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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Ami Ami Ami

Tumi Tumi Tumi 😆

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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Giving chance a chance. Wow. Now this is a story to be read and cherished and felt good about. I liked the concept. As well as the characters and Asad's kashmakash. And everything then onwards... I liked it all all and all. Wonderful TS worth the wait. Now please update and write some more ❤️

Thank you for liking the concept.

You know I was stuck from story line POV. I mean how many variations one can have if it is straightforward love story.

Boy meets girl and they fall in love (Heartbeat Warfare, ZPAD)

There is a break in love and then it is rekindled (Somewhere in Time, It happened one night)

(The Sun has Set is a very different genre)

So, I was wondering what else to write, so I have been having experimental thoughts - if I may say messier side of love - lost chances, wrong timing, one sided love, I love you but I don't like you (this one is so complicated) and I want to explore all of these themes now. Let's see what comes out of my keyboard.

Thanks for being there, always!

Edited by Noe123 - 8 years ago

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Noe123

Thank you so much.😊

And, Heartbeat Warfare - I am honoured. Love that the story gets keeps surprising me even now.

Thank you for being here with the new story and hope to find you in other threads, too.

Thanks for the reply. What are the other threads. Can you post the links to your other threads?

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Wow...it was awesome...

full of asya... intense feelings...

Left a warm fuzzy feeling in readers...

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Hi!!!!!

So I logged in after a looonggg time and the first thing I saw was your two shot😳

Its been ages since I read any stories at all.

I was following your last ff 'the sun has set' but then I got busy and lost track of everything. Even the other ffs I was following...I dont remember anything about them🤔

A couple of months ago i tried to read the latest update of sun has set but I had to start from chapter 1😆

Comming to this one ...Asad the collector

And did he just tell her thatvhe loved her😲Just like that??????so easily😲

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Very beautiful writing as always but I didn't receive any pm for this just saw the link while searching for your stories update

Hope to receive pm of your updates😊

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

For someone like myself, whose lost touch with the forum and ASYA, this was a refreshing read!

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

A Beautiful Story ...!!!

Really Loved It ...!!!

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Wrong story! 😳

Edited by Noe123 - 8 years ago

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#50

I just came across this ts. It's so nice :)
haha 1st year yad aa gaya mujhe apna. Lathe machine and super seniors coming to help. And the things seniors would ask you to do at freshers party lol.

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