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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Yayayayyaya omg omg omg...

Look who is back and how...😃😃😛

I'm so so so glad to have you back really..

And I'm so glad that u r back here for completing what u have left behind.

This was such a refreshing and nice story.

Enjoyed reading it and ye last line from asad and I loved you was oye hoye..

Once again your love for details and perfection quite admiring..

Can't wait for Wednesday already.

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

U surprise us
So zoya met asad while on vacay
They went to school together
And he was in love with her
Tht is y all the emotions
Cont

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LuvurselF

@LuvurselF

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Nice
Loved it .
Continue soon

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Nice start dear
Glad to see you back. Hope you are well.

She was on trekking & Asad was there as well in guesthouse. He is collector. Liked their convo during dinner. Waiting for second part eagerly.

Plz update your other stories as well if you get chance.

Thanks

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Saw ur pm... And u knw whati was getting a feel that u hav left d forum... And d story ofcourse is superb and am already waiting for nxt part. I still read ur other ff s... The completed ones... Heartbeat warfare is one of my favorites...I read it wen I get sm tym and relax...

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Natalya Bedi

@Natalya_bedi

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Hey...
such a nice ss...
Asad Zoya were in the same college ...this makes it all the more special ...
Looking forward to another update...

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Glad to read your work again.

I am a great fan of yours and love Heartbeat warfare.

I lost count of the no.of times I read and reread.

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

I love how you just clearly stated how this place didn't exist and not to search for your own Asad

😛

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Mountains, pines, Dhanaulti, trekking, dak bangla 🤗

I can almost smell the air, taste the food, feel the warmth and see Zoya and Asad. It is a slice of pure, refreshing, cool and breezy storytelling. I am almost protesting against the two shot limit, I never do this, but I feel cheated and how can you stop at this, more daal???????😛😆😆

No daal waal, ye, isse pehle jo kaha uska kya 😲

What a beautiful getaway, it feels like my vacation too. Right here, in this story. Your writing has all the charms and pull, as always, just the way the eyes say it all, that part just stood still, not daring to breathe or break the spell. Moments created, cherished, and held together with emotions in Asad, while Zo living in the moment, fishing for straws of leftover memories? Meanwhile me as a reader, drawn in, hook, line and sinker...😳

I cannot wait to read the next part.

So wonderful to see you back and to read your stories again 🤗

Edited by Ankahee - 8 years ago