AsYA SS: Mind Of Mine [CH 1- 23/06/17] - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Just went through your profile!!
You're 19 soon?!😲
But your writing skill..thinkings seems higher level!!👏
Good Job! Keep it up!!👍🏼

Looking forward to your other stories when I'll get time!!😊
Please continue them also na...please!!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update...
Curious to know who's really behind it...
Wanna read some more but wen will u update da nxt part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for comments guys<3
Will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Abtak nhi Update kiya😭
I was waiting for so many days😭😭
Sirf "Chapter 2" likh kar khali rakh diya😭Not good!!

But do update soon!!😛
I'll read once I come back!😉No other option!!😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Will update next :)
Edited by misanthropist. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2⭐️

"What's your plan Asad? Zoya stormed into Asad's cabin not noticing her sister already there. Tanveer immediately narrowed her brows not understanding anything, Asad smiled

"My plan is to take you on a dinner date! Zoya's jaw dropped, here she was really hoping that something came out of this deal but looked like everybody just wanted to pin her down and not let her grow! She was mad at herself for accepting being just an assistant of the project she was supposed to head... While Tanveer turned bright red in anger to see Asad flirting with Zoya when she is the one who is trying to impress him since so long.

"Asad call me if you need me. Tanveer rose up from her seat to leave out of frustration but Asad stopped

"No actually, I've got something to discuss with you! he said making Tanveer take her seat again and turned to Zoya, "We'll meet later babe! saying he seductively caressed Zoya's hair before she left in utter confusion. Zoya left the office-room, her heart wasn't in its correct rhythm, it seemed that it was running miles per minute... she was highly uncomfortable especially near to the south! It was unfathomable yet chilling.

It wasn't much time later when Tanveer came out of Asad's cabin all pale, she looked distressed and why wouldn't she be? It seemed that now the apple had gotten it's way to her head making her invent that heading a project wasn't just any work! Asad had stacked her with jobs and deadlines and not knowing anything to be done Tanveer panicked. To the world she was always helping Zoya but the reality was as soon as they exited office for work Tanveer suddenly had to go away due to an emergency!

Zoya tossed and twirled on her bed, she didn't know what was happening to her? Was it all justified to be taken off a project just because she hid her boobs and didn't tighten her ass while walking in heels?! How could painting face with makeup be a qualification to be assigned as a head? She didn't want to cry even if her heart was screaming for it... Zoya was very different when it came to getting over anything, overly she seemed fine and unaffected but nobody could find the reason why she took more than half hour in the washroom, her father even misinterpreted her action for constipation but the girl never once spoke her mind! Except Najma she didn't even had any friends, she began dating Ayaan only under peer pressure, Ayaan was cool with it since Zoya was from a rich family and she never played a nosy bitch his previous girlfriends were infact she never really cared, not that she didn't want to look stylish or be a centre of attraction she carved affection but always felt maligned like nobody cared for her! Once she felt that people like studious kids so she pretended being a nerd, mugged up answers and score good and everyone did see her as a bright student but she never became the star! She saw her classmates really liked the one who would make fun of themselves and make other laugh but Zoya never tried it thinking it would tarnish her image in front of teachers, her parents were never her best friends so in turn she kept everything inside her and as a result never had friends because she never was her true self, actually she didn't know how she actually was! Her head was a mess she lived in her own little world where everything was fine, she was moody, clumsy, attractive, had a best friend who wouldn't judge her and was a leader where she couldn't be anything such out of her own mind she was everything inside her own mind. This doesn't mean she was a cracked nut! She was intelligent and had everything up to date... Complex huh? I know! Actually accepting Asad's seven days challenge was the first thing she did for herself what she would do inside her mind, she really wanted to know how it works outside! But now she very much doubted her decision... did Asad Ahmed Khan really deserve it?

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Both chapters are really very nice

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