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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4N0wcIKDHU8[/YOUTUBE]

I always struggle with YouTube links 😡

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Noe123

@Noe123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice..

Thanks 😊

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Giving chance a chance. Wow. Now this is a story to be read and cherished and felt good about. I liked the concept. As well as the characters and Asad's kashmakash. And everything then onwards... I liked it all all and all. Wonderful TS worth the wait. Now please update and write some more ❤️

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

This was worth the wait..

Awww asad the cutie pie

Loved him so much here..

Loved his kashmakash

I must applaud u for all the efforts you took to make it as geographically and realistic as possible.

Even if u wouldn't have we would have passed it on as creative liberty

But this shows the quality of a dedicated author.

I liked the straightforwardness both of them showed here in their q n a

But I felt the end was rushed and one scene needed to be added like the realization of Zoya remembering him and she proposing to him on behalf of her friend.

Wanted to know how she would react now.

P.S. I have not seen fanny so dint quite get the reference but it's ok.

And P.S.S. noting related to this story but whenever I see Aisha on tv I feel nah not at all deserving as compared to ZPAD.

Now that this is done with please kripa kare and continue with the incomplete ones.

And also u r free to give us such shocks in between.

Tc and don't just disappear again..

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Beautiful work!!

Loved it

A brilliant effort and loved how you presented Asad's inner battle.

He gradually concluded he still carry that flame for her and the confession of have fallen in love with her all over again was truly beautifully penned!

He confessed his past love to get the closure and to redeem his regret but it paved way for his love story!

A sweet story and definitely could bring a smile on our face!

Keep Writing!

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LuvurselF

@LuvurselF

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Res for me,maina,shwetu di,dillu di .

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potternerd

@potternerd

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Wow Noe!!!! Your writing has got me back to IF after a very very long time!!!

I'm really glad there's someone still writing about ASYA

This two shot was such a joy to read bringing back so many memories about the show as well as IF

I'm relieved you decided to write a two shot...I won't have to pine for the episodes 😉

Hope you've been well:)

I'm off to reread Zoya proposes Asad disposes 😳

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Woh actually...reserved 🤗❤️

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Natalya Bedi

@Natalya_bedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

It was a simple and magical story of a second chance which Asad Zoya got co-incidently...
The way Asad after reacted after saying "I loved you" was so so Asad...dropping a bomb and then asking "Daal logi"?
The kashmakash of Asad was shown beautifully. ...
I loved Anwar-Asad in the last scene where Asad got a compliment of being TEZ rofl...and we all expected "Woh actually" and Asad didn't disappoint.

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: --Mirage--
This was totally fresh!
Zoya Farooqui on a trek..!
I loved how she curiously enquired about him to Ramu kaka as well as the little sneak in register.
And met a senior of her whom she can't recollect but who was apparently in love with her..
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'It had been just few seconds but the other pair of eyes had gone though a gamut of emotions; mild surprise, amusement, momentary shock and then blankness.'

The blankness at end? Maybe because of the un-reciprocated love!

"And, I loved you."

That was something!
It is so difficult to confess your present feelings but could just voice it out so effortlessly(may be not much but still relatively) if it was a thing of past!

P.S: What about Navras series? You told you would be completing it.😳

Chapter 1

Thank you. Glad that freshness of surroundings have reached readers.

Most of the questions were answered in second part.

But, the last line of confessing one's love - yes, always difficult, but in this case, the brave man thought he could do it as it was a thing of past but the bravado died at the very next moment.

But it ended well.

Thanks for your comments.😊

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