. so I have the right to say this)

"Theek hai…aap jaldi se chaliye aur apni didi ko mana lijiye…hum chalte hain munna…." (OK, you quickly go and persuade your didi, I'm going Munna…)Yudi smiled and hung up. He could see signs of the ciy disappearing, and felt himself getting closer and closer, not only to the village, but to Rani too. He smiled, lost in the thoughts of his lady love….when he was suddenly brought back to reality by a harsh bump in the road, and heard a loud hissing noise. Yudi sighed with frustration as Saksham quickly pulled the car to the side of the road, whilst the left hand side of the car has began to sink!!!!

Pulling up, Yudi and Saksham looked at the flat tyre, knowing full well how late they were already. The next few minutes could only be described as chaotic frenzy as the two of them rushed to look for a spare tyre and tools in the beck of the car.

"Kunwarji.. hume lagta hai ke woh naya driver sab samaan Raja saab ki nayi gaadi mein rakh diya….."(Prince.. I think that the new driver put all the things in RS's new car)

Yudi, exasperated, kicked the other tyre of the car, feeling full of stress and anxiety. How much longer would he have to wait to get to Rani?

In the time Yudi and Saksham had been worrying about the car, Munna had managed to run back home from chacha/chachis house. He went to Rani's room to try and pacify her, and found Rani, sitting on the edge of her bed, tears streaming from her eyes.

"Didi aap ro rahi ho?"(Didi…you're crying?)

Rani, startled, immediately looked away and began to wipe her tears .

"Nahi to… aap yaha kyun aaye ho Munna..Jao…chandu ke saath khel na?" (No… why have you come here Munna…go.play with chandu ok?)

'Theek hai..lekin didi… aap jaldi se taayar ho na?"(ok…but didi..get ready quickly ok?)

"Kyun Munna….?"(Why?) Said Rani suspiciously. She had noticed recently that Munna has been very happy, and very secretive ever since Rani had heard about this Doctor who was coming.

"Arrey..humare hone wale jija bas aate honge…Doctor Saab!"(Our would be brother in law will be arriving….Doctor Saab!)

Hearing this, Rani's eyes welled up even more with tears. Munna, seeing this, realized his work was done and decided to go.

"Hum chalte hain.. bahut saara kaam baaki hai…abhi amma ko rasoi mein madat chaiyye aur champa aur chameli ko koi kaam karna nahin aata…Ab didi.. aap ko bas tayyar hona chaiyye..nahin to Amma bahut udaas hongi…." (Im going.. theres a lot of work left yet.. I have to help Ama in the kitchen now.. champa and chameli don't know how to do anything! Now.. You just have to get ready didi…otherwise Amma will be sad…)

Hearing this, Rani decided to agree, and began to get ready. Munna left the room, filled with guilty, but sure that this surprise would be the best that Rani had ever had in her lifetime…

Just over an hour later, Yudi was pacing up and down the roadside waiting anxiously for Saksham to return. He had gone to a garage 15miles away in a passing by truck to make transport arrangements for them, driven by a driver by the name of Bhushan(will not put Sandhu by it..as was the name on his truck.. as he is evil and don't want 2 share my surname with evil maniac truckie!!! hehehehe). Yudi was worried as he should have returned by now. He didn't trust that Bhushan, who looked very dodgy and was quite rude to them when they first asked. Then, thinking that Yudi may give him a reward as he is royal, he gave in. Yudi however, was not prepared to do so! Yudi was restless, wondering how Rani must be feeling. At that moment, Yudi felt his phone vibrating in his pocket. Taking out, he glanced at the screen to see who it was – Munna.

"Kya baat hai Munna?" Yudi asked, frowning(Whats the matter?)

"Dost aap kahaan hoon?" (Dost..where are you?)

"Abhi. Hamara gaadi nahi chal raha hai..Saksham kisi garage se kisi aur gaadi ka intzaam karke aate honge…"(Our cars not working at the moment.. Saksham has gont to some garage to make arrangements for a car…he'll be coming any minute now…)

"Aap jaldi kijiye Kunwarji… Rani……" (Come quickly Prince… Rani….)Munna paused, not sure whether to tell Yudi.

"Munna…Rani? Kuch hua to nahin na..?"(Munna… Rani? Nothing's happened has it?)

"Hum kya kahe…. Hum ek ghante pehle Didi ke saath baatein kar rahe the….pata nahi.. woh kahaa gayab ho gayi…Amma aur dadi ko is ke bare mein abhi to pata bhi nahin hai…Hum aur chandu ne inhe dhoondne ki koshish bahut kit hi… par voh mili nahi…bahut udaas thi woh.. pata nahin woh kya karegi….." (What can I say… just opne house ago I was talking with her… I don't know where she has gone… amma and dadi don't even know about this…me and chandu tried a lot to find her…but could find her..she was very sad.. I don't know what she will do…)

Yudi's heartbeat began to quicken..worried he wondered where she could be..what state she could be in…He felt physically sick at the thought of what his prank was doing to his love…. At that point he spotted Saksham walking towards him, behind were two men following with bikes.

"Kunwarji…yeh mechanics humein apne bikes de rahe hai.. aur woh gaadi ko tek karke ussa vapas mehel tak chod denge,……"(Kunwarji…these mechanics are giving us their bikes.. and they will drop car to mehel after fixing it.)

"Theek hai Saksham"(okies saks) said UD, his attention turning to Munna who was still on the phone.

'Humein pata hai ki Rani kaha hongi…hum isse dhoondenge…aap fikar mat kijiye….aur amma aur dadi se kuch mat kayega..theek hai ?" (I know where Rani will be…I'll find her….dont worry… and don't say anything to amma and dadi..ok?)

Hanging up the phone with his heart beating rapidly against his ribcage…Yudi climbed onto his bike, told Saksham where to meet him and sped into the distance…

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Posted: 17 years ago
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jaz loved it, waiting eagerly for the next part!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jaz my heart is in my mouth yaar!!!
omg! get going with the next part!!!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heheh its written and just needs to be amended!!!!!!
precap - FIGHT!!!!!
but doNt worry... u will love it..I HOPE......
jaz xxxx

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