AsYA SS: Mind Of Mine [CH 1- 23/06/17] - Page 2

Originally posted by: GorgeousSmile

WOW!!

Awesome!!

Different concept!!

Loved it!!

Nice part!!

Totally enjoying a lot!!

Coming to the ss,

Asad & Gaffur's behavior - don't seem they did!! Ayan could be the one!!😳

Or Asad himself to play games with Zoya!!😕

Update Soon & pm me!!😊

will read whenever would get time, in case I am going to be inactive for some months maybe!!

Don't kick me out of your pm list!!😳

Well thanks:) I like mysteries actually!
Well Ayaan is is Zoya's partner, why would he do that? And Tanveer pretty looked shocked herself so who's the player?😉
keep thinking!

yeah wont take you down, no worries😳

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Happy to see you back with new story...though disappointed about other stories...but hope you will continue after some time...

yeah I hope so too:)

And it seems so much interesting!!!

I wonder who is behind it... The sense of mystery and Asad's seven days challenge...m sure gonna be interesting read!!!

waiting to read more...continue soon...

yeah it would be a cool read, stay tuned:)

Thanks for the comment🤗

Originally posted by: Minahil_Hanjra

Wow!

Lovely story!

I think it is Ayaan who is lying!

Loved the update!

Pm me the next time!

Cont. soon!

Thanks for the comment:) Lets see who is lying!
Will surely PM:)😊

Unres
Interesting prologue.
Nd Asad is smitten by zoya, his half bro's Gf.
Already hating tanveer.
I think Ayaan is lying .
Beautifully written.
Plz add me in pm list .
Ps: try to update ur other pending stories too.

looking forward to this story

Luv the story...sooo much
I Luv ths Asad, like very intense character...
even though there is not so much ASYA scnes, ur writing through them shows the amazng chemistry...sparky one !!!!
waiting fr the nxt update...

Interesting Start Sans... 👏

Continue soonish

The concept is super interesting

Hello stranger
Sad sad sad was looking forward for all your stories
Breathe I think you should keep it positive and hot
Keep asya togerher and let rhem work with thier marriage and life
And I asad wasnt ready for marriage but his actions made him take this step
And he loves zoya immensely so I think they should be each other strength and support in their career and life
Plz dont forget fobidden love 2
I wish u pick up back and continue all ur stoeies
Wow loving this new concept
So plain Jane zoya got her project handed to the wicked step sister tanveer
Asad and his half bro gf has some awesome sparks and her half sis has the hots for asad
Dont think ayan is all lovey bro in this
But didnt gaffur confirm back the decision wth asad
So who is playing dirty and asad want 7 dys to prove he didnt want tht
Waiti ng for more pm.

interesting start