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Hi guys, was reading the amazing FF on this forum and felt soo guilty to be relying on everyone else to provide great YuRa stories....so I decided to have a go at doing it myself... i must say... i realise now, after writing this, how long it takes for one story and so wanna thank all the yura fans who spent so long giving us reading pleasure with their great kahaani's!... ...FORGIVE ME for my hindi.... ive only learnt it from watching tv serials(i speak punjabi at home) so its not that great!
tell me what you think guys! i know its not 2 good! but its a way to pass time between waiting for mondays epi!!!!
Be honest guys and i reallly hope you enjoy...pt 2 coming soon!!(ouch my fingers have cramp from all this typing!!!!)
Jaz xxxxxx
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Part One

It was early morning and Rani was sitting in her room, restless. Yudi had told her he was coming to meet her, to talk about their sagai which was happening the next day, but she wasn?t restless because of this. It was her dadi?s birthday, and Rani wished that she could leave the mehel for just one day, to see how her dadi was and make dadi her favourite meal for her birthday, as she did every year.

She walked over to her dressing table, and sitting in front of it, picked up a photo of her Dadi. Looking down at it, tears came to her eyes😭, tears of worry for her dadi and of guilt, for not having visited or spoken to her in such a long time. Unbeknown to her, all this time UD was standing behind the drapes by her door, watching her intently, anxious to know what was making her cry.. 😕

Rani continue to stroke the picture. ?Dadi?hume maaf kijiye, aaj aap ke jamadin hai?.aur hum vaha bhi nahi aa sakthe hain?aap to janti hai har saal main aap ki liye aap ka manpasand khana banati hoon?aap ko apni haathon se khilati hoon. Lekin hum kya kare? Aap to jaanti bhi nahi hai ke hamara majboori kya hi. Aap nahi jaanti ke Kunwarji mujhse bahut pyaar karte hain, mujhse shaadi karna chahte hain, aur woh yeh bhi chahte ki hamari sagai jaald se jaald ho jaye?is liye hum aaj aa nahi paye?.abh oonka tho haq hai mujhpe. Aap jaante hai, hamare pyaar ke liye, Kunwar Yudhistir tho poore samaaj, raj parivaar, yaha thak ke apne pitaji ke khilaf jaane ke liye tayar the. Kitna parva karte hai hamare liye?..?😊

UD, upon hearing his name, smiled. It was the first time Rani had dared to say his name aloud, and UD wished she would only do so more often.

Rani continued ?Hum to khush naseeb hain ke hume kunwarji mile, hum to inke layek hai nahi?.?😕

?Bas Rani!?

UD?s voice sent shivers down Rani?s spine. She never thought that just saying 2 words could show just how somebody felt, yet she could feel the pain and frustration that UD was feeling. She stayed sitting, frozen by shock, only daring to look at UD through the mirror.

?Aap ko pata hai Rani, mere naam aap ke hoton pe sun kar, mujhe bahut achcha laga.?

Hearing this, Rani smiles shyly, blushing furiously as she never realized he had heard. He moved closer towards her and stood behind her, looking at her through her mirror, his hands resting gently on her shoulder.

?Magar mujhe bilkul achcha nahin lagaa jab aap keh rahi thi ke aap mere layek hai nahi. Are, hume hamesha lagta hai ke bhagwan ne mujhe bahut ziyada diye hain. Haan, hum mante hai ke hum kunwar hai.. par aap ke saamne hum to kuch bhi nahi hain. Aap mere liye ek mamooli naukrani nahi hai. Aap tho devi hai, devi, jo hume aur humare maa ka bahut khayal rakti hai.👏 Aaj se aap aise baate nahi karenge? Theek hai ? ?

Rani turned and stood up, nervously looking down at the floor.?hume maaf kijiye kunwar ji..hum?..woh?..?

Yudi placed one hand on her arm, and held her petite face in his one hand, raising it up so that she looked directly at him. ?Bas rani?jab hamara itna gehra rishta hain? to aap maafi kyun maang rahi ho?(KYUN?KYUN?KYUN !!!LOOL) Aur ek baat, jaha thak hamare sagai ka sawal hai, tho voh hum baad mein kar sakthe hai. Yeh zaroori nahi hain ki sagai kal ho, aap ko dadiji ki janamdin oonke saat bitaani chahiye. Hum bhi aate hai aap ke saath, aur phir hum aap ke gharwale ko bhi mil sakthe hain.?⭐️

Rani looked at him, suprised, and before she could stop herself, she found herself refusing him. ?Nahi Kunwarji?😲

?Kyun ? Kya hum bhi aap ke parivaar ka hisa nahi hain ?? 😊Yudi looked at her cheekily, with the same secretive smile on his face that usually made Rani?s heart skip a beat, however today this wasn?t working, Rani was too anxious to look at him. ?Ab aap kya soch rahe hai?aap kyun itni pareshaan lag rahe hain??

Rani, feeling guilty for having refused so quickly, tried to explain why she did so. She didn?t want the prince to think she didn?t want him there. In fact she couldn?t think of anything she would like more, but she needed to speak to her family alone, before introducing them to Yudi. ?Kunwarji, aisi koi baat nahi hai. Baat yeh hai ki amma aur dadi ko pata bhi nahi hai ke hum dono ke beech kuch hain. Oonko abhi thak maloom nahi hai ke hum is mehel mein kaam kar rahe the?

Her eyes began to fill with tears again😭, thinking of her dadi?s illness. Yudi took hold of rani?s arm and sat her down on her bed, sat down beside her, and turned her face round to face his. With tears appearing in his own eyes, he began to wipe the tears from Rani?s eyes. Every tear she shed, was like a knife being plunged into his heart, every time she was sad, Yudi felt as if all the light in the world had disappeared and there was only darkness. He couldn?t bear to see her like this, and wanted to share her pain. ?Kya? Tho phir kis kaam ke liye bheja aap ko??

Rani looked over at him, and saw his reddened eyes. Her heart sank as she realized that her sadness was having such an effect on him. Putting a small mile on her face, she began to tell him how she became a naukrani. ?Woh kya hain, hum paatshala mein sabse hoshiar student(sorry..dnt know word!) thi, aur mere guruji ne baat ki the amma se. Amma se keh raha tha ke mujhe sher bhejna chahiye tha ki hum apne padai ek achchi college mein kar sake. Is liye, Amma ne mujhe CR ke saath bheja tha?.?

Yudi looked at her surprised. Choti Rani had always treated her like a servant. She had never mentioned once that Rani was here to study. Yudi wanted to know more, as to why Rani had to face some much injustice😡.?Kya? Tho phir Choti ma ne aapko college jaane nahi diya ? Aur aap chupchaap ek naukrani bangayi ??

Rani, feeling guilty, decided not to tell him the absolute truth. She didn?t want Yudi to think badly of CR, especially after all she had done for them. ?Nahi kunwarji?aisi koi baat nahi hai. Hum to mehel chhod ne ke thayar the kyunki hume college mein admission nahi mila. Magar, chachaji, munshiji ke saath mehel aaye the. Aur mujhe batane lage ki dadiji ki tabiyat theek nahi the, aur humare samne haath jodh kar, hume kaam karne ke liye manga tha, tha ki dadiji ke treatment ke liye hum paise de sake. Tho is liye hum naukrani ban gaye the. Khair?. Yeh sab baatein chodhte hain? abhi BR ko dawai dene ka waqt ho gaya hai??

Rani got up from the bed, and went to leave, when she felt her dupatta being pulled. She turned to see yudi cheekily keeping the end of her dupatta under his leg so she couldn?t move.😊 👏He smiled and got up, standing in front of her with his hands together.

.?hume maaf kijiye rani..aap to humare baare mein sab kuch jaante hain. Hum bahut sharminda hain..humein yeh bhi pata nahi tha keh aap yaha padai karne ke liye aayi thi?

Rani placed her left hand on Yudi?s right shoulder, giving it a gentle but reassuring squeeze, and held his left hand in her right. Resting her head on the left side of his chest so he wouldn?t see her blushing😳, she whispered ?Bas Kunwar Yudhistir?ab jab hamara itna gehra rishta hain? to aap maafi kyun maang rahe hain?😆😉

Yudi smiled😃 and thought to himself how lucky he was to have someone so gentle, caring and beautiful in his life. ?Tho hum abhi aap ki jaane ke liye intazaam karte hai. Munna bhi aap ke saath chalega??

Rani nodded, looking up at Yudi.?Ji kunwarji?.. par isse manana bahut mushkil hoga. Woh to mehel chhod ne ke liye thayar nahin honge, magar isse jaana padega. Yahaa oonka khayal rakhne ne liye kaun hai??:😕

Yudi looked down at her lovingly, stroking her open hair. ?Main hoon na. woh humare saath kuch dino ke liye reh saktha hai. Humare room mein? Agar aap ko koi aitraaz nahin hai??

Rani looked up at him, and felt she could never love him more than she did at that moment. Yudi could see from her eyes she was trying to thank him, for caring for her and her family. ?Nahin ?humein koi aitraaz nahin hai?par oosko aana chahiye. Akhir aaj dadi ki janamdin hai?

?Aap bilkul teek keh rahi hai Rani??

Just then they heard someone approaching the room, and turned to see Munna running in?.

?DIDI!! DIDI!! AAJ TO DADI KA?.?

Munna was shocked to see them both together like this ?Kunwarji .. aap? Yaha??

Rani looked at his shocked😲 but smiling little face and began to explain ?Haan munna, Kunwarji tho humse baat karne aaye the kyunke hum gaaon vapas jaa rahe hain, dadi ke janamdin ke liye.?

Munna stormed over and sat on the bed, with his arms crossed, sulking. Rani was about to go and sit next to him, and explain when she felt Yudi?s hand on her shoulder. Without saying a word, Rani understood and watched the scene, whilst packing her things, with her heart beating like mad, as Yudi sat on the bed next to him and started whispering quietly with him, trying to convince him to go? After 5 minutes of talking, Rani watched Munnas eyes widen as Yudi spoke with him, his nod of approval and smiles as she saw Munna run to his books, take out a piece of paper and gave it to Yudi, who wrote something and put it in Munna?s pocket.😆

Confused, Rani tried to see what it was these two boys were doing secretly. But Yudi had explained to Munna not to let Rani find this letter with his instructions in it. Without Munna saying another word, Yudi got up and, holding Munna?s hand, moved towards the door.

He turned around to see Rani fixed to the spot, totally baffled. Grabbing onto the suitcase with his free hand, he gave Rani another one of his secretive smiles😊?..'Tho? Hum Chale??????😉

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soooooo...WHAT DO YOU ALLLL THINK??? HONESTLY!!!!!

TC XXX

Edited by jazzybabes7 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi jazz it's excellent start and wanna read some more............i have overlooked it and it's seems really wonderfull i will read one more time peacefully and than write my views in detain.............
keep it up .and ya thnaks for writing atleast we can pass our time with some more dream
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Beautifully written 👏👏 do continue.

Hopefully we will see moments like this between ud and rani ,they both look so cute together,quite frankly i can picture what u have written ,soooooooooooo sweet !
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww thanks you for lovelllly comments you guys.... 🤗😃
it was SOOO hard 2 write... i didnt know where to start! but it made me realy appreciate how much time you guys(esp beena and rakhie who work on ff on a v regular basis 4 us) put in 2 these GREAT stories....
hope it is 2 alls liking.. will hopefully finish second part sooon!!! jaz xxxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Jaz, great job👏 Dont stop now....I want to know what he wrote....😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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:P thanks!!!!! lool i will write is as soon as poss..... as for what he wrote.. i dont even know yet!!! well i have an idea... :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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jaz that was really good!!👏 beena and I both are grateful for your appreciation. it's lovely to see so many people inspired to write!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow jaz, keep going!
nice one!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsome jazz..please continue...

we waiting for wht yudi wrote in the paper..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok now i read it whole again but peacefully and wow jazz it's really ery nice i can see them..............and love the way they care for eachother and yudi feeling happy that rani took his name and yudi feeling hurt that rani came here to study..........and ya what did yudi wrote in letter........really won't to know........yaar please continue
and yes we are grateful and happy and delighted that more people coming forward with wonderful ideas..............as it is really amezing to see how many different way story can go...........excellent

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