JAZ'S FF-NEW PART 15, PG 27, 10 APRIL!!!

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#41

oh hun loving it!!! wonderful. I really like the way yudi is standing up to his father but not being disrespectful. Just slowly revealing to him the errors of his ways. i really hope we see something similar in the show.

And Raja wondering why his princess bahu cannot be more like a naukrani!! love it - my idea of poetic justice!

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js452

@js452

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#42

thankyou!!! i didnt want him to be disrespectful to rs coz that would be TOTALLY outa character.... so decided to so it in a more respectful and subtle way which makes RS think....

btw that part was only 3 pages or my trustee notebook... ive got like 6 pages written already for the next part :P should be good i hope! jaz xxx

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beena

@bsingapury

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#43

wow jaz

that's fantastic i love the way you have given hints about rani's goodness

and that made RS think about rani ..........i love the way yudi without attacking RS made him realised that how much rani is worthy

waiting for next part

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js452

@js452

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#44

thankuuu beena!! will hopefully be typing it up today...aaj meri boss kaam nahi kar rahi hain tho mujhe waqt milega!!!!!!!!

tc jaz xxxx

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Vardah

@vardah23

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#45

yothts rely nice rite more quickly pleaseeeee

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js452

@js452

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#46

am writing as quick as i can for ya!!!!!!!

take care jaz xxx

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Jaz post something to get us through the weekend.

Not even a cute YuRa moment we can watch over and over again from this weeks epis😭

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js452

@js452

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#48

hawwwww...dnt b saddd rakhie!!!

i promise.... next part will have so much yudi, and probably the most passionate yura scene in this ff so far...lol ive only had1 other yura scene when riting ff so i hope this is gd...... :)

will post it up soon!!! jaz xxx

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Eesha Salman

@***eesha***

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#49

veryyyyy creative!!!!

wowwowowow!!!

just so awesomely cute!!!!

luvin it!!! keep it up!!!!

lollololol!!!

just gr8 awesome wowza!!!!

2 million thumbs up!!!!

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Silvergirl

@Silvergirl

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#50

I love the story so far, even though i don't understand hindi, i kind of know what's happening. waiting for the next part, great job. Full appreciation to everyone who works hard on these write ups to keep us yura fans entertained. very much appreciate it.

Edited by Silvergirl - 17 years ago

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